10 structure in Essay

1) When / While S t V t O ,
Sit Vet 01
Exit when dies whole way of Life disappears with it
a
language out ,
a

1- While some students drop out after a few years studying ,

others finish
academic courses with poor degrees .

L) S t V t O , resulting in an increase 1 a decrease in + the

-

number of Smt 1 the demand for St .

Ex ; Many people in the countryside migrate into

big cities resulting in an
,

increase in the demands for accommodation , good and services in urban areas

3) S t V t O , giving rise to st
E± Advertisements give people more choices on what they want to buy ,

giving rise to the consumer society .

4) By doing St ,
S t V t O l thot dung sau oui 1)
EI .
By spending money
to protect
minority languages , governments can

also preserve traditions ,

customs and behaviors .

5) S t V t O , and this will S t V to

Ex : the use of private car is increasing in Hanoi

,
and it put a strain
-

on its infrastructure t go a' p life

.

6) r
Instead of
/
s
t
Ving ,
t

In lieu of
EI : Instead of driving cars , people should use public transport .

7) S t V t O .

I This
allowing 1 urging
allows / urges 1 encourages Stl
1
Sb to . .
.

discouraging
/ from
to do st .

EI The utilisation of helps companies to

.

cheap Labour
doing it .

reduce the production This encourages expansion

/
cost .
business

encouraging . . .
8) Compared to those who s t V to ,
s + V to
Ex compared
: to those who high school qualifications , university graduates
often have more employment opportunities -

9) If S t V, S t V TO
Ex :
If air travel is restricted , people would opt for other means of
in
trans poet such as buses and cars
Choo ,
-

10 ) when S t V to ,
s - V t O , ring to
EI : when the government pays for tuition fees , the constraint of finance
is removed greater number of students to attend academic
, encouraging a courses .

BODY ,
-

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: Cair doin

Indi → 4th : coin panic boils teroudgatr.tn

5th
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: Cain d- oh I cant
 CAUSE -
EFFECT -
RESULT

Sentence structures 8t
1) Relative clause .

+ clause , which clause .

. .

1- Clause ,
having . - -

111 Adverbial clause

* Positive ( cause )

By dint of

[
By virtue
of
In t N Phrase main clause
hope of -
'

In an effort
-

Attempt to

-
Thanks to

EI .
By dint of hard work ,
he won the international competition .

*
Negative ( cause)
On account of

f. Owing
As
Due
a

to
to

consequence of
t N -

phrase ,
main clause

EI On account of her irresponsibility , she got fired .

* Neutral C Pot Ne)

+ As result N phrase main clause
a
of -

+ While

1- Although
+
Despite 1 In spite of
 111 ) Emphatic Structure

-1 It is the high time that .

. .

It is because of N phrase IV phrase that clause

.
+ -
-
+

1- It is thanks to

1- Were it not for I Had it not been for + N phrase

-

,
S would do St

Ways to paraphrase
1) Using synonyms

11 ) change the word order

111 ) change the form of the word

N) change from Active to Passive

How to think examples

I) The university Study
Queen 's
For example ,
a recent study by University found that regularly
using smart phones or tablets increased literacy rates by 28% .

M) A government Opinion Poll

For instance recent poll the UK Government found that 68% of

,
a
by
people who attended single sex schools would have preferred to have

gone to a mixed school .

Ill ) A newspaper Report

the new York Times reported in March 2015 that violent crimes committed
by under year olds , such
15 as assault
,
murder and rape ,
were Linked
to playing violent video games .
IV ) Personal Experience

In local city they have installed bike Lanes and places where
my you
can
safely park your bike and this has encouraged thousands of people
to stop using cars .

V ) Real examples ( from sample answer; news : CNN , ABC , .

. -
j Simon .
. .
)

Make examples more specific by adding :

1. Dates
2 . Placet Business I university names

3 . Names
of people
4 .
Statistics