EDITOIRAL SKILL IN ENGLISH

PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE LEARNING

(PBLL-Editing)
No INSTRUCTIONS V V
1. Treat the draft as an accepted manuscript to the Editorial Department.
2. Use the red ink pen to mark your editorial findings
3. Write the name of manuscript’s writer within the box
4. Write your name as an editor within the editor’s box
5. Write the title of manuscript
6. Edit the manuscript by using the editorial signs
7. Put the number of your editorial findings (mechanical, substantive, pictorial) within the
box right-side
8. Write your verbal verification either suggestion, comment, or input for the
manuscript’s improvement.
9. Give your editorial judgment about manuscript from the perspective of prewriting,
drafting, revising, editing, publishing, marketing, delivering)
GOOD LUCK.. BE YOUR BEST.
Study Program Function Name
Publishing Semester 3 Textual Language Carlos Immanuel Bria
Photography Semester 1 Visual Language Taras Shalsabillah Maharani
Photography Semester 1 Visual Language Dzakwan Jasir Iswandi
Broadcasting Semester 1 Virtual Language Dian Putri Budiman
Editors Carlos, Taras, Dzakwan, Dian

Title of Manuscript Toei Company

C=Competence : NC= Non Competence

No Editorial Findings Number Key Word C NC

A Mechanical Editing

 Types Article

 Words very good, concise and clear

 Phrase We produce our TV 
programs at Tokyo Studios
 Clause Toei operates wide-ranging 
businesses
 Punctuations “There’s nothing you cannot 
do at Toei Studios In Oizumi
(Tokyo)”
  Comma It offers the digital post- 
production services
collaboratively with Toei
Labo Tech, one of our group
companies
 Colon - 
 Semi Colon - 
 Preposition …promotion and aims to 

make further progress in this

sector
 Dictions - 
B Substantive Editing
 Content Accuracy
 Language
Consistency
 Message
Originality
 Reader’s Interest
 Coherence
C Pictorial Editing
 Photograph There are so many good photos 
 Tabel Don’t have any tables 
 Graph Don’t have any graph 
 Harmony Harmony looks good for the design 
 Balancing Good 
 White Space Good 
 Color Full colour 
Verbal Verification:

NOT YET

Editorial Judgment
1. This book design looks comfortable to look at
2. Photo’s placements are good
3. There are nothing wrong words, phrases, clauses, and also sentences

OVERALL IS GOOD