Chart 1:

The given chart exposes a comparison between the expenditure of three sorts of junk food consumed by
Australian adolescents over the 25-year period from 1975 to 2000. Generally, pizza and hamburgers
consumption had a dramatic rise, whereas fish and chips had an opposite trend.

As the graph illustrated, it is obvious that there was a remarkable growth of two categories left. While the
ratio of pizza ascended exponentially between 1975 and 1985, from nearly 10 to the point above 80 times
then steadily rose until 1995, the proportion of pizza had an increasing trend throughout the 20-year
period. However, at the end of the century, both the consumption rates remained stably at 100 times for
hamburgers and more than 80 times for pizza.

On the other hand, the quantity of fish and chips reached the highest point of 100 times per year in 1975.
After that, it had significant changes in the period from 1975 to 1985 before standing approximately 95
times, and declined sharply at the end to 40 times in the year of 2000.

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- Đúng cấu trúc bài thi
- Đủ số lượng từ
- có áp dụng các cấu trúc được học trong bài
- Phân tích được những điểm nổi bật.
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