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IELTS Writing Task Two
IELTS Writing Task Two
IELTS Writing Task Two
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g A final issue is that itis very important to make sure that
a ‘Soutione you do not put argument essay language into a discussion
: ‘essay. This is explained more in the notes to the sample.
Conclusion Final Thoughts answer to this discussion essay, which isin Appendix 4
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You can look at the sample discussion essay answer in Appendix 4. However, do not stop there
We still have many tips to “travel”
Part Three: Planning a Mixed Essay
Look at this question.
Work is taking a more important role in people's lives. Why are people working so
‘much? Do you think this trend is good or bad?
uussion essay, but there is also an argument yes!
The question word ‘why’ tells us that this is a dis
ust respond to
no question. It is a ‘mixed’ question: discussion aid argument. As usual, you
ragraph’ model, it is
the question [Tip 3], doing borh parts. If we keep to our standard ‘five-p:
difficult to give an exact balance, but can you use your knowledge from Parts One and Two of
this tip to plan an essay structure?
' Exercise 10
‘Try planning/structuring this question yourself, then compare it to my recommended structuring,
which follows,
Remember, as Tip 3 explains, the important point is that you answer both parts of the question.
this essay in one of the following two ways,
We could do this by organisi
Introduction Background + topic Background + topic
Fest Reason Pe ok one lon Renn People Wor
F—seorwRomonPesion || Opin (GeedBee) + Fit Reason rt
opin cota) + Oe
Second Reason for this,
Main Reason for this
Conclusion Final Thoughts Final Thoughts
Whatever structure you choose, you are answering the question completely, and the paragraphing
is clear and logical, These are both needed in a good IELTS answer. A sample answer to this
“mixed” question is given in Appendix 25.
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A final point is to repeat what was briefly mentioned in Tip I~ that a good piece of writing
must be paragraphed, and that the modern method of paragraphing is to leave fines between
paragraphs. In other words, our writing not only is paragraphed, but /ooks paragraphed.
Final Advice: Think Subject-Specific!
Always remember that your essay reasons, support, and vocabulary are only recognised as
worthwhile if they are ‘subject-specific’, Think about it. If these are nor subject-specific,
they must be weak, irrelevant, and/or memorisation, right? Is that going to impress an IELTS
examiner?
So, make everything topic.
specific, particularly the reasons. As we discussed in the Step 2
Exercise (Answer 2E), reasons need to ‘clearly link to the specific essay question (not just the
general topic)’. For example, if the question asks you whether you think compulsory military
service is usefill or not, and you believe it is, do nor write:
My Response
The military provides financial benefits, "So what! | can get financial
benefits in any job!
or
My Response
The military helps servicemen become fi
"Yeah, yeah, but | can get fit at @ gym!"
Think! Would these reasons make you join the military? As my respon:
to write reasons which apply to the military and nowhere else. Thus, .
's show, NO! You need
The military provides the youth with a
range of immediate rewards, which
cannot be found elsewhere.
My Response
‘Wow! | never thought of that.”
or
‘The military instills in the youth a range
of personal attributes, which few other
jobs can equal.
My Response
“I'm joining up, NOW!
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Write in Formal Style
Part One: The Need for Formality
~” Exercise 11
Let us now start with a sample essay. It is based on the “banning cars’ question and planning we
did in the previous tip. The following essay has some good points. These points are:
1. an opinion is given, and it is on the topic and on the task,
2. the second and third paragraph both begin with clear topic sentences,
3. these topic sentences are short, to the point, and clearly show reasons,
4, these reasons logically support the opinion in the first paragraph,
5. the essay organisation, by following the model we discussed, is clear,
6. the essay is grammatically correct.
So, there are many good points; however, the italicised parts show that in one very important
way, the essay is nor well-written
1. What is the major problem with this essay?
2. How can you fix it?
Banning Cars Essay
We have got more cars than ever on the roads, e.g. in city centres. It’s pretty much like this
everywhere. Anyhow, although it’s lke this, | reckon that cars shouldn't be banned from city centres,
Dou agree?
Firstly, itd be impractical. It'd be like paying $300 per person. It'd cause us too many problems, e.g.
during the rush hour. In the rush hour, you've got to be able to get to all things, that’s for sure. This is
‘even things in city centres etc.
‘Secondly, i'd be far too unpopular. There are lots of cars on the roads. All of us, even kids, like cars a
Jot. They are No.1. We have got really caught up on cars, like taxis, truck etc. The number of cars is
gonna get greater every year. We can't choose any thing anymore. We must sort of put up with cars.The corrected essay is shown at the end of this tip.
Tip 7 is that we should write formally. This means we should try not to use:
* informal words, such as ‘reckon’, ‘a lot of', and ‘lots’, includi
slang/colloquialisms such
as ‘No.1’ or ‘wanna’,
+ general, common, or less defined words, such as ‘get’ or ‘thing
+ informal grammar, such as first person plural pronouns [‘we' and ‘us'], the second person
pronoun ['you]], ‘have got’, ‘pretty’ as an intensifier, and ‘ike as a preposition,
+ spoken English phrases, such as ‘anyhow’, ‘that's for sure’, ‘maybe’ and ‘gonna’,
+ abbreviations, such as ‘eg’, and ‘etc’
+ multiple-word verbs, such as ‘caught up on’ and ‘put up with’ (which can usually be
replaced with a more formal single word),
+ figures, such as $300, since itis your words that will make your message strong, and
amounts are too changeable, too subjective in value, too dependent on time and place,
and do not make a point clearly or with style.
How do we know all this? Well, you are writing an essay (not a letter, postcard, or email) on a
serious topic to an “op id the word ‘appropriate’ is used several times in the public
version of the IELTS band descriptors, as well as the words ‘style’, “flexibility”, and ‘collocation’
[ = putting words together well]. But mostly, formal grammar/words results in a greater range
of these aspects. Look at the IELTS band descriptors at the beginning of Tip 11 to see how
audience,
important this is
It is also better not to use contractions; that is, do not join two words into one word with an
apostrophe ~ for example, “will” and ‘not’ into ‘won't’. These are only counted as one word. The
full form is two words, helping us to reach the required number of words in a quicker time.
So, formality gives us the necessary style, range, and flexibility for higher IELTS vocabulary
It gives us so many advantages that we need to do some exercises.
Part Two: Some Specific Hints
Hint 1: The Use of ‘Get’
Let us first look at the verb ‘get’, It is a very useful verb because it can have many meanings.
These meanings are almost always about change. For example, a change in position (‘get over
here’ and “get away’), in thinking (‘get serious’ and “get real”), in social position, often in aWriting Task Two
passive voice (“get rich’, ‘get control”, “get married”, and “get divon
with violence (“get robbed” and “get hurt’).
ed”), or physical state, often
As a multiple-word verb, “get” has even more meanings. Think about “get on/away/up/over!
through/off/at/into/round”. Well, 1 will not get around to looking at multiple-word verbs, since
we should completely get away from them in IELTS writing or you might ger into trouble, and
if you want to ger through this book, we should get on with it right now so that we can get over
these problems. Do you know what | am getting af?
“Get” has so many meanings that it is used very often, and does not show an ‘attempt to use less
common vocabulary’ [IELTS Seven]. There is usually a more formal and exact word which can
replace i
or we can change the grammar to be more formal, for example, from “get the job done”
to ‘complete the work’. All this gives you a greater ‘range’ and ‘style’ of words/grammar.
1 Exercise 12
In the following table, try to replace “get with a single formal word with the same meaning
Try to change some of the nouns, if appropriate. The answers and some explanations are given in
Appendix 5.
Informal English Appropriate Formal English
‘Get’ as a simple verb
1. Business people often get rich
When he got there, he got all the pieces.
Kids can get their parents to help.
They always get them meals.
Police eventually get most law-breakers.
Most people want to get money.
Many smokers get cancer.
Companies want to get the best people.
Scientists often get the wrong conclusion
Ailliving things need to get food
‘Get’ as a multiple-word verb
11. People lke to get away from cities.
12. He got over the iliness.
2813. Society needs to get rid of waste.
14. Students study hard to get into university
15. Some people get up very early.
Hint 2: The Use of ‘Thing’
‘Thing’ is also a very useful word, with the same flexibility (and commonness) as ‘get’
Replacing this word with a more formal word adds style, precisions, and variety to your writing.
’ Exercise 13
In the following table, try to replace ‘thing’ with a more formal word, or phrasing. The answers
are in Appendix 5.
Informal English Appropriate Formal English
1. People generally ike sweet things,
‘The most surprising thing was that.
Diligence is an essential thing for students.
Universities have many interesting things.
Scientists need to know everything.
o7 kweN
Pollution is a common thing in cities.
7. This is a controversial thing
8. Proponents of cars say many things.
9. The people found the whole thing boring,
10. Technology is a useful thing,
11. _ In school, many things are discussed.
12. _Allliving things need food.
13. Governments need to deal with this thing,
14. People need to protect their things.
15. Criminals usually deny things.
16. The victims could not do anything,
17. The first thing they thought of was.(Unie)
18. People think different things about this.
19. Shops sell many things
20. The thing is that students need to.
Hint 3: The Use of ‘We/Us’ (and ‘You')
You should avoid overusing ‘we’ and ‘us’ (and *you’), since it does not convey “precise
nor help with your range of vocabulary. For example, it is easy to just write *w
meaning
twenty times, as follows:
We. We...
4. are facing an environmental crisis. 11. often avoid taking responsibility for our actions.
2. cannot treat students unequally. 12, naturally think first about benefiting our country
3. _ often inappropriately apply laws. 13. sometimes have to wait for hours to buy goods.
4, are undecided about abortion 14, have found fossil dinosaurs which prove.
5. have the right to fair elections. 45. are often inconvenienced during rush hour.
6. need to acquite knowledge 16. do not usually believe political promises.
7. face a problem with crime. 17. now know human brains are different.
8. have stood on the moon. 18. go to great lengths to catch criminals.
9. are basically good, 19. could be killed by drunken drivers.
10. all need nutrition. 20. often ignore this situation.
but it is obviously better to ‘step out of your essay’, writing instead about ‘they’, using
different words or phrases instead. Looking at the example, “We should ban cars’, the pronoun
‘we’ can also be avoided by using:
Grammar Example
4 a defined collective noun ‘Cities should ban cars.’
2. the passive voice ‘Cars should be banned.”
the structure: ‘Those who [V] Those who decide on traffic policy
or ‘Those [~Jing...’ should ban cars.”
However, the pronoun ‘we’ can, of course, be used at times. Often in the conclusion, it is stylish
to ‘step back into your essay’, and some fixed expression use this word (and the word ‘thing”),
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such as ‘everyshing we have learnt suggests’ or ‘a “ring of the past or ‘the most important ring’,
ow better collocation. Just keep in mind that the chance may exist
and using these phrases can s
for better use of vocabulary (‘the past has shown’,
indered obsolete’, ‘the greatest challenge’)
Hint 4: The Use of ‘etc’ and ‘and so on’
You should avoid using ‘ete’. This can easily be replaced with ‘and so on’; however, you can
be even more stylish. Look at the sentence: “People like chocolate, sweets, and so on’, What are
hocolate’ and “sweets”? What is a general ‘adjective + noun’ combination to describe this class
2) Perhay
or category of objects’ s “fattening food’, or “sugar-based snacks’, or ‘unhealthy fare”
Thus, use the structure:
. Example A, Example B, and other [category of A and B].
giving, three possible answers:
People like chocolate, sweets, and other fattening food.
sugar-based items.
unhealthy fare.
‘Try to use an ‘adjective + noun’ combination, since this makes the sentence more meaningful.
’ Exercise 14
Part One
A. Look at the 20 ‘we’ sentences in Hint 3. Match the following 20 words with the correet
sentence.
A. Allcitizens F, Individuals K. Governments. The relevant authorities
B. Theworld G. Thepolice L. Pedestrians Q. Judicial systems
C. Students H. The public M. Commuters —R._Living organisms
D. Ethicists |. Shoppers. N. Astronauts S.__Palaeontologists
E. Society J. Teachers ©. Humanity T. Scientists
hare not?
B. Which of these sentences are logical, and whi
1, Humans drive cars.
2. Humanity is basically good.Writing Task Two
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10.
‘Human beings want to become rich
Humankind needs to protect the environment.
Human beings have stood on the moon.
This will make a better world for humankind.
. In America, humanity generally earns high salaries.
‘Humankind works mostly during the day.
‘Some animals present a danger to human beings.
Humans like chocolate.
Part Two
In the following examples, try to replace ‘ete’ as advised in this book.
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© enogu
10,
This system can be used in CD players, TVs ete.
This medicine helps the heart, lungs ete.
This results in pollution and deforestation, etc.
Poverty causes unemployment and drug use ete.
They all say this, whether they are ministers or presidents etc,
Students use dictionaries, the Internet etc.
This behaviour is likely to spread influenza, AIDS etc
Drinking can causes fights and arguments etc.
. This machine will enhance bridges, electricity supply ete.
|. The radiation affects the transistors, valves etc,
‘The answers are in Appendix 5Hint 5: The Use of ‘not’
You should try to avoid using ‘bare negatives’, namely, the negative “not” in phrases such as:
not any, no,
.Rotmuch...._ replacing them with: “litle...
“not many...” a fo!
Thus,
Criminals do not have many friends and do not have much hope in life.
is better written as...
Criminals have few friends and little hope in life.
“Few" is for countable nouns [*friends’; ‘little’ is for uncountable nouns [*hope*]. This sounds
more formal with a better style, and allows us to introduce the words “little” and “few”, which are
less commonly used.
Hint 6: Think about Noun Phrases
Firstly, consider the sentence:
| think children attend school is necessary.
The grammar is wrong. Someshing is necessary. We can make ‘children attend schoo!” into a
noun by using the gerd, or ‘ing’ form.
| think children attending school is necessary.
This is fine, but is there a formal noun form that can be used? What is the noun from ‘attend"?
Attendance! Thus
| think schoo/ attendance/attendance at school is necessary.
This is grammatically correct, and the style is much better, Now, consider one of the sentences
we will actually use later:
When people try to park cars in cities, they usually find it difficult.
We can make “to park cars’ into a noun by using the gerund, giving the sentence:
Parking cars in cities is usually difficult.
This new sentence is much shorter, and makes the same point. That is, the sentence is concise,
and concision is a sign of a good writer.
33The use of noun phrases is academic, stylish, and concise, and recognised by the Lexical
immar band descriptors. So, remember the gerund form, and think about
Resource, and the G
formal nouns for some of your verbs. Instead of writing,
People can see litter everywhere. Litter is @ common sight.
We are living longer and longer. aim for Life expectancy is steadily increasing
| This helps the economy develop. Economic development will inevitably follow.
’ Exercise 15
Part One
In the examples, try to re-write “not ...any/much/many’ using a better style.
4, Students do not have much money.
Computers do not have any feelings
Politicians do not show much honesty.
. People often do not have enough time,
Poor people do not know any other way.
When | was young, | did not have many toys.
They did not have much difficulty in the test.
eNOae on
. Some criminals will nof show any compassion.
Part Two
Can you change the following gerund noun phrases into more formal nouns?
1, Regulating business 6. Revealing personal information
2. Removing rubbish 7. Explaining to patients
3. Developing the economy 8. Destroying the environment
4. Preparing for the future 9, Demolishing historic buildings
5. Avoiding responsibility 10. Abolishing capital punishment
In the following senten
the sentences to be more stylish?
. can you change the italicised verb forms into noun forms, re-writing
3411. The economy may stagnate.
12. If we ban cars, it will reduce pollution.
13. When people gamble, it usually causes them to lose money.
14, Mistakes can happen with capital punishment.
15, People need to get more knowledge.
16. If students can commit themselves to study, they will succeed.
17. If the ice melts even slightly, sea levels will ise significantly.
18. Countries need to treat their environment better.
19. Children can learn to be responsible, and this is another reason.
20. Countries need to exploit their environment if they want their economies to grow.
Alll the answers are in Appendix 5.
” Exercise 16
Now, let us put together everything we have learnt, and add a few other points. Complete the
following table, changing the inappropriate informal English (in italics), with formal English
more suitable to IELTS writing. The answers and explanations are given in Appendix 6,
Informal English Appropriate Formal English
1. Once there was not much stuff on the roads
but now we ve got heaps of cars
.g., during rush hour.
These cause problems, lke pollution,
And it makes us as mad as hell
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It’s pretty much the same everywhere
7. reckon it's getting worse every year.
8. Its realy awl, that’s for sure
9. There are lots of cars, trucks, taxis and so on,
10... and their number is sort of going up
11. Sometimes you maybe have 3 cars,
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12. We like them more and more.
13. as well as other material things.
Would people accept pollution if they knew it
14,
would eventually kill them?
15. We really need to develop new things, Use noun
16... and adapt to other conditions, phrases
17. There isn't any other way.
Use a noun
18. since we will just need more cars.
phrase
19, Unless we all do this, there'll be problems,
20 for our kids, too.
Now, let us move back to the short
Remember, we had to make the words and phrasing more formal, It should be easier for you
say on banning cars that we gave in Exercise Il.
now. Try again, and then look at the following sample answer. All the changes are shown in italic
print
There are more cars than ever on the roads ~ for example, in city centres. It is very much the same
‘everywhere. Despite being the same everywhere, | believe that cars should not be banned from city
centres.
Firstly, it would be impractical. The cost would be prohibitive. The inconvenience would be
considerable. For example, during the rush hour. During rush hour, cars certainly need freer access to
all roads. This includes roads in city centres.
Secondly, it would be far too unpopular. There are many cars on the roads. People, even children, like
cars very much. Society has become heavily dependent on cars, such as taxis, trucks, and other forms
of transport. The number of cars will rise every year. There is no choice. Cars simply have to be
accepted.Essay Coherence: Keep on Course
Preliminary
Alright. We now know to write in formal style, but we still have to write an essay so that all the
parts fit together well, or in other words, “cohere’ or show ‘cohesion’. We do this with a variety
of smaller ‘signpost’ and “pointer” words and methods, known as ‘cohesive deviees’. The IELTS
band descriptors are specific about this. The public version says:
Coherence & Cohesion: 2 Makes the sentences and parts fit together
5 6 7
uses cohesive devices uses @ range of cohesive
| makes inadequate, inaccurate effectively, but cohesion within devices appropriately although
or over-use of cohesive devices and/or between sentences may _there may be some under-/
___ be fauity or mechanical over-use
| Extracted from the complete IELTS Writing Task 2 Band Descriptors (publie version).
"This tip, Tip 8, and the next tip, look at ways to make sure that the essay clearly fits together by
“following a clear and straight line of argument,
Hint 1: Signposts
The planning procedure shown in Tip 6 creates an introduction paragraph with a clear opinion,
and three body paragraphs. The first two body paragraphs each have a reason which supports
the opinion in the introduction. In this first tip on essay coherence, we will look at these first two
body paragraphs.
The first two body paragraphs show a reason, and if must be clear to the reader that the
paragraphs are doing this. This is why we need ‘signposts’. So, where do we see signposts? At
the side of the road, right? And what do signposts show? The direction to somewhere, right? We
read signposts to know how to go from Point A to Point B. Signposts in an essay have the same
purpose, showing the reader how to go from the start of your argument to the end.
Better writers make signposts in more interesting ways; however, for the weaker writer, using
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simple and clear signposts is a good idea, and this book will also show this
ple and clear”
model, For example, because there are two of these ‘reason’ paragraphs, the use of Firstly’ and
“Secondly,” seems to be very popular. These terms are fine, if used correctly.
’ Exercise 17
Can you see what is unclear with the ‘Firstly’ and “Secondly” (shown in bold) in our short
“banning cars’ e
yy shown at the end of the previous tip?
The problem with ‘Firstly’ and ‘Secondly’ in the essay is that the reader is not aware of what it
is that is “first” and “second”. Is it the first apple? The first orange? The first banana? What is it
exactly that is first"?
‘The answer to this is that it is the first reason why cars should not be banned from city centres
This fact needs to be made definite and clear to keep your essay “on course’, There are three
methods to make a clearer answer, as follows,
Method 1 (Introducing Reasons First)
‘There are more cars than ever on the roads ~ for example, in city centres. It is very much the
same everywhere, Despite being the same everywhere, | believe that cars should
not be banned from city centres . for these reasons.
. for many/several reasons. [, some of which follow.]*
. and here are some reasons.
. and these are my reasons,
«for the following reasons.
. and my reasons are as follows.
Here are my reasons.
« .
Firstly, it would be impractical. [And so on]
-First of all, | [Subject] + [Verb]
- why city centres should not ban cars
-The second is that it would be far too
reason - for not banning cars in city centres
Another unpopular.
= against banning cars in city centres |
[And so on}elias coeceatanin aia
* This is possible, but do not go too far in the unnecessary use of words, since the introduction needs to be short (and
honest!)
Do not write strange dishonest Muff such as, ‘although the underlying premises on which this is based are
considerably fallacious, but nevertheless, need to be discussed,’ which is most obviously memorised, and would
need much more specific explanation and elaboration in order to make sense.
The e: 22 uses this method.
say in Appendi
Method 2 (Introducing Reasons Second)
There are more cars than ever on the roads — for example, in city centres. It is very much the same
everywhere. Despite being the same everywhere, | believe that
cars should not be banned from city centres.
-Thefirst |
oe reason [for this] is that it would be impractical. [And so on]
The second = why city centres should not ban cars
is that it would be far too
Another | reason for not banning cars in city centres eee
| uf ular.
-Atuther | ~ against banning cars in city centres oo
[And so on]
Both Method 1 and 2, by clear signposting, show what the ‘first’ and ‘second’ refer to. They refer
17 and 20 use this Method 2.
to reasons for not banning cars. The essays in Append
Method 3 (Signposts
Reason Signposts
ih Meaning)
In this method, you just do not use the words ‘Firstly’, ‘Secondly’, ‘One’, ‘Two", or ‘reason’
You just give your reason, repeating the opinion (as always) in Paragraph 3. In this case in
nd clear. You could signpost the first one with a
particular, this reason must be short, simpl
meaningful adverb, or adverbial phrase, such 2(iirc
Signpost Reason
Meaning of Signpost
To begin with, |
To start with, | [1 am beginning now with my reasons.
Fora start,
[Sbj ]*Verb
Clearty, [think the following should be clear to everyone.)
Basically, [This is based on a simple or “basic” idea.]
‘ay in Appendix 23 use this method. The first three
‘The example essay in Exercise 20, and the es
al and ‘safe’,
signposts are gene! nce their meaning is straightforward, The last two signposts
have more specific meanings. If using them, your reasons must be clear to everyone, or very
basic, respectively. This means that you cannot write, for example
Clearly, capital punishment will reduce crime.
or...
Basically, co-education allows the use of specific teaching methods according to the
gender, thus maximising learning opportunities.
.. since the first reason is nof so clear, in fact, many people would disagree with it, while the
second reason
reasons so that they show the qualities of being clearly
previous two examples, we could write:
not based on “basic” ideas at all and is illogical. You might need to re-write these
tual, and basic, respectively. In the
Clearly, capital punishment shows the uncompromising power of justice, which may
well reduce crime.
- and.
Basically, co-education reflects real life, thus providing real-life learning opportunities
in relation to gender interaction.
Non-Reason Signposts
‘The question asks you to “Give reasons for your answer’, so giving reasons in your topic
sentences
the most straightforward way to organise your essay. However, with Method 3, you
could also use ‘non-reason’ signposts to be more original. For example.
40Signpost Point
- benefit
[When giving a good
: Adear - advantage
point of something] is that (Sbj.] + Verb)
= positive
is [Noun]
[When giving a hacd point rf =major —_ | - concern ne
of somethi y main = worry
Be careful here that you do in fact phrase your point as a benefit or worry, This phrasing is not
always the same as a reason, For example:
Signpost Point
Aclear benefit
is that car access is essential to the economic activities of cily centres.
[of not banning cars] ~
The two underlined parts are not the same. The signpost says benefit, but the point ii
The signpost needs to be ‘One reason’, or the point needs to be rewritten to show a benefit. Here
a reason,
are bvo examples.
essential to the
Aolear benefit is that cars can continue to provide access,
economic activities
[of not banning cars]__is the continuing access cars provide,
of city centres.
Whichever method you use, it is best if the shird paragraph repeats the opinion using key words
from the question [The second reason why city centres should not ban cars is ..."]. This is quite
important for two reasons.
1. Mostly, it reminds the reader what the second point supports. This is because the third
paragraph of the essay is some ‘distance’ from the original opinion statement in the first
paragraph, so the reader needs to be reminded what the essay is arguing. Again, this is
just clear signposting,
2. As an additional benefit, it gives you complex sentences/structure. Look at the ‘Gram-
matical Range & Accuracy’ descriptors in Tip 12, Part One, and you will see the impor-
tance of complex structures in your essay.
So, that is nvo benefits at once, making this a very good idea, but the grammar needs to be good,
so let us look at that
4Se ores
Opinion ‘Signpost’ Grammar
We have a choice of two gramma
complex sentence, or a complex noun phrase, as shown below
patterns to re-write the opinion in Paragraph Three: using a |
Signpost Point |
why [opinion clause}
for =is that
- Another :
reason | _ supporting [Sbj. + V].
= point ;
against
~ Afurther ie [opinion noun phrase) «is (N}
[Sbj, {not} [(-)ng] (0b)