Positive comments

You fulfill the Pass and Merit assessment criteria given in the syllabus.

You fulfill the pass assessment criteria given in the syllabus.

Referencing up to the mark.

Thorough research on the size and scope of selected business organisations .

The environmental analysis is up to the mark.

Good research skills for all you LOs

Problems
You do not follow the assignment brief well.

More referencing on the economic data for the local SMEs is required for LO2.
More referencing on the economic data is required for LO2

You need to be more balanced in the content and give similar content for all
Learning outcomes.
Need for improvement
You should read carefully the M criteria of your syllabus and go further in the treatment of your topics
to correctly apply the tools of financial management.

You should follow the all the M assessment criteria if you want to improve your results.

Critical analysis is required to get a better grade.

You need to fulfil all the merit criteria given in the brief to get a better grade.

As the vocational scenario is local it would have been good to have some local examples of
entrepreneurs.

This assignment is excellent at the M level, but you need to make an effort to achieve Distinction and do
more critical analysis when required