Page

Analysis
Analyzing possible issues and improvement
for each of Boxity's Homepage, Landing
Page's page, and Semplice's page
 Homepage
Analysis
Make it plural "Products".
Because we offer more than
just one product

Too wordy? Possible changes: Make it

Integrate Your Work simpler by
Integrate Every Work substituting
Modern Work Integration it with
"assist"

Repetitive? Alternate CTAs:

Get Started
Improve My Business
Integrate My Business
Digitize My Business
Talk To Us
Lets Discuss
 Homepage
Analysis
I think it is better to avoid
using apostrophes for
heading. Possible change:
Here is Why We Are Better
It is better to avoid words
that shows you are not
certain. Straightaway
removing the word
"might" shows how
certain our company is

Confusing to read?
Maybe change to "the
first year of your
subscription"
Homepage
Analysis
No need for a dash to
separate health and care,
just make it into one word
"healthcare"

Forgot to add space after

fullstop
 Homepage
Analysis

Forgot to add fullstop

Make it plural "Products".

Because we offer more than
just one product
Landing-Page Analysis

Make variety of CTA instead of

just the same CTA for all pages.

Suggestions:
Get Your Landing Page Now!
Scale up my business
Landing-Page Analysis
Something about the sentence
does not feel right. Suggestion:

- "we create and provide

professional quality services for
our clients"
Landing-Page Analysis
The correct term should be:

"they are happier than ever"

Possible change to make it more

appealing:

"jt" is an Indonesian "Landing page plans specially

word, maybe change curated for your business"
it to "mil" instead?

Should be written as "established

business"

Personally I'm not sure what is OTC and it

does not tell if it is one-time payment, or
monthly, or annually?
Semplice Page
Analysis

Weird sentence structure, possible change:

"Website that focuses on business..."

Alternate CTA:
- Use Semplice Now!
- Create Your Mini-Website Here
Semplice Page
Analysis

Not sure if this is on

purpose, or it should have
been written as "Why you
should use Semplice?"
 Semplice Page
Analysis
No need for the coma after
the word "modern". Should
just be written as:

- Modern and elegant

Alternate heading:
"Micro-site pricing plans for
your business"

Since we are
using English,
maybe change
the "rb" into "k"
instead