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Choose The Sentence Best in Meaning and Avoids Wordiness
Choose The Sentence Best in Meaning and Avoids Wordiness
Industrial farming methods are commonplace, but the philosophy of organic farming could
be about to change the way many of us eat. Consumers have (1) dangerous / grave concerns
about eating fruitand vegetables that have been grown with the use of pesticides and
chemical (2) fertilizers / additives. The use of chemicals might make the crops immune to
(3) epidemics / infestations, but consumers have started to worry about the (4) adverse /
modified effects that such farming techniques might have. Organic farming could offer a
solution to this problem. Farmers are able to cultivate (5) abundant / plenty crops using
natural fertilizers. The same is true for farms involved in the meat and (6) dairy / milk
product industries. Farmers can use organic feed for their (7) livestock / meat instead of
giving them harmful processed foods. Organic farming might also avoid some of the (8)
hygiene / wellbeing issues that are connected to industrial farming, as well as giving people
better quality meat to choose from.
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2: Choose the best word from the list provided below and write them in front of the
relevant explained definitions
a) There are a number of adverse effects which are caused by consuming certain food
additives.//Consequences
b) Additives are components used in the preparation of processed foods. //ingredients
c) Mounting costs were resulting in an unprofitable crop. //Rising
d)
e) There are potential risks involved in using GM technology in food. dangers
f) The government approved the use of genetically-modified crops in food
production//Enhanced
g) GM foods have only been on the market since 1994. //Avaliabe.
1.He found his neighbor who lived next door to be attractive in appearance.
2.He was really late to his English class due to the fact that he had to finish his math test.
a) He was late to his English class due to the fact that he had to finish his math test.
b) He was really late to his English class due to the fact that he had to finish his math test.
c) He was really late to his English class to finish his math test.
d) He was really late to his English class due to his math test.
B
. 3.During the time when I lived in South Carolina, it was my intention to go to college in
Florida.
a) During the time when I lived in South Carolina, it was my intention to go to college in
Florida.
b) During the period of South Carolina, it was my intention to go to college in Florida.
c) When I lived in South Carolina, then I thought that I wanted to join college in Florida.
d) While I lived in South Carolina, I intended to go to college in Florida.
4. Because a great many of the words in this sentence are basically unnecessary, it would
really be a very good idea to edit somewhat for conciseness.
a) Because many of the words in this sentence are unnecessary, we should edit it.
b) Because many of the added words are really not needed so it needs editing.
c) Due to the reason it has unnecessary words, I guess we need to omit them
d) Due to the known reason of involvement of unnecessary data, we are to delete it.
5. The reason for the failure of the basketball team of the University of North Carolina in
the Final Four game against the team from Kansas was that on that day and at that time,
some players were frequently unable to rebound the ball.
a) UNC’s basketball team lost the Final Four game against Kansas because it could not
consistently rebound the ball.
b) UNC’s basketball team lost the Final Four game against Kansas due to which it could
not consistently rebound the ball.
c) UNC’s basketball team lost the Final Four game against Kansas because it could not in
a constant manner rebound the ball.
d) UNC’s basketball team lost the Final Four game against Kansas and primarily due to
that it could not consistently rebound the ball.
4. Determine the following sentences are parallel in structure. Write (P) if Parallel and
(NP) if not Parallel. (5)
6. Write the differences between cv, resume and cover letter. Each is to be dealt under
different heading (6)
1. Cv
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2. Resume
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3. Cover letter
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7. Write paragraph on ‘’ Drawbacks of online Education system in Pakistan.’’ Your
paragraph should not exceed more than 7 to 8 sentences. Underline topic sentences,
circle supporting details and draw two lines under your concluding line. (4)
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8. Using methods of paraphrasing, and summarization reproduce the text taken from
literature review. Copying and lifting would lead to negative marking
(10)
In their survey of faculty members of universities of Pakistan, Quraishi and Kalim, (2008)
reported that female faculty experienced gender discrimination, and consequently had lower
job satisfaction. Females are less likely to be included in the decision making process as they
are under-represented on committees and very few hold the position of chair. This situation is
not only an indication of underestimation of female faculty members, but also leads towards
the insufficient flow of information towards them. Consequently, female faculty in Pakistan
face discriminatory barriers in key elements of a gender inequality model; those of a strongly
conservative national culture and the internal structure dynamic of the institution (Acker,
1994; Bond, 1996a; Smulders, 1998).
Gender discrimination in the allocation and use of resources is not uncommon in the
workplace even in the more developed countries (Crosby, 1984; Ensher, Grant- 112
SadiaShaukat, AishahSıddıquah,& Anthony William Pell Vallone, & Donaldson, 2001;
Greenhouse, 2004). In higher education, females generally have less access to resources
(Bond, 1996a), although where access is available, there is evidence that females will make
use of the opportunities (UNESCO, 2002).
Though women have a measure of success in higher education in the more developed
countries, they are still under-represented in academic affairs and the processes of
administration, especially in the top positions of institutions (Bond, 1996b; NESSE, 2009;
Singh, 2008; UNESCO, 2002). Job satisfaction is considered a strong predictor of overall
individual well-being (Diaz-Serrano & Cabral Vieira, 2005), and as Ensher et al. (2001) point
out, gender discrimination can lead to loss of job satisfaction. In education, there is evidence
of a positive relationship between perceived autonomy within the work setting and the sense
of job satisfaction (Kreis&Brockoff, 1986). In Pakistan, a strongly prescribed working
environment for females might be expected to lead to low job satisfaction.
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