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Borrador Outline First Partial
Borrador Outline First Partial
Task: Compare how a specific life situation has changed from the past and present
Look at this paragraph. Correct the mistakes. Identify the topic, topic sentence and supporting details.
Food Habits
When I was a children i ate strawberry ice cream every week. I have an ice cream every week and often I ate my grandma and dad`s
ice cream too. I like it so much because i like color pink and the mix of sweet and a bit of sour flavor My mom sometimes tell me that I
should eat less and the pediatrician saind that I should not eat it often because in my family some relatives has diabetes nowadays, i
rarely eat ice-cream because my sugar levels tends to be high and I am scared of getting diabetes. Currently, I eat plenty of dried fuits
since I like them a lot and have less sugar than ice cream. i sometimes miss eating ice cream so often, however, I learn that not all food
habits must last forever if they are not good for us.
Outline
Name:_______________________________________________Date:_____________________________Class:_____________
1) How often did you have it? 2) Why did you have it/ why did you like it?
Topic sentence:
6) What do other people say about it? 3) Has your food habit changed in the present?
People say that it is good that I have Why?Yes, because now I am better informed
changed my eating habits, also that I look about the correct eating habits.
better and have a better physical condition.
5) Is there any food habit that has 4) How do you feel about your food habit now? Why?
changed it or compliment it? I used to eat fast
food for dinner, now I try to avoid it and eat something
healthier. I feel good, because I know what food is good or
bad for me, in addition to avoiding junk food.