Student Name: Jimer Plado Agtang

OPMS Course: General

(Academic/
General)

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Writing “1” (Please update this number per module)
Writing Task 1
Feedback: WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain
about the noise from your houselflat. 
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

 explain the reason for the noise

 apologize
 describe what action you will take

Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin you letter as follows:

Dear________________________,

Dear Sir,

I writing an apology for the disturbance that came from my house

yesterday. My room was in need of urgent repair, so I was hired a
carpenter.
I'm sorry about the disturbance that I made to you sir. I did not
expect the sound came out in my house that reach in your house.
The solution that I made, I decided to continue the reparation of my
house when you are out in your house.
Once again I'm extremely sorry about that.
Yours truly,
Jimer
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Writing Task 2
Feedback: WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that children are given too much
free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more
school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples
from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.

As far as I know, I think children are not given enough free time to

much. we should balance the school time and free time. We all
should know that playing is their part of their growing up. And we
should encourage them to take a different kind of sports and not
only computer games or electronic games. It is a healthier lifestyle
and can protect their eyesight. Through sport, children can also
learn to develop their teamwork and develop their skills as well as
their knowledge. Parents should be allowed their children to go on
a field trip because the children gained more knowledge and skills.
Visiting the museum or the beauty of nature will develop their ability
to appreciate nature and imagination.
People should encourage children to feel natural, to enjoy life, even
to waste their time to image. Free time doesn’t mean playing
computer games or watching TV. It means making sense of
interesting things if people can arrange better spare time life for
children. I believe that the result will be an intelligent and well-
balanced child who both excels at school and who will grow into a
well-rounded adult.

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