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Error Analysis of The Written English Essays of Secondary School Students in Malaysia A Case Study
Error Analysis of The Written English Essays of Secondary School Students in Malaysia A Case Study
Common Errors in Writ t en English Essays of Form One Chinese St udent s: A Case St udy.
Saadiyah Darus
Saadiyah Darus
E-mail: adi@ukm.my
Tel: +603-89216570; Fax: +603-89254577
Kaladevi Subramaniam
School of Language Studies and Linguistics
Faculty of Social Sciences and Humanities
Universiti Kebangsaan Malaysia, 43600 UKM Bangi
Selangor Malaysia
Abstract
This study examines errors in a corpus of 72 essays written by 72 participants. The
participants are Form Four Malay students who are studying at a secondary school in
Malaysia; 37 male and 35 female. They have experienced approximately the same number
of years of education through primary and secondary education in Malaysia. All of the
participants come from non-English speaking background and hardly communicate in
English outside the school. The instrument used for this study was participants’ written
essays and Markin software. All of the errors in the essays were identified and classified
into various categorizations. The results of the study show that six most common errors
committed by the participants were singular/plural form, verb tense, word choice,
preposition, subject-verb agreement and word order. These aspects of writing in English
pose the most difficult problems to participants. This study has shed light on the manner in
which students internalize the rules of the target language, which is English. Such an
insight into language learning problems is useful to teachers because it provides
information on common trouble-spots in language learning which can be used in the
preparation of effective teaching materials.
1. Introduction
Learning a Second Language (L2) is a lifelong process and it is often a challenging experience for L2
learners. English has become the L2 after it was introduced to Malaysia during colonization. Presently,
it is an international language and is used as the language in international relations, and in exchanging
knowledge and technology. It was only since a few decades ago that it was taught to almost all school
children. In general, local Malaysian students have been exposed to eleven years of learning English in
primary and secondary schools.
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Malaysia has been multilingual and Malaysia has continued to practice linguistic segregation as far as
individual schools are concerned, a divide-and-rule system inherited from the colonial era (Solomon,
1988). In other words, although education through different languages is widely accepted in Malaysia,
each individual school is mainly seen as operating through one medium. It is obvious that Malaysian
education system practices monolingual school where other languages may be taught as subjects.
Therefore, particular schools are labeled as Malay- or Chinese- or Tamil-medium schools and since
1976, there have been no mixed-medium schools. According to Santhiram (1999) schools in the past
were set up along ethnic lines and conducted in different languages. He states that:
“The British superimposed a vernacular primary terminal education in Malay for the
indigenous Malay masses within the Islamic traditions as a form of social control over the
Malays, English education based on the principle of user fees for the immigrants and the
Malay masses, but free for a select nobility and royalty exemplify the classic ingredients
of a divide and rule policy. For the immigrant populations, the colonial power tolerated
an ethnically inspired and financed vernacular education for the Chinese; and an
employer-initiated Tamil vernacular primary education for the Indians.” (Santhiram
1999:35)
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The severe race riots in Kuala Lumpur in May 1969 had caused a drastic change in this
education system. The Minister of Education at that time, Dato Haji Abdul Rahman Ya’akub, declared
in July 1969 that beginning from January 1970, English-medium schools would be phased out in
Malaysia and by 1985 all former English-medium (‘national-type’) schools would become Malay-
medium (‘national’) schools. The Third Malaysia Plan (1976-80) states that "Bahasa Malaysia (Malay)
is the basis for national integration" but the plan also states quite emphatically that "measures will be
taken to ensure that English is taught as a strong second language (Government of Malaysia 1976:386).
The reasons given for the maintenance of English was "to keep abreast of scientific and technological
developments in the world and to participate meaningfully in international trade and commerce."
(Government of Malaysia 1976: 391)
By 1976, all English medium primary schools were completely converted into schools where
Malay was used as the medium of instruction and by 1982 all the former English medium secondary
schools were converted to National Schools in Peninsular Malaysia. The Education Act was extended
to Sarawak in 1977 and the change of the medium of instruction to Malay throughout the entire school
system was completed in Sabah and Sarawak three years later that was by 1985. In all such schools,
Malay was made the medium of instruction but English was not ignored.
English continues to be taught as an important L2 in all schools where Malay is the medium of
instruction. In fact as of 2002/3 academic session a policy decision was made to use English and not
Malay as a medium of instruction in Mathematics and Science classes in Standard One, i.e. the first
year of schooling. Mandarin Chinese-medium and Tamil-medium (‘national-type’) primary schools
use their respective language as the medium-of-instruction.
settings and start school with hardly any knowledge of English (David and Naji, 2000; David and
Nambiar, 2001).
This difference has caused a great divide among the majority ethnic group between the
Malays from those who can use English fluently and those who are not able to do so.
Such a divergence in language proficiency has disenfranchised those who come from
rural settings (David and Naji, 2000).
To minimize such divergences within this community, the former Malaysian Prime Minister,
Tun Datuk Seri Dr. Mahathir Mohammad constantly stresses the importance of English to the nation.
This has in turn caused a reemphasis on the learning of English especially for the rural students, mainly
Malays, and currently there has been a great deal of debate about measures to improve their proficiency
in English.
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for describing and explaining errors made by speakers of other languages. By investigating students’
written work, it will provide a means to help Malaysian teachers to recognize the importance of errors
as one of the challenging areas in teaching English.
4. Error Analysis
The field of EA in Second Language Acquisition (SLA) was established in the 1970s by Corder and
colleagues. A widely-available survey can be found in chapter eight of Brown (2000). A key finding of
EA has been that many learner errors were produced by learners misunderstanding the rules of the new
language. EA is a type of linguistic study that focuses on the errors learners make. It consists of a
comparison between the errors made in TL and within that TL itself. Corder is the “father” of EA (the
EA with the “new look”). It was in his article entitled “The significance of learner errors” (1967) that
EA took a new turn. Errors used to be “flaws” that needed to be eradicated. Corder (1967) presented a
completely different point of view. He contended that those errors are “important in and of
themselves”. In his opinion, systematically analyzing errors made by language learners makes it
possible to determine areas that need reinforcement in teaching.
EA emphasizes “the significance of errors in learners’ interlanguages system” (Brown 1994:
204). The term interlanguages introduced by Selinker (1972), refers to the systematic knowledge of an
L2 which is independent on both the learner’s L1 and the TL. Nemser (1974: 55) referred to it as the
Approximate System, and Corder (1967) as the Idiosyncratic Dialect or Transitional Competence.
According to Corder (1967), EA has two objects: one theoretical and another applied. The
theoretical object is to understand what and how a learner learns when he studies an L2. The applied
object is to enable the learner to learn more efficiently by using the knowledge of his dialect for
pedagogical purposes. At the same time, the investigation of errors can serve two purposes, diagnostic
(to in-point the problem) and prognostic (to make plans to solve a problem). Corder (1967) said that it
is diagnostic because it can tell us the learner's grasp of a language at any given point during the
learning process. It is also prognostic because it can tell the teacher to modify learning materials to
meet the learners' problems.
EA research has limitations of providing only a partial picture of learner language; and having a
substantive nature in that it does not take into account avoidance strategy in SLA, since EA only
investigates what learners do. Learners who avoided the sentence structures which they found difficult
due to the differences between their native language and TL may be viewed to have no difficulty. This
was pointed out by Brown (1994) and Ellis (1996).
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5. Methodology
Location
The location of the study was a secondary school in a housing area in Semenyih town which is
approximately 30 kilometers away from Seremban and 40 kilometers away from Kuala Lumpur. The
school runs in two teaching sessions, namely the morning and afternoon session. The distribution of
students of the school by Form and ethnic background are shown in Table 1.
Table 1: Distribution of Students by Forms and Ethnic Background (Source: Registration Record for 2008)
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Participants
72 Form Four students participated in this study. All of them had their primary education in National
schools, in which Malay was the medium of instruction. English was taught as an additional subject
within the school curriculum. The respondents are from Form 4 Gigih and Form 4 Harmoni classes
comprising of 30 boys and 42 girls. In class 4 Gigih, there are a total of 37 participants, consisting of
17 boys and 20 girls. In class Form 4 Harmoni, there are a total of 35 participants, consisting of 20
boys and 15 girls. All of the participants have experienced approximately the same number of 10 years
of the education through the primary and secondary education system. All of the respondents speak
Malay at home except for one student who speaks English at home.
Procedure
All of the 72 participants were administered a writing assignment that involved essay writing. They
were required to write a report entitled “Cleanliness of the school canteen” within a period of 60
minutes and a minimum of 200-250 words. This essay follows the English format of SPM (Sijil
Pelajaran Malaysia) Examination in which every student will have to take when they are in Form Five.
It is a guided writing. In the report they were asked to include specific details in their responses.
All 72 essays were typed using Microsoft Word 2003 so that they were computer readable.
After that, the three steps of EA specified by Corder (1974) were followed:
Collection of sample errors
Identification of errors
Description of errors
Instruments
The main source of data used to find answers to the research question is the written essays of 72
participants of the selected school. Markin software was utilized to analyze the errors in the essays.
Markin is a Windows 95/98/ME/NT4/2000/XP program developed by Martin Holmes in 1996. It was
used as a tool that allows teachers to mark written material done by students electronically. It is a
program for marking and annotating text documents using a Windows computer. After the participant’s
text was typed in electronic form, they are loaded into the program and marked using a system of
buttons and annotations. Error statistics are also automatically compiled and included at the end of the
text.
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6. Results
Table 2 shows the analysis of errors based on type of error, number of errors, percentage and mean
values of errors committed by the participants.
Taking the mean values of errors, the results show that six most common errors that the
participants made were in Singular/Plural Form (5.72), Verb Tense (4.80), followed by Word Choice
(4.51), Preposition (4.00), Subject-Verb Agreement (3.01) and Word Order (2.99). The six most
common errors and examples of errors from the corpus are shown in Table 3.
The next noticeable error was Article errors (2.93) while Missing Space and Word Form were
2.47 and 2.36 respectively. Next were Spelling (2.08) and Verb Form (2.01). Other errors that
amounted to less than 2.00 were Capitalization (1.79), Wrong/Misused Word (1.72), Missing Word
(1.42) and Redundancy (1.08).
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Table 3: Most Common Errors and Examples of Errors
Definition and
Identification of errors Correct sentences and explanation of rule
Error classification
1. Another problem is insufficient number of
1. Another problem is insufficient number of
1. Singular/Plural rubbish binSing/Plu around the canteen
rubbish bins around the canteen compound.
compound.
2. This is because the students always throw 2. This is because the students always throw
A mistake with
tissues, plastic bagSing/Plu, tissue tissues, plastic bags, tissue wrappers and bottles
number (singular and
wrapperSing/Plu and bottleSing/Plu in the drain. in the drain
plural)
3. it leads to many other problemSing/Plu 3. it leads to many other problems
1. We, the members of the cleanliness club
1. We, the members of the cleanliness club of
2. Verb Tense of SMK Engku Husain conductVTense a
SMK Engku Husain conducted a meeting.
meeting.
a) A mistake 2. The plates and glasses are very oily and 2. The plates and glasses are very oily and dirty
dirty because not washesVTense properly. because not washed properly.
with the verb 3. The members of the cleanliness club of 3. The members of the cleanliness club of SMK
tense SMK Engku Husain havingVTense a meeting Engku Husain had a meeting.
'Owe' is a sativa verb and does not require the -
Verb Tense
ing participle:
1. They are owing VTense us a good service. 1. They owe us a good service
b) Inappropriate 2. So many dirty plates and glasses are
2. So many dirty plates and glasses are given.
verb serves tVTense
construction 3. The members of the cleanliness club of 3. The members of the cleanliness club of SMK
SMK Engku Husain havingVTense a meeting Engku Husain had a meeting
3. Word Choice 1. Not washing and sweeping the flour Wchoice 1. Not washing and sweeping the floor everyday
everyday makes the floor dirty makes the floor dirty.
2. The workers should keep the canteen 2. The workers should keep the canteen clean
clean and healthy.WChoice and safe.
3. This is due to the irresponsible attitude of 3.This is due to the irresponsible attitude of the
the canteen staff.WChoice canteen workers
4. Preposition 1. So many dirty plates and glasses can be 1. So many dirty plates and glasses can be
seeneverywhere atPreposition the school seeneverywhere aroundPreposition the school
canteen canteen
2. The food to cater toPreposition the students
2. The food to cater for recess are not enough
during recess are not enough
3. As the secretary atPreposition the club I have 3. As the secretary ofPreposition the club I have
been assigned to write report been assigned to write report
5. Subject-Verb A large number' refers to more than one person,
Agreement i.e. plural subject and requires plural verb 'are':
Wrong combination 1. A large number of students is
S/VAgreement 1. 'A large number of students are sick'.
of subject and verb sick.
2. We need to be careful because it 2. We need to be careful because it deals with
dealingS/Vagreement with health. health
3. The dirts always stick in the food that the 3. The dirts always stick in the food that the
students S/Vagreement are Eating. students eat
4. It causes fights because there are no chairs 4. It causes fights because there are no chairs to
to sitsS/VAgreement sit.
Subject-verb inversion (why are we facing) in
6. Word Order the interrogative but inversion ruled out in the
form of statement (why we are):
Disordering/Inversion 1. We don't know why are we WOrderfacing 1. I don't know why we are facing these
of subject and verb these problems. problems
2. Dirty kitchen area is another
2. Another problem is dirty kitchen area
problemWOrder
3. Although in the canteen, number of 3. Although the number of rubbish bins in the
rubbish binsWOrder are not enough canteen, WOrder are not enough
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Verb Tense
Wrong application of verb tense can be seen when the participants did not apply the correct tense to the
verb in the sentences. It can be assumed that some of the participants are not aware of the different
rules for tenses application. The use of some suffixes like ‘ing’ and past tense forms showed that these
participants are aware of the rules on different tenses application and they have already hypothesized
that these verbs needed to be used with different tense forms and should not be used in the basic form.
This is because some verbs written using different tenses forms are not written in the basic form of the
verb. For example, the sentence ‘I waiting for my food’ could be written in the basic form ‘I am
waiting for my food’. This shows that they acknowledged the ‘ing’ form but they were not sure of the
complete past continuous tense forms and application in the English sentence.
The suffix ‘ing’ applied is not relevant to the context given because the context required verb to
be written in the past tense form instead. This information revealed that the different tenses rules
application was not formed but they have already hypothesized that these tenses forms exists in
English grammar. Examples of wrong application of verb tense are shown below.
1. We, the members of the cleanliness club of SMK Engku Husain conductVTense a meeting.
2. The plates and glasses are very oily and dirty because not washesVTense properly.
3. The members of the cleanliness club of SMK Engku Husain havingVTense a meeting
Word Choice
Participants lack appropriate vocabulary. One participant used the word ‘flour’ instead of ‘floor’ in
sentence no. 1. Another participant uses the word ‘healthy’ instead of ‘safe’ in sentence no. 2. While
the third participant used the word ‘staff’ instead of ‘workers’ in sentence no. 3.
1. 1. Not washing and sweeping the flour WChoice everyday makes the floor dirty
2. 2. The workers should keep the canteen clean and healthy.WChoice
3. 3. This is due to the irresponsible attitude of the canteen staff.WChoic
Preposition
The participants demonstrated confusion for correct usage of preposition. In sentence no. 1 the correct
preposition is ‘around’ rather than ‘at’. In sentence no. 2, the preposition ‘for’ should have been used.
While the preposition ‘of’ should have been used in sentence no. 3.
1. So many dirty plates and glasses can be seen everywhere atPreposition the school canteen
2. The food to cater toPreposition the students during recess are not enough
3. As the secretary atPreposition the club I have been assigned to write report
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Subject-Verb Agreement
‘A large number’ refers to more than one person, i.e. plural subject and requires plural verb ‘are’.
However, one participant uses ‘is’ instead as shown in sentence no. 1. In sentence no. 2, the correct
word should be ‘deals’. In sentence no. 3, ‘eat’ should be used rather than ‘are eating’. The word ‘sit’
should be used rather than ‘sits’ in sentence no. 4.
1. A large number of students is S/VAgreementsick.
2. We need to be careful because it dealingS/Vagreement with health.
3. The dirts always stick in the food that the students S/Vagreement are eating.
4. It causes fights because there are no chairs to sitsS/VAgreement
Sentence Construction
Besides the above errors, participants also have problems in forming simple or complex sentences. A
complete sentence should start with a subject and should be followed by a verb and an object or
complete sentences. However, the participants demonstrate missing/wrong object, missing subject, and
missing verb in their essays.
1. Secondly, the dirties on the kitchen area. The school workers doesn't care weather the flies on
the food that is going to affect the students Vague
Correct sentence: Secondly, the kitchen area is very dirty and can affect the students’ health but
the workers don’t care about the cleanliness.
2. The dirty plates are and we have no appetite to eat consequently. Many feel themselves the
students always feel sick. Vague
Correct sentence: The plates are dirty and consequently, we do not have the appetite to eat. As a
result, many students fall sick.
3. Since the workers are not washing and sweeping properly the floor everyday the workers the
dust and dirts will fly around and stick in the food that the student will eat. Vague
Correct sentence: Since the workers are not washing and sweeping the floor properly everyday,
the dust and dirt fly around everywhere and stick onto the food that the student eats.
7. Conclusion
The results of the study show that errors that participants committed were basically grammatical. The
participants also had a relatively weak vocabulary and their sentences were sometimes
incomprehensible. They committed errors in applying sentence structure rules in the English language.
Hence, we can conclude that these participants have problems in acquiring normal grammatical rules in
English.
This study has shed light on the manner in which students internalize the rules of the TL. It
further shows that EA can help the teachers to identify in a systematic manner the specific and
common language problems students have, so that they can focus more attention on these types of
errors. Such an insight into language learning problems is useful to teachers because it provides
information on common trouble-spots in language learning which can be used in the preparation of
effective teaching materials. Also, by being able to predict errors to a certain extent, teachers can be
well-equipped to help students minimize or overcome their learning problems.
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