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Name : Angelica Dameria Junita

NIM : 2105413112

Class : MICE 2D

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1. Headline : Family Recreation with the nature themed called “Godong Ijo”

2. Byline : Angelica Dameria Junita, 28 Juni 2022

3. Paragraph 1:
a. What : Godong ijo is a place for family recreation with the nature theme as well as
education for children
b. Where: Jl. Raya Cinangka Raya No. KM 10 No. 60, Serua, Kec. Bojongsari,
Depok City, West Java 16517
c. When : Established since 1988
d. Who : Student and Family

4. Paragraph 2 : Why, how- give more detail on exactly how the event happened and what the
cause was.
In today's era, it must be difficult to find tourist attractions with a cheap budget but can
make all family members happy, Godong Ijo is one of the places that can be visited because
Godong Ijo offers Ecotainment programs, namely programs to increase children's
knowledge, especially those who have a love for the surrounding environment. And also can
see rare animals found in Godong ijo. Godong Ijo also have a robotic sains and neobotic. Not
only that, there are also family tours such as family fishing programs that can be followed by
all family members, no need to worry Godong Ijo also provides cafes and restaurants with a
Sundanese theme that can be visited after doing all your activities.

5. Paragraph 3 : Include more background details on what happened before the event in order
to give your reader a better idea of what led to it
Based on a survey conducted by students of the Jakarta State Polytechnic, Godong Ijo has a
strategic location making it easier for tourists to visit, and also the entrance ticket for
Godong Ijo is free, Godong Ijo also has horse riding recreational facilities on holidays, but at
Godong Ijo there are no souvenirs and also for the toilet in the fishing area is not adequate.

6. Paragraph 4 : An interview or quotes giving someone’s opinion on the event; this could be
someone directly related to the story or some sort of respected or expert opinion.
On the godong ijo official website which can be found at https://godongijo.com/, many of
the visitors gave their opinions about godong ijo, including one visitor named Khoiroel
Hidajata who gave a review, “very suitable place to release fatigue from the hustle and
bustle of the city of Jakarta. the location is not too far from the city center, the atmosphere
is cool and very suitable also as a means of educational tourism for parents to their children
apart from just going to the mall.”
7. Paragraph 5: Look to the future ; what is the impact of this event? What are you predictions
for what might happen next?
Based on the survey and the review from official website, Godong Ijo has become a suitable
place for children and family. But, there are still something that Godong Ijo need to
improved, such a toilet facilities at fishing grounds, maybe Godong Ijo can make some
souvenirs for the visitor and also the provided service by employees. That’s why the MICE
students of Jakarta State Polytechnic make this research. The purpose is later the owners
and employees also the government as well can improve this place. If the owners of Godong
Ijo and the government can improve this place. Later this place will become a tourist place
that can attract domestic tourist and also the foreign tourist.
Family Recreation with The Nature Themed called “Godong Ijo”
Angelica Dameria Junita / 28 Juni 2022

Godong Ijo is a place for family recreation with the nature theme as well as education for
children. This place has been selected as an amazing garden in Southeast Asia. This place was
founded in 1998. Godong Ijo is located in Depok City, making it suitable for visits by students or
families living in Jabodetabek. Godong Ijo address at Jl. Raya Cinangka Raya No. KM 10 No. 60, Serua,
Kec. Bojongsari, Depok City, West Java 16517

In today's era, it must be difficult to find tourist attractions with a cheap budget but can
make all family members happy, Godong Ijo is one of the places that can be visited because Godong
Ijo offers Ecotainment programs, namely programs to increase children's knowledge, especially
those who have a love for the surrounding environment. The Ecotainment program consists of Fast
Learning Camp, Angklung Class, Playing Wayang, Learning Batik, Junior Master Chef, Cup Cake
Decoration, Little Profesor, Fun with Clay, Robotic, Boneka Potty, Kids Doctor, Young Greener, Wow
Art-tainment, and Renewable Energy. And also can see rare animals found in Godong ijo. Godong Ijo
also have a robotic sains and neobotic. Not only that, there are also family tours such as family
fishing programs that can be followed by all family members, no need to worry Godong Ijo also
provides cafes and restaurants with a Sundanese theme that can be visited after doing all your
activities.

Based on a survey conducted by students of the Jakarta State Polytechnic, Godong Ijo has a
strategic location making it easier for tourists to visit, and also the entrance ticket for Godong Ijo is
free, Godong Ijo also has horse riding recreational facilities on holidays, but at Godong Ijo there are
no souvenirs and also for the toilet in the fishing area is not adequate.

On the godong ijo official website which can be found at https://godongijo.com/, many of
the visitors gave their opinions about godong ijo, including one visitor named Khoiroel Hidajata who
gave a review, “very suitable place to release fatigue from the hustle and bustle of the city of
Jakarta. the location is not too far from the city center, the atmosphere is cool and very suitable also
as a means of educational tourism for parents to their children apart from just going to the mall.”

Based on the survey and the review from official website, Godong Ijo has become a suitable
place for children and family. But, there are still something that Godong Ijo need to improved, such a
toilet facilities at fishing grounds, maybe Godong Ijo can make some souvenirs for the visitor and
also the provided service by employees. That’s why the MICE students of Jakarta State Polytechnic
make this research. The purpose is later the owners and employees also the government as well can
improve this place. If the owners of Godong Ijo and the government can improve this place. Later
this place will become a tourist place that can attract domestic tourist and also the foreign tourist.

Source :

https://adventureindonesia.web.id/wisata-edukasi-godong-ijo-liburan-keluarga-mendidik-dan-
menyenangkan/

https://godongijo.com/wisata-edukasi/

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