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CÁC CỤM TỪ TỰ NHIÊN GIÚP GHI ĐIỂM TRONG TASK 2
CÁC CỤM TỪ TỰ NHIÊN GIÚP GHI ĐIỂM TRONG TASK 2
CÁC CỤM TỪ TỰ NHIÊN GIÚP GHI ĐIỂM TRONG TASK 2
6. The labour market has become inherently competitive as it is. ( vốn dĩ)
17. Provoke widespread concern regarding: dấy lên mối bận tâm rộng khắp về…
30. Typically but not always: thường nhưng không phải lúc nào cũng vậy
Eg : a bachelor degree holder typically but not always stands a better chance in the
labor market
38. Stress-free/ hassle-free: không phải lo lắng gì, không phức tạp
39. Be attuned to st : quen dần, hòa hợp với
41. Employability : khả năng được tuyển/ khả năng tìm được việc
45. It is the only matter of time before: chỉ còn là vấn đề thời gian trước khi……..( tất
yếu sớm muộn gì cũng sẽ xảy ra)
Of the two inferior contributors, they both produced a modest amount of gas emissions
with 1 billion tonnes discharged. While the data for air pollutants coming from vehicles
hardly showed any change within the whole time frame amounting to its remaining
impact on the environment, residential areas took the least responsibility among four
sectors with a decline to nearly 0,1 million tonnes.
In 1990, air contamination stood out as a concerning problem with a total figure of 7
million tonnes mainly due to the high rate of gas emissions from industrial production
( roughly 5.8 million tonnes). Simultaneously, there was an equal proportion between
discharged emissions from transportation and those from residential areas (1 million
tonnes) as inferior sources before they registered opposite trends since 1993.
Specifically, while the former remained stable, the latter gently decreased onwards.
From 1999-2002, there was a plunge in the total amount of air pollutants except for a
period of stability with 4 million tonnes. Likewise, industrial zones also reduced their
environmental impact to reach a low of 2 million tonnes in 2005, leading to a modest total
figure of 3 million. In the same year, while the data for gas emitted by vehicles remained
the same within the whole time span (1 million tonnes), households took the least
responsibility for air contamination with a dive to nearly 0.1 million tonnes of emitted
gas.
The line graph illustrates three causes of air pollution in the UK within the course of 15
years starting from 1990. Overall, industrial production was the most predominant
domain contributing to the total amount of air pollutants. It is also apparent that the
figure of each source was gradually on the decrease save for that of transport,
amounting to air pollution reduction.
In 1990, Industry took the lead with roughly 5.5 million tonnes of discharged emissions;
however, its figure slumped onwards to reach a low of 2 million tonnes in 2005. Likewise,
the whole period witnessed the same trend for the total figure of three listed culprits.
Specifically, approximately 7 million tonnes was emitted at the beginning before rapidly
diving to its bottom of nearly 3 million tonnes eventually.
In 1924, male athletes constituted the largest part of the total figure (3000) while the
number of female contestants was far less striking with/ outnumbering/ overshadowing/
outweighing females with a negligible figure recorded. Likewise, a similar pattern was
repeated in 1952, but here there was a slight rise in the engagement of female members (
nearly 4500 sports men against around 500 women).
32 years later, the gap between the figures for men and women somewhat narrowed with
just above 5000 for men and about 1600 female competitors partaking. Even though men
continued surpassing their opposite gender contestants in 2012, gender representation
was almost equal with just below 6000 for the former and approximately 5000 for the
latter. Simultaneously, the course experienced yearly rises in the total number of athletes
with the highest figure was 11,000 in 2012.
Given are the three pie charts illustrating how San Diego, California, and other countries
consume water for Residential, Industry, and Agriculture. Overall, citizens from both San
Diego and California mainly utilize water for household purposes; meanwhile, Agriculture
is the most dominant domain of global water usage. It is also apparent that California is
the only area on the list having equal allocations among these three domains.
Notably, residential water use gains the most popularity in San Diego and California with
60% and 39% respectively. This sector, however, only occupied a fraction ( 8%) on a
global scale, which is outweighed by the others. The story is different in Agriculture
which relies heavily on water sources with 69%, much higher than domestic and
industrial use do while the demand for water serving farming in San Diego and California
is inferior to the other purposes with 17% for the former and 28% for the latter.
Of the five outstanding merchandise of exportation, cars took the lead as the most
lucrative products with 26.8 billion dollars in 2020 despite registering a sharp decline of
30,7% of change compared to the previous year. Meanwhile the other categories also
experienced a considerable decrease, except for Medication with 1.6% of change
equivalent to 18.3 billion dollars. Specifically, Gold, Turbojets, and Crude oil sequentially
registered figures of 21, 20.3, and 16.1 billion dollars with the percentage of change
ranging from -31.9% to -9,8% with the smallest figures for both categories given to Crude
oil.
When it comes to the commodity transaction from the UK to the European Union, a
gradual dive was seen on a yearly basis. The largest exports were recorded in 2000 with
roughly 55%. From 2005 onwards, merchandise imported from Britain on degree lost its
influence in European markets with a plummet to under 50%. The year 2020 witnessed
an unprecedented slump in the exportation to the bottommost mark of around 42%.
Given are the three pictures delineating three types of bridges located in lakes, rivers,
and seas based on their characteristics. Overall, each sort of bridges has various
features mainly pertaining to size and piers’ structure.
Of the three bridges, the arch crossing over lakes is the most simple with no pier
constructed. This conical bridge merely welcomes small ships due to its modest height
allowance (100m) along with its short length which is only up to 200m. By contrast, the
concrete bridge is far more complicated than the former with a considerable number of
piers spaced below 200m apart, keeping the bridge balanced. In comparison with arch
bridges, concrete ones are also superior with a height of under 300m and unlimited
length depending on how many piers are built, serving medium-sized ships on rivers.
As the biggest type of bridge, suspension bridges are designed to have two giant piers
built over utterly deep seas. Due to its location, it is impossible to count how many
meters are its length. One striking feature is that there is a distance of 200-400m between
its two piers, which guarantees the safety of big ships coming across there.
The given picture delineates a hot-air balloon’s complex structure and how it operates.
Overall, the balloon is composed of various components in which the part responsible
for creating hot air is the burner along with the propane cylinder.
Apparently, the main part of this balloon is the envelope which consists of copious gores
and panels to form a firm structure for the whole object. On the top of the balloon exists
a parachute valve acting as a vent for hot air to release. The skirt which links the
envelope with the bottom part is designed to connect to the burner using rope lines. The
bottomost feature is a basket including a propane cylinder collaborating with the burner
in the process of forming hot air.
As is evident from the diagram, propane from the aforementioned gadget is mixed with
air to become flames after the burner sets this combination on fire. When the hot air is
formed, the balloon effortlessly floats due to the fact that the burned air is far lighter than
the cool air outside.
Task 2: individuals and society
One of the most feasible solutions is to use education to raise awareness of people
about the importance of being involved and well-mannered in the present-day world. On
the side of governments, they must put an emphasis on extracurricular activities to help
students know how involvement positively affects their life by bringing joys and
promoting a sense of affiliation. In addition to this, these students also need to
understand why they need to be deferential to others by attending moral lessons at
institutions. Nevertheless, there has to be a collaboration between lessons from schools
and parents or guardians. According to a myriad of global psychologists, what parents
do can be mirrored in their own kids’ behaviors; therefore, should they be outgoing and
treat others with good manners, their children may do exactly like what they have
performed.
To conclude, even though copious citizens are leaning towards being indifferent and
disrespectful to surrounding people, the interference of the government in educating its
people along with the help of parents can effectively tackle this problem.
The foremost justification of people approving that luck plays an integral role in reaching
goals is that there have been many circumstances in which numerous people overcome
arduous struggles without paying much effort. For instance, there have existed
numerous cases of people winning in the lottery/ hit the jackpot; which signifies an
effortless/ facile success thanks to luck. This view seems plausible at first; however, it is
flawed due to some reasons. Those who are unschooled and lack/ dearth/ devoid of
financial management skills ipso facto normally have insufficient ability to sustain the
fortune or merely expend it in a proper/ methodical manner. In essence, over-reliance on
fate will make people underestimate the importance of industriousness to attain goals.
In addition to this, despite the fact that luck is sometimes more or less a part of success,
competence has a far more essential part to play. Indeed, most successful people have
been demonstrated to be the most outstanding individuals. Mark Zuckerberg, founder of
Facebook, perfectly exemplifies this fact. Behind his inspirational story as a billionaire,
he has been synonymous with incredible computer skills along with his gift in
programming. Undeniably, his intrinsic values have brought him fame and copious
properties, which is a precursor of climbing the career ladder without considering the
luck factor. This justification can be reinforced by the case of Thomas Edison. Unlike
many others who give up after blaming a sense of bad luck for consecutive failures
without considering many practical cases which abound in science, Edison made
roughly 1,000 attempts at inventing light bulbs, which is apparently the fruitful outcome
of hard work rather than luck.
Ví dụ luôn là công cụ thuyết phục để giải thích cho luận điểm, tuy nhiên cần lấy ví dụ xác đáng
và có giải thích để liên kết cao với luận điểm. Tránh lấy ví dụ nhưng không giải thích kết nối.
4. First of all, people who are considered role models apparently have a considerable
amount of influence on the public. Emma Watson, for instance, being a prominent
actress, is currently the goodwill ambassador for the United Nations, promoting gender
equality and undoubtedly drawing a great deal of attention from her admirers.
Cách 2: ví dụ chỉ cần hiểu biết chung chung nhưng phải bao quát
1. Many people migrate, seeking security and a safe future for their children. For instance,
most of the refugees who arrived in the European Union were escaping from wars.
2. Firstly, a global government can respond fairly to crises. In Covid-19 pandemic, for
example, a global government can make wearing masks compulsory. This could prevent
the worldwide spread of the disease.
4. Should the concrete towers be constructed amid an ancient area, it will presumably be of
a counter-productive effect when it fails to be in perfect harmony with the
surroundings. A telling example is the controversial urban planning implemented in
Hanoi Old Quarter, Vietnam. Paradoxically, the sleek designs of several skyscrapers
adjoin the array of quaint houses, creating a miscellaneous architecture.
7. Firstly, many people have a strong preference for computer software over
handwriting when composing text documents such as emails due to its fairly convenient
editing functions. For example, Microsoft Word provides users with almost unlimited
ability to modify or erase a piece of text without effort, simultaneously hindering the
ability to write speedily of the writers.
8. The Internet has now been made accessible through both mobile phones and
computers, which allows young readers to gain knowledge from a wider range of
sources. Online English newspapers, as an example, are useful for English learners
to enrich their vocabulary as well as understanding a culture.
9. Besides, young perpetrators usually receive lighter sentences that they deserve, which
is apparently an injustice to the victims. In Vietnam, there was a well-known case in
which a teenager murdered almost every member of a family deliberately, escaping the
death sentence due to being a few months under the responsible age.
Embraced by some as one of the world-changing innovations in technology, the advent of the Internet
is, on the other hand, given far more concern regarding surveillance and confidentiality issues rather
than the recognition for its significant devotion. From my perspective, the values as well as the risks
involved in the Internet invariably go in parallel.
On the one side of the debate, advocates believe that the Internet has brought a
multitude of users a sense of insecurity. A telling example for this was seen in 1988 when
a male hacker delivered malicious code into thousands of computers to steal personal
information, leading to a loss of millions of dollars. This incident was even named Morris
Worm, a fear of both Internet users and a host of technology experts, which has stirred
up a pressing concern about the safety of the Internet’s introduction.
The philanthropy given by the wealthy definitely should be incentivized for the fact that it
can save millions of lives from global diseases. In fact, Bill Gates has been well-known
for his excessive grant pertaining to polio. Thanks in part to Gate and other benefactors,
about 2.5 billion children have been vaccinated against this disease, cutting the global
cases of polio by 99,9%.
3. Đẩy đơn vị năm/ tên đối tượng lên làm chủ ngữ
Eg: the year 1990 witnessed/ saw/ experienced/ underwent a jump in the export of
goods from the US
*Xem xét từ trong ý tưởng có N nào thì có thể cân nhắc để làm chủ ngữ. Tránh
lạm dụng chủ ngữ : the number of/ the amount of/ the percentage of
A. Intro:
Type 1:
1.1.
Criticised by many naysayers as perturbing for the younger labour force, an extension of
retirement age is; on the other hand, touted by others as a boon for both social and personal
reasons. Although the former perspective seems justified, I am more inclined to the latter
viewpoint.
Embraced by some experts as beneficial for linguistic development, the inclusion of literature in
the high school curriculum is; however, critisied as too time-consuming. Although I am partly
convinced by the former argument, I subscribe to the latter viewpoint for individual preference
and time-efficiency reasons.
1.2.
In discussion of MS, there has existed much social concern about whether the emphasis should
be put on A or B. Although I partly believe in the boons derived from/ I have justifications for the
belief in the former, I subscribe to the latter.
B. Body:
3 hướng viết
Khung 1: 100%
Example/ data/ explanation/ impact
1. The first justification is that......SI1
2. Indeed/genuinely/ In essence, SD1
3. Examples for this abound in/ a telling example for this is/ it stands to reason that
4. This is a testament to: điều này là minh chứng cho/ đảo ngữ not ...only, but...also
Khung 3: 40-60
It is understandable why some people put heavy emphasis on/ advocate...
The key rationale is that....
However, this thinking is flawed/ just valid in ....( chứng minh nó sai hoặc chỉ đúng với TH nào
đó)
In light of/ regarding/ when it comes to...( dẫn ra SI 1 cho điều ngược lại)
Therefore/ this is a testament to...
In addition to this, SI 2
3 câu tiếp theo giải thích theo như format đoạn của dạng 100%