Bar

Graph –Time Frame

English Studio
ANALYZE THE CHARTS
• Type – bar chart/ graph
• Time – 2005 and 2010
• Title – GDP in four countries
• X and Y – Years and $USD
• Purpose – show difference
between four countries in two
different years
• Type – bar graph
• Time – 2005 to 2010
• Title – TV viewers
• X and Y – Thousand YEARS
• Purpose – comparison and
trends in TV viewers in numbers

• NOT PERCENTAGE
• Type – bar chart/ graph
• Time – 2000, 2015, 2050 (FUTURE)
• Title – Population
• X and Y – Numbers and years
• Purpose – comparison and trends in
population
• Type – bar chart/ graph
• Time – 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010
• Title – PROPERTY PRICES
• X and Y – YEARS & PERCENTAGES
• Purpose – comparisons and
trends
• Type – bar chart/ graph
• Time – 1960, 1970, 1990, 2000
• Title – University students
• X and Y – NUMBERS and YEARS
• Purpose – STUDENTS IN 3 DIFFERENT
COUNTRIES TAKING ITALIAN SUBJECT
(COMPARISONS AND TRENDS)

• NOTE THIS:
French students took the highest in 1970
CORRECT
France became the highest in 1970 INCORRECT
ANALYZE THE CHARTS
TO INTRODUCTION
SAMPLE Introduction:
The bar graph shows the GDP of
the USA, Japan, China, and
Germany in the years 2005 and
2010.
OR
A comparison in the GDP of the
USA, Japan, China, and Germany in
the years 2005 and 2010 is shown
in the bar graph.
Type – bar chart/ graph
Time – 2005 and 2010
Title – GDP in four countries
X and Y – Years and $USD
Purpose – show difference between four countries in two
different years
KEY FEATURES - THE OVERVIEW
Key features – OVERVIEW
(TRENDS & COMPARISONS)
• ALL DECREASED = TRENDS
• HIGHEST ENGLAND =
COMPARISONS
Key features – OVERVIEW
• CHINA = HIGHEST/ BIGGEST
• ALMOST ALL INCREASE, except
Germany
Key features – OVERVIEW
• Algeria = declined
• China = increased AND BECAME THE
HIGHEST in the EVENTUAL YEAR
• Argentina = fluctuated

• OVERALL, THE AVERAGE PROPERTY

PRICES IN ALGERIA DECLINED, BUT THOSE
IN CHINA SHOWED THE REVERSE AND
BECAME THE HIGHEST IN THE EVENTUAL
YEAR. Also, the percentage growth in
ARGENTINA FLUCTUATED
Key features – OVERVIEW
• SPAIN = declined
• GERMANY INCREASED and HIGHEST in the
eventual year
• France = fluctuated
• OVERALL, THE NUMBER OF (THE FIGURE
FOR) SPAIN STUDENTS CHOOSING ITALIAN
SUBJECT DECLINED, BUT THAT OF (THAT FOR)
GERMANY ONES SHOWED THE REVERSE AND
BECAME THE HIGHEST. ALSO, FRENCH
STUDENT NUMBERS

• NOTE: THE NUMBER OF FRENCH STUDENTS =

FRENCH STUDENT NUMBERS = FLEXIBILITY =
BAND 7+
Key features – OVERVIEW
• SPAIN = declined
• GERMANY INCREASED and HIGHEST in the eventual year
• France = fluctuated

STUDENT’S WORK:
Overall, France had by far the highest number of students who
took Italian SUBJECT, while Germany stood at the lowest in the
initial year. Although Spain showed declines, Germany figure
presented rises from time to time. (THIS NEEDS A SLIGHT
IMPROVEMENT)

MY SUGGESTION:
Overall, France had by far the highest number of students who
took Italian SUBJECT. German STUDENTS AS THE lowest in the
initial year PRESENTED RISES WHILE Spaniard ones showed THE
REVERSE
SAMPLE DETAILS 1
DETAILS 1 – 2005

America had a GDP of around

$13,000 in 2005, while that of
Japan came second, with just over
of $4,000. Japan’s value was twice
as much as the lowest in 2005,
namely China which had a GDP of
just over $2,000. Finally,
Germany’s GDP was a little under
$3,000.
STUDENTS’ FUN WORK 2
 • A breakdown of the information regarding the gross
domestic product broken down into the USA, China,
India and Germany from 2005 and 2010 is depicted
in the bar chart. Looking from an overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that (10 phrases)
OVERALL/ CLEARLY, all the figures had an upward
trend. Moreover, The USA had by far the highest
GDP throughout the period, and the most
significant rise was in China. OK

• Moving on to a detailed analysis, in 2010, the

highest GDP was America in roughly $16,000,
followed by the figure for China and Japan, at
$7,000 and $6,800 respectively. By contrast, the
Germany’ GDP was approximately $4,000 at the end
of the period.

STUDENTS’ FUN WORK 2

 • Generally speaking, all countries
increased with China HAVING the
significant rise. ALSO, the USA was
the highest of GDP. OK

STUDENTS’ FUN WORK 2

 Overall, the four ALL countries were
incresed INCREASED in all periodS. only
the USA had the highest GDP in both of
the year ( A COMMA HERE) and China
showed the significant rise. OK

The United States had a GDP

approximately over 14.000$ in 2010.
However, Japan and China came in the
second WITH wave around 5.800 and
6000$ in that periode. Finally, Germany
was the lowest GDP there WAS only 2.500
STUDENTS’ FUN WORK 2 $ under all the countries. OK
 The bar graph shows the GDP of the USA, Japan,
China, and Germany in the years 2005 and 2010. OK

Overall, the USA had by far the highest GDP in both

years, besides all countries showed a significant
increase between 2005 and 2010, with China as the
most significant rise among others. OK

In 2010, America as the highest GDP continued its

upward trend to hit a peak of more than $14.000,
while Germany showed a slight increase end up at
around $3.000. Also, Japan’s GDP presented a
progressive increase of around one point five, at
$6.000. However, the GDP of China was most
remarkable as it almost tripled in 5 years, reaching
$6.000. OK

STUDENTS’ FUN WORK 2

 The chart below shows the grass domestic product of USA, Japan,
Germany, and China in 2005 and 2010.
OVERALL, The USA had by far the highest GDP in both years and all the
countries increased. However, China showed the most significant rise
than other countries. OK
In 2005 USA had a grass domestic product around $13,000. However,
Germany came third in just over $2,000. Also Germany's value was
triples as much as the lowesT in 2005, namely China which had GDP of
just over $2,000. Eventually, Japan GDP was a highest in just over
$4,000. (REPETITIVE sentence)
In the 2010, America had a grOSS domestic product of around $15,000.
At the same time ( A COMMA) China came second with $6,000.
Although China’S value was twice as much as the lowest in 2010,
namely Germany's which had a GDP of just over $4,000. Lastly, Japan's
grOss domestic product was a little under $6,000. (REPETITIVE
sentence)

NOTE THIS:
BEWARE OF USING THE SAME SENTENCES

STUDENTS’ FUN WORK 2

 The bar graph shows the GDP of the USA, Japan,
China, and Germany in the years 2005 and 2010.

Overall, the USA had by far the highest GDP in

both years, while the increases were showed
from all countries. Moreover, China presented
the most significant rise from the initial to
eventual year. OK
In 2010, the GDP of the USA reached the highest
with more than $14,000, while China increased
significantly from 2005, showing almost
threefold. Besides, Japan and Germany’s GDP
showed slight increases to just below $6,000 for
the former and just over $2,000 for the latter
country. OK

STUDENTS’ FUN WORK 2

 Overall, USA was a country with the HAD highest
GDP in both yearS, while China showed the
significant rise. In addition, the figure depicted
that GDP in all the countries increased. OK

GDP of Germany showed a slight increase by

around 200 USD from 2005 to 2010, became the
lowest. However, 2010 there was a SHARP
increase sharply in GDP of China which ROSE rise
up to three times, AND became the second rank,
with around 6000 USD. In the eventual year, GDP
of USA and Japan showed a significant increase
by around 1500 USD and 500, respectively. OK

STUDENTS’ FUN WORK 2

READ MY SAMPLE – DETAILS 2
READ MY SAMPLE – DETAILS 2

DETAILS 2 – 2010

THE UNITED STATE INCREASED ITS GDP

TO APPROXIMATELY $15,000 IN 2010,
BUT THERE WAS A SIGNIFICANT RISE
IN CHINA’S GDP BY NEARLY $4,000 TO
$6,000, OVERTAKING JAPAN AS THE
SECOND RANKED COUNTRY. AT THE
SAME TIME, JAPAN AND GERMANY’S
GDP INCREASED TO JUST OVER
$5,5000 AND $3,5000 RESPECTIVELY
READ A FULL ESSAY
America had a GDP of around $13,000 in
2005, while that of Japan came second,
with just over of $4,000. Japan’s value
was twice as much as the lowest in 2005,
namely China which had a GDP of just
over $2,000. Finally, Germany’s GDP was
a little under $3,000.

THE UNITED STATE INCREASED ITS GDP

TO APPROXIMATELY $15,000 IN 2010, BUT
THERE WAS A SIGNIFICANT RISE IN
CHINA’S GDP BY NEARLY $4,000 TO
$6,000, OVERTAKING JAPAN AS THE
SECOND RANKED COUNTRY. AT THE SAME
TIME, JAPAN AND GERMANY’S GDP
INCREASED TO JUST OVER $5,5000 AND
$3,5000 RESPECTIVELY