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G1 - A Guide To Writing Aim and Objectives, and Structuring Coursework
G1 - A Guide To Writing Aim and Objectives, and Structuring Coursework
G1
A GUIDE TO WRITING AN AIM AND
OBJECTIVES, AND STRUCTURING
ACTIVITY, ASSIGNMENT AND
DISSERTATION SUBMISSIONS
Part 1 is concerned with writing an Aim and, from that, deriving Objectives. It
considers this undertaking separately for relevant Activity, Assignment and
Dissertation submissions.
This Guide is not definitive, and students may wish to pursue alternative
approaches.
Dr John Morran
11/8/21
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This document is a guide to writing an Aim and, from that, deriving Objectives
for each of the following types of coursework.
1. A relevant Activity
2. An Assignment
3. A Dissertation
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1. Some Initial Factors To Consider
• Critical Analysis: The fundamental requirement of MSc study is for the student to
show robust and in-depth critical analysis, which is considered the higher cognitive
skill expected at this educational level. In practice, what this means is that the
student must show they can
o construct and advance a clear, coherent and logical 'argument' that leads to
sound or cogent conclusions [in academia, an 'argument' is any work proffered
for assessment or critique, e.g., the whole Assignment or Dissertation]; and
Students have a relatively short period and word count in which to address all the
aspects above. A significant problem is usually the need for in-depth critical
analysis; students try to cover many factors of potential relevance to their research,
which, given the word count constraints, can lead to a superficial analysis of the
more significant elements.
• Research Questions (RQs) give an idea of the problems a student might be thinking
of tackling in their Activity, Assignment or Dissertation (AAD). At the early stage of
researching an AAD, think of RQs as being relatively random questions that might
need further consideration; they might be amended, re-ordered and changed in the
future. The very fact that a student might think about many RQs can lead to a loss
of focus, resulting in an incoherent and illogical argument being proffered. An Aim
and Objectives approach to structuring submissions tries to avoid this common
pitfall.
• Social science research can utilise the RQ approach without explaining how the
questions fit into the ‘structure’ of the AAD submission. For the MSc in Safety and
Risk Management (SRM), the ‘structural’ approach to Assignment and Dissertation
work requires the inclusion of an Aim and Objectives (A/Os). Within this A/O-based
framework, Research Questions can often confuse students when seeking to
structure an AAD in a focussed and coherent academic manner; the difference
between an RQ and an Aim or Objective may not be apparent.
• Consequently, for SRM purposes, within the Aim and Objective approach, it is
considered that Research Questions are NOT required. Research Questions
represent issues upon which students might want to focus. This helps them ‘tighten’
the scope of the Aim or Objectives, and students are advised to utilise them in this
manner. How to do this will become apparent later (see Literature Mapping in Part
2, s.1).
The section heading above is an important question, which students often find confusing.
• With respect to AADs, the Aim and Objectives seek to represent and address the
scope and requirements of the brief (AA) or the overall presentation of the
dissertation (i.e., the ‘argument’) and the research that entails (D).
• For Activities and Assignments (AA), an Aim and Objectives are not written to meet
any hypothetical scenario outlined in the brief. These scenarios are presented as a
vehicle for specific H&S issues to be considered, often to be submitted as
Management Reports. Here lies a potential cause of confusion. Naturally, a student
will consider the scenario in the brief as the subject of the Management Report,
which is indeed the case. However, whilst Conclusions and Recommendations will
relate to the scenario-based problems (Management Report), the Aim and
Objectives must relate to the Activity or Assignment brief as a whole; this is what is
being addressed by the student in the coursework presented. Sometimes, there is
little difference between the Objectives of an Activity or Assignment and a
hypothetical Management Report (i.e., essentially, the submission Objectives have
been specified in the brief). However, students must be aware that there is a
difference. These subtle differences will become clearer as the example in section 7
is presented and discussed.
• An Aim and Objectives for a Dissertation do not have the problem discussed above;
they are directly related to the research topic and encompass the whole
Dissertation.
The scope of an Aim is likely to be different for each submission type (i.e., AAD), and
students will need to judge accordingly.
• An Aim should encompass, in general terms, the scope and context of the issue
being researched, studied or considered. For Activities and Assignments, this will
encompass the scope of what the brief requires. For Dissertations, this will cover
the research topic.
• An Aim should start with the infinitive form of the verb, e.g., To investigate, To
describe, To explore, To define, To examine, To analyse, etc. The verbs used
should reflect an immediate and direct action.
• The scope of the Aim should have context, i.e., what type of organisation(s) or
industry; how many businesses are considered; is the country contextually relevant
to the study? The context is more critical for the Dissertation and usually self-
evident in Activities and Assignments.
Objectives are derived from the associated Aim; this can be referred to as ‘deconstructing’
the Aim into Objectives. Such ‘deconstruction’ is the fundamental means by which a
chronological ‘argument’ (submission) is structured.
• Objectives are more specific than the Aim but, paradoxically, can still be relatively
general in scope. However, note, Activity Objectives are likely to be very specific
as they will be based on particular requirements of the brief. Assignment
Objectives can be either specific or more general in scope (depending on the brief),
and Dissertation Objectives are usually general in scope.
• Objectives should be listed in an order that will facilitate a logical and coherent
development of the ‘argument’. In Activities, given the brief, a logical progression
might not always be apparent. Under such circumstances, the student should try to
order them coherently whilst addressing the brief's requirements. Assignment
Objectives will generally be amenable to logical ordering (depends on the brief), and
Dissertation Objectives should always be ordered logically.
• As for the Aim, Objectives start with the infinitive form of direct-acting verbs. The
verb ‘to understand’ should not be used.
• Objectives should align directly to the submission structure, and this will be
discussed for each submission type in Part 2 below.
o For Activities, the Objectives will all relate to the Aim and the requirements of
the brief (this also entails reading around the various topics identified in those
requirements - see examples later). Approximately 3-5 Objectives would
typically be suitable.
o For Assignments, the Objectives will relate to the Aim, the requirements of the
brief, and the Literature Review. Approximately 4-6 Objectives would generally
be suitable.
o For Dissertations, the Objectives will relate to the Aim, the Literature Review,
the Methodological approach proposed, and the anticipated outcome of the
research (i.e., to make specific recommendations). Approximately 4-7
Objectives would generally be suitable.
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5. Issues To Consider When Drafting An Aim And Objectives For Activities And
Assignments (see section 8 for Dissertations)
Students could address all suitable Activities (scenario-based) and Assignments with an A/O
approach in the following manner.
To help with the questions above, a ‘Planning your writing’ proforma can be found via
the link below, and at the end of this Guide (Appendix 1, p. 22).
See opposite for where to find the ‘Planning your writing’ document
on the site’s main page.
b. Steps to Take
• Underline the significant parts of the brief that need to be addressed (see those
underlined in the s. 6 & 7 examples below) and identify the broad issue into which
they all might fit (see highlighted text in the s. 6 & 7 examples below).
• The broad issue (highlighted) is the basis of the Aim. The other significant factors
(underlined) are likely to be the basis of Objectives.
• Draft an Aim
• The Aim will encompass the scope of the brief’s requirements.
• Draft Objectives
• When drafting Objectives, students need to consider how a reader will follow
the development of the argument, i.e., what does the student need to explain
and in what order for the ‘argument’ to be logical and coherent.
• Use the Objectives (suitably modified) as the section headings for the submission
narrative.
• Look at the Objective-related section and sub-section headings and the associated
narratives and search for literature to support the points being made for each. It
might also be necessary to look for literature supporting specific and categorical
statements made within each section. In the first instance, look for recent
literature as they are likely to contain all the references you will need to
review.
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6. Activities: Aim And Objectives For Relevant Activities
Not all Activities will require an A/O approach; they may be statistical problems, seek
personal opinions, or ask a series of specific questions. However, students will benefit from
taking an A/O approach to the scenario-based Activities; this also serves as practice for
Assignments and, ultimately, the Dissertation.
“The statistics on fatal injuries in various sectors given above indicate that the highest
rate is in older agricultural workers. Why do you think this is? What motivation factors
may influence safety behaviours in this group of workers that aren’t present in other
sectors?
The Irish Health & Safety Authority (HSA) has issued guidance specifically related to
this issue. Look at the guidance and discuss whether you think that it addresses the
psychological motivators you have identified.”
• In the above draft, the context reflects the requirements of the brief, i.e., a
review of motivational factors subsequently compared to HSA guidance.
With reference to the draft Aim and the requirements of the brief, to facilitate a
coherent argument, it is reasonable to infer that some issues will initially need to
be explained to the reader. For example, students summarising what is meant by
motivation and any significant motivational factors relevant to the brief.
1. To define and describe motivation theory and its significant factors in the
context of the brief.
2. To investigate motivational factors as a cause of increased accident rates.
3. To explore motivational factors in older Agricultural workers as a cause of
increased accident rates and compare this with other employment sectors.
4. To investigate the specific HSA guidance and evaluate it in relation to the
motivational factors identified for older Agricultural workers.
5. To make recommendations on how motivational factors in older Agricultural
workers might be addressed and managed.
From the above, it can be seen that having A/Os for Activities will help frame and
structure the student’s submission. The Aim encompasses and ‘frames’ the
broad scope of the Activity, and the Objectives provide a structure for a logical
and coherent ‘argument’.
Each Objective would constitute a separate section heading in the Main Body of
the submission, e.g., Objective 1 could be headed ‘Motivational Theory and its
Significant Factors X’.
Simply by structuring the ‘argument’ logically and coherently, the student can
then focus on finding research that could support the specific points being made
in the narrative associated with each Objective. Supporting citation is an
essential element of critical analysis.
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iii. Evidence required to support the ‘argument’
Look at each Objective and see if there is any literature related to the points
being made in the associated narrative. Let’s look at the Objectives (O) above.
Do you have an example, perhaps from your own experience, of a situation where by
trying to improve productivity, the end effect was the opposite? How did this situation
affect the people involved? Were some people affected in other ways to others, or less
affected? Why do you think this was? Was the situation improved? What did it take for
this to be changed?
Again, it is reasonable to infer that some issues will initially need to be explained
to the reader, e.g., the need to define productivity measurement and describe
Company X. Remember, the reader must be able to follow a clear, coherent and
logical development of the ‘argument’.
Each Objective would constitute a separate section heading in the Main Body of
the submission, e.g., Objective 1 could be a section headed ‘Company X and its
Operation’. This approach aligns the Objectives to the order of exposition in the
Main Body, which facilitates coherency of the ‘argument’. A final summative
paragraph in the submission would ensure the whole ‘argument’ presented by the
student was related to Company X’s specific circumstances.
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iii. Evidence required to support the ‘argument’
Look at each Objective and see if there is any literature related to the points
being made in the associated narrative. Let’s look at the Objectives (O) above.
This Activity is relatively complicated, requiring quite a few Objectives to address the specific
requirements of the brief. Where possible, students should try to limit the number of
Objectives in Activities to between three and five (inclusive). Most scenario-based Activities
should facilitate this approach.
NOTE: A/Os for Activities only are not included in the word count.
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7. Assignment: Aim And Objectives For An Assignment
“You are the H&S Manager in a manufacturing company with 500 employees mainly
working in Production, Warehousing, Logistics and Sales. The company is owned and
run by two brothers; Jim runs the Finance and Sales side, and John runs the
Production, Warehousing and Logistics side. Jim is very focussed on generating more
customers and sales, and John is concerned about keeping up with ever-increasing
production plans that don’t seem to allow him to catch up with training, maintenance
and improvements.
John is worried that they may be complacent about safety. Although they have an
excellent safety record (only one lost-time accident in 12 months, and very few minor
injuries or near misses reported in the same period), he feels that they need to stop
increasing production and delivery rates as fast as they are doing. He is concerned that
they have delayed planned training and maintenance and have shelved planned
improvements to keep up with the large increase in orders that Jim has been
generating. The employees appear to be very happy with the increased availability of
overtime, especially the recent introduction of night shift and weekend working.
Although the production rates have increased significantly, there has been no increase
in the number of employees.
John has asked you to prepare a report for the brothers, explaining how their current
approach might affect the safety performance in the company. You will include a
general discussion on the effect of a “production is priority” focus on the safety culture
and attitudes of employees (approx. 1500 words), followed by a discussion on the
potential effects that Jim’s rapid expansion in sales could be having on safety within
John’s area - Production, Warehousing and Logistics.
You know that Jim needs to relate any argument to costs and financial benefits, and
that John likes to aim for full compliance with Regulations and Best Practice. Your
report has to be written so that both brothers will understand how their employees react
to their attitudes to sales and production schedules. The report needs to explain how a
poor approach to safety by them (even unintentionally) can result in accidents and lost
production, as well as how a good, proactive approach can improve production, reduce
costs and reduce accident rates. You also need to include some discussion on the
dangers of focussing on lagging safety performance indicators (lost time accidents,
minor injuries) and instead also look at leading indicators, such as adherence to
maintenance and training schedules.”
There are many disparate requirements stipulated in this Assignment. Within the word
count constraints, it is difficult to envisage how a student might structure a submission
to facilitate a coherent and suitably in-depth argument; it is not an easy task! The
fundamental issue appears to be ‘Production is Priority’, considering how various other
matters might relate to it and the organisation. Consequently, the Aim is likely to
encompass the ‘Production is Priority’ concept. The other underlined matters will likely
be reflected in the Objectives. However, because of the relatively disparate nature of
the matters to be addressed, a completely logical and coherent flow to the ‘argument’
may not be possible. Consequently, the student needs to structure the approach as
best they can, addressing all the issues to the depth required at this level.
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The Assignment is effectively asking for a Management Report addressing the issues
presented in the brief. However, it should be recalled that this work is a submission for
an MSc course, and consequently, the A/Os will focus on this aspect. What does this
mean in practice?
• A student might look at the Assignment above and think that the Aim is to write a
Management Report for the Directors addressing the brief’s requirements - this
might be their stated Aim (and often has been). Whilst this is a reasonable
position to take, it is likely to miss the point of the exercise and thus fail to meet
the standard required for the submission. Additionally, consider this: if a Director
asked a H&S Practitioner to write a Management Report about ‘Production is
Priority’, it is unlikely that the H&S Practitioner would state the Aim of the Report
was to write a Management Report. Instead, the real Aim would be to explain
‘Production is Priority’ to the Director.
• A Management Report is the outcome of the Assignment. The real purpose of the
Assignment is for the student to present a logical, coherent argument that
addresses the brief, exhibiting in-depth critical analysis of the significant factors.
The A/Os seek to provide a framework for the development of such an argument.
Remember, structure and content are interrelated. It might be useful for students
to have someone read over their submission to see if the chosen structure
facilitates an easier appreciation of the content and vice versa.
The Aim of a Dissertation will provide the general scope and context of the research topic.
For example, a student is researching the relationship between safety culture and safety
performance in UK residential care homes. Before drafting the Aim, there are some factors to
consider.
• Does the student mean ALL residential care homes in the UK? This would be too wide
a scope for an MSc dissertation. Consequently, the context of the study requires more
focus.
• Do the residential care homes belong to the same company? Are they independent or
state-run?
• Do the residential care homes care for the same type of people?
• Are the residential care homes located in the same area of the UK?
By addressing such questions, the student must seek to narrow the focus of the research so
that it can be studied within the relevant time scale, with as few unnecessary variables as
possible, and with a view to a suitable depth of critical analysis.
• The first 3-5 Objectives will provide the section headings for the Literature
Review. In the example above, these are O1-3.
• The last Objective will indicate the outcome hoped for, usually expressed in
the form of ‘making Recommendations’. This is addressed in the
Recommendations chapter. In the example above, it is O5.
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It also provides guidance about the order in which the structural elements of
these documents should be written.
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1. Using The Aim And Objectives Approach To Structure An Activity, Assignment Or
Dissertation: The Creswell Literature Review Mapping Technique
Writing an Aim and Objectives is done in tandem with reading around the topic; it is a
dynamic relationship - as the student reads more about the subject, they may need to alter
the Aim or Objectives, or both.
Creswell's Literature Review Mapping technique can provide a framework for this
approach. It produces a hierarchical map starting with the stipulated Aim, from which relevant
Objectives to be researched (Topics) are derived. It is the Objectives that can help the
student structure a logical and coherent submission (argument).
The Objectives can be used to help structure relevant Activity, Assignment and Dissertation
submissions. Such structure provides a framework to facilitate a logical and coherent
submission (argument). However, note, the three types of coursework will have slightly
different types and numbers of Objectives associated with each; this is due to the nature of
the coursework brief and submission required.
• Dissertation: the Objectives are focussed on addressing the research topic (the
Literature Review). They will also include a Methodology Objective and a
Recommendations Objective. There are likely to be 4-7 Objectives. Three to five
Objectives are likely to be reflected as section headings in the Literature Review
(LR), and there will be associated sub-sections. The Methodology Chapter is likely
to have sections and sub-sections. The last Objective will relate to the
Recommendations Chapter.
The example on the next page sets out Creswell’s approach to Literature Review
mapping. It should be remembered that the student should already have a draft Aim and
set of Objectives from which to start to structure their submission.
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AIM
OBJECTIVES
Sub-topics
that need to
be addressed.
They will
usually cover
all the
research
questions a
student might
have.
These are
sub-headings
in the
literature
review.
• In the above - 'Procedural Justice in Organisations' represents the Aim and could be
written as follows -
• The three boxes connected to the Aim (situated below) represent Literature Review
Objectives (Formation, Effects, Change), which could be written thus:
These would become relevant headings in the Literature Review of a Dissertation or the
Main Body of an Assignment or Activity (see below).
In effect, the various Objectives (sections) and sub-sections will cover many, if not all, of the
research questions associated with the brief or research topic. Hence, in this approach,
Research Questions are not essential in an Activity, Assignment or Dissertation; their
purpose is simply to guide the student towards any issues they need or wish to address.
Consequently, a logical and coherent academic argument can be facilitated by having a clear
Aim from which relevant Objectives are derived.
• In an Assignment, the first 3-5 Objectives will map to the requirements of, and
literature research associated with, the brief. The last Objective will map to the
Recommendations. There are likely to be 4-6 Objectives in total, with no
Methodology Objective. Sub-sections are likely, and there is a distinct possibility of
the need for sub-sub-sections.
• In a Dissertation, the first 3-5 Objectives will map to the Literature Review. The
next Objective will map to the Methodology chapter, and the last Objective will map
to the Recommendations chapter. There are likely to be 4-7 Objectives in total. Sub-
sections will be essential, and it is highly likely that suitably headed sub-sub-
sections will be present.
See Part 2, sections 2 and 3 below, for a description of how to map Objectives to Main Body
section headings (Assignments and Activities) or relevant Chapter section headings (not the
main Chapter heading) in a Dissertation.
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2. Using The Cresswell Literature Review Mapping Technique To Structure A
Dissertation
For a Dissertation, the following is a simple example of an Aim with Objectives derived
therefrom.
a. Aim - To investigate the relationship between Safety Climate and Safety Performance
in four similar, organisationally separate, and independent residential care homes in
Glasgow.
b. Use the Mapping technique to layout the Objectives (deconstruct Objectives from the
Aim)
1. Heading = Chapter, e.g., Literature Review or Methodology. Section Heading = Objective, i.e., The
definition and description of Safety Climate, etc.; sub-section heading = important sub-factors
associated with the Section Heading.
2. The first 3 Objectives will be modified to become Section Headings in the Literature Review (LR), or
Main Body narrative if an Assignment.
3. For O1-4 sections above, the student is likely to identify sub-sections and sub-sub-sections.
4. There will be no Methodology Objective in an Activity or Assignment.
5. The sub-section and sub-sub-section headings will likely address the specific research questions a
student might have.
6. The student will identify relevant papers that address the various topics covered by all sections and
sub-sections.
7. O4 is the Methodology-related Objective.
8. O5 is the Recommendation-related Objective.
• Boxes 1-5 represent the Objectives of the research, which are first presented in the
Introduction chapter. They encompass the whole research Dissertation.
• It can be seen how the academic argument flows logically from Box 1 through to Box 5
(these are Objectives that have been derived [deconstructed] from the Aim). Can it be
seen how this would provide a logical and coherent argument?
Chapter 2 - Literature Review (or numbered sections in the Main Body of an Assignment/Activity)
2.1 The Definition and Description of Safety Climate) (see Ch. 1.2, Objective 1)
2.2 The Parameters of Safety Performance relevant to the study (see Ch. 1.2, Objective 2)
2.3 The Relationship between Safety Climate and Safety Performance (see Ch. 1.2, Objective 3)
2.3.1 Safety Climate and its effect on Safety Performance
2.3.2 Safety Climate and Safety Performance in the Care Home sector
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3. How To Relate Objectives To Section Headings For Activities, Assignments and
Dissertations
AIM
To investigate the relationship between Safety Climate and Safety
Performance in four similar, organisationally separate, and independent
residential care homes in Glasgow.
OBJECTIVES
1. To define and describe Safety Climate.
2. To explain the parameters of Safety Performance used in the study.
3. To discuss the relationship between Safety Climate and Safety
Performance, and to relate that to the residential care home sector.
4. To investigate, by means of quantitative survey and qualitative
interview, the relationship of Safety Climate to Safety Performance
in four independent residential care homes.
5. To make recommendations for the improvement of Safety
Performance within the care homes studied.
This will include relevant sub-sections aligned in a suitable manner with the
‘Research Onion’ (see G2 - A Guide to Writing a Research Dissertation).
The relationship between the Aim and Objectives, chapters, sections and sub-sections is
dynamic; modifications are expected as the submission progresses. As a student reads
more around the topic, the Aim and Objectives (particularly the latter) may change to
accommodate new approaches or information, e.g., writing a literature review is likely to
influence the Aim and Objectives.
1. Aim and Objectives (within the Introductory paragraph but considered first)
2. Main Body (includes Introductory paragraph and Discussion/Conclusion - structure
based on Objectives with relevant section headings)
3. Recommendations (if required)
b. Assignments
c. Dissertation
1. Aim and Objectives (these will likely be subject to modification as the Dissertation
progresses - see G2, A Guide to Writing a Research Dissertation)
2. Literature Review
3. Methodology
4. Findings (Results)
5. Discussion
6. Conclusions
7. Recommendations
8. Introduction (note, the A/Os are presented in the Introduction but written first)
9. Abstract
The References may best be started at the literature review stage and supplemented
as the Dissertation progresses. When citing a paper, the student should automatically
list it as a reference.
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Appendix 1 - Planning Your Writing
Use the following prompts to help you to think about your writing. If you can’t answer any of them
just now, think about what you will need to do to ensure that you can.
What are the significant issues I need to review and address? Highlight the broad theme, and
underline the specific requirements.
How might I structure my response? What might my Aim and Objectives be?
Journals:
Websites:
Other:
6. Arising from my reading of the topic and associated with my Aim and Objectives, are
there other issues to address in my answer, and how do I fit them into my response
structure?
When you have done some background reading, you will probably realise there are other issues
that need to be addressed. If you have any at the moment, jot them down here. It helps make the
reading more purposeful (and more interesting). Having a robust set of Objectives will also provide
a focus for your reading.
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References and links
1. Cresswell, J. W. (2014) Research Design. Thousand Oaks; SAGE (Ch.2 and p.39)
2. See Horn, R. (2012) Researching and writing dissertations: a complete guide for
business and management students. 2nd ed. CPI Group (UK) Ltd: Croydon. - see
pages 49 & 50. This reference explains how to write an Aim and Objectives (forget
about Research Questions)
o Note, in this site, excluding 'Business dissertation aim' and 'Marketing dissertation
aim', the larger headings in blue font indicate the Aim for the particular research
project. The numbered lists immediately below these represent the Objectives
deconstructed from the relevant Aim.
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