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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

To
what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol 动名词


the best way 极端不成立法则

Solution 题型 How to do something?

确定话题范围:城市类话题之基础设施建设——道路交通
确定讨论对象:increasing the price of petrol
确定表程度的限定词:the best way

具象思维:more effective measures

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To
what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
剑桥 8Test3
写作任务同上

Increasing the price of petrol 动名词


the best way 极端不成立法则

Solution 题型 How to do something?

确定话题范围:城市类话题之基础设施建设——道路交通
确定讨论对象:increasing the price of petrol
确定表程度的限定词:the best way

第一段:开门见山直接引出讨论,即日益增长的交通及带来的污染问题已经成了较严重的
问题,同时表明观点,即仅仅增加汽油的价格是无法解决问题的。

第二段:让步,指出私家车的使用虽然是问题的关键,但随即表明增加汽油的价格会同时
影响到公共交通,所以不是最佳解决方案,并且引出下文。驳论段

第三段:提出清洁能源的使用是有效的解决方案。立论段一
第四段:更进一步表明增加公共交通工具的选择是更有效的方法。立论段二

第五段:总结文章讨论:长期有效地解决交通及污染问题关键在于鼓励人们要多使用公共
交通工具,并呼吁政府加大对公交系统的建设。

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首段:
How to address the increasing traffic and pollution from vehicles has become severe problems,
both in cities and on motorways everywhere.
Generally, I believe that solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the
price of petrol.

让步段:
While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and
pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long.

While it is undeniable that ..., ... is/are unlikely to alleviate the situation for long. 尽管...肯定起到
作用,但是...不太可能长期缓解这一局势。

As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with
everyone who needs to travel on the roads.

But there are various other measures that could be implemented and that would have a huge
effect on these problems.

be implemented 被执行

be (more) likely to do sth = tend do


be less likely to do sth
be unlikely to do sth

立论段一:
I think to tackle the problem of pollution cleaner fuels need to be developed.

The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and
cleaner to use.

Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective
strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities. 具象思维

立论段二:
However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can
use.

To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers.

For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively
maintained in our major cities, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.

Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to
driving cars for long journeys. 具象思维
结尾段:
In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating
the public to use public transport more and on governments using public money to construct and
run efficient systems.

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