Dear, Mr.

Michael,

Good afternoon. How are you today? I hope you are well.

Today, I will introduce my family to you.

Firstly, I would like to introduce myself , my full name is Nguyen Thi Quynh
Huong, but you can call me Huong for short .I am 20 years old . I am from
Vietnam, which is a beautiful country. And I live in a house which has six rooms. I
like my bedroom most because I feel comfortable here and I also spent (từ này là
dạng quá khứ, dùng không phù hợp)  spend most my time for it there so(so có
nghĩa là “do đó”, dùng trong mệnh đề nguyên nhân – kết quả, nhưng trong câu
này, 2 vế không có quan hệ nhân quả nên không thể dùng “so”)  and it is very
beautiful. My bedroom has got a bed and a desk . On the desk, there are many
books, pens and a computer. I also like the Sunday most because I do not have to
go to school. Besides, I can take part in many outdoor activities.

Second, I will introduce my father . His name is Thi . He is 46 years old. He is from
England which has a famous big ben (tên riêng thì cần viết hoa nha e)  Big Ben
Tower (tháp) . Today, he is hot because it is the summer now. He loves the living
room because he feel feels comfortable in there. Moreover, he likes to watch
films on a big TV in the room. It has also got a table and a wall fan, so he feel feels
cold cool (mát mẻ thì sẽ hợp lý hơn) when he is in there. On the table, there are
DVDs and a TV remote.

Next, I will tell you about my mom . Her name is Thuy. This year, she is 46 years
old. She is from France which has romantic people. She is most keen on the
summer because she is can take part in many outdoor activities. So, she is happy
now when because she can make friends in activities. She likes the kitchen most.
Because she like likes cooking . Besides , she spends more her a lot of time in
there, so it is very clean.

Finally, I have a young brother. His name is Dung. He is 15 years old and from
America which is the (luôn luôn dùng the với so sánh nhất) richest country in the
world. He likes playing football because it is so fun and good for his health.
Besides , he can make new friends. In my house, he likes the bathroom. Because
he feels comportable in there after a hard ball game . In the bathroom, there is
a bath , a sink and a shower. Today, he feels tired because he have has to study
all day.

This is all about my family. I love my family so much.

Tell me about your family. I’m really looking forward to your reply.

Best regards,

Huong .

Nhận xét:

E chú ý không nên lạm dụng “so” quá nhiều trong câu vì “so” chỉ dùng khi nói về 2
vế có quan hệ nguyên nhân – kết quả với nhau mà thôi.