Writing task 2 – common line

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SUNIL PATEL
Taral Sir
Lecturer

Sunil Patel, 9574701128, patelsunil3256@gmail.com

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Manoj Patel, 8511639410, patidarmanoj@live.com

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Education
University
 A university is a place where “pebbles are polished, diamonds are
dimmed”. It self signifies the importance of university education. This
essay evaluates both sides of the arguments and agree with the
statement, the reason for which are elucidated in the following
paragraph.
 School
 The students are the base of any nation growth, who should be
empowered with wide array of knowledge and skills in such a
scenario the reason for which are elucidated in the following
paragraph.
 Education is a rudimentary right of each and every citizen.
 Education has transcended national barriers and enhanced its
scope globally.
 Education broadens people thinking and makes then unbiased.
 Education enrich one awareness to life.
 Proverb
 “Education is not the ending but is the end of beginning”.
 “Education is transmission of civilization”.
 “Education is not the process of life but it is life itself”.
 “Encouragement is nine-tenth of education”.
 “Make a candle to get light read a book to get it enlightened”.
 “All work and no play make a Jacks a dull boy”.
Example
 Kalpana Chawla- is a great astronaut

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 Indirani Nooyi- the CEO of PepsiCo

 Kiran Badi- the first women IPS officer
 A.R.Rahman- the great musician

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Mass media
 Main points:
 The role of mass media such as television, radio, newspaper and
internet is inform to educate, entertain and inform. By doing these,
they have profound influence of the life of people.
 The crucial role played by mass media in making people aware
about human rights is a very good example to prove the influence of
journalism.
 Developed country are coming knowledge based because of
progress mass media.
 Democracy and human rights have no existence without media.
 There are basically three modes of media print, electronic and
visual.
 The instant delivery of news and adequate prediction have caught
the imagination of the viewers.
 Example:
 Most of us never meet prime-minister or president but anyone who
is regularly exposed to media have an opinion on them.
 Example, the independence of women has greatly exposit mass
media.
 Proverb:
 “Seeing is believing”

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Advertising
 Main points:
 Advertising promote a materialistic approach to life which tempt
people to consume more offer particular products.

 Proverb:
 “When you visualise then you materialize”

 Conclusion:
 In today’s globalised world, it is natural for media to be global and to
have global impact.

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Crime
 Main points:
 The punishment should very according to age, gender and the
circumstances under which crime is committed.
 For some criminals, a long term jail is justifiable while in the case of
other, corrective education and rehabilitation.
 The inequalities income, wealth, and opportunities make many
people turn to crime.
 Nobody is criminal by but circumstances and situation of the life
make them criminals.
 However, there are some people who are perennial nuisance to
society, such people deserved long term jail, serial killers, rapist,
terrorist etc. Belong to this category.
 Proverb:
 “Criminals are victims, who create victims”
 “And eye for and eye, makes the whole world blind”
Example:
 To accused of Delhi gang rap case was executed which had justified
the victim Damini.
 Kasab, the terrorist, who was entered the death penalty, for the
notorious terrorist attack Taj hotel in Mumbai.
 Vishmay shah, the sun of renowned doctor is it present 5 years in
the hit and run case.

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Health
 Main points:
 As per WHO “health is a complete state of physical, mental and
spiritual well-being and not merely the absence of diseases or
infirmity”.
 People are blindly running behind aggressive materialization which is
in the root cause of ever worsening health of people.
 Excessive intact of fast-food, coupled with lack of exercise further
account to the issue.
 Mc Donald is having 30000 outlet is more then 30 centres. Its grow
popularity of fast-food.
 It is not hygienic as it leads to many diseases like obesity, diabetes,
hypertension and other heart issue.
 In today’s past paced life where women are excelling in each and
every field. Cooking traditional food has become the thing of the past.
In sharp contrast fast-food is easy cook and avail.
 Add on to this, mental health is as crucial as to physical health, as in
today’s fast moving world people suffers from rampant stress which
engenders to diseases like insomnia, diabetes, and stocks.

 Example:
 As per recent surveys, every 7 minute 1 person dies because of
tuberculosis which is accruable diseases.
 More than 52% Indian children are mal-nourished the initiative taken
by schools to educate children and their family to fight against
dengue. It self proves the importance of schools to educate people.

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 We should emphasis on organic intensive farming.

 Proverb:
 “health is wealth”
 “health is not valued”, still sickness knocks”
 “health mind thewels into healthy bodies”
 “When wealth is lost, something is lost but when health is lost,
everything is lost”.
 “Good start a day is almost half work done”
 “well begun half work done”

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Animal
 Main points:
 We are divined with so many beautiful things on this world and one of
them is animals which are the important species of flora and fauna.
 One should conserved animal in sanctuary as the find there natural
habitat here which adds to death longevity, for instance, an elephant
in a zoo is likely to survive for 50 years while in century for 125
years.
 There are the important members of the eco-system extinction of
any of the species would have significant impact on food changes.
 Example:
 For example, there is Gir centuary for the conservation of lion and
Run-Runthambhor national park for tigers, which is an endangered
species.

 Research on animals
 Test on animal is the violation of animal rights.
 The pharmaceutical and cosmetic industries test their products on
animal before making them available to people.
 Ducks have different effects on people and animal so research are
hypothetical.

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Technology
 Main points:
 Everything undergoes a sea of change over a period of time as
change is but natural.
 Nano-technology offers astounding possibilities in all vokes of human
life by reducing wastage.
 Nano-technology coupled with bio-technology has made significant
progress in health-care, education and environment.
 Perhaps, bio-technology will wipe-out poverty which is still the world
anyme of mankind.
 An afforestation and environmental rehabilitation programs may
resolve some of the problems caused to the environment by human
activity.
 Now the human genome project has become successful and over
fight against many diseases has become victims.
 Cell transplant instead of organ transplant has recolonized the
treatment of diseases.
 By getting proactive and futuristic we can make the changes of
favourable to us.
 Proverb:
 “Technology is a good servant but a bad master ”
 “Technology has made it possible to have control over everything
expect over technology”
 “Necessity is a mother of all invention”
 Example

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 For instance, people now a days access the wide range of both national
and international products at and affordable rate.

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Travelling
 Main points:
 Traveling is a leisure activity which is pursued by rich people of the
society who have higher amount of disposable income.
 Since, the origin of species and homo sapiens people have been
travelling into different part of the world in search of new pasture
which has been made traveling inevitable.
 Traveling enhances one’s awareness to life and makes people
unbiased.
 It’s pursue foreign exchange in the economy of host country that
accounts to vertical economic growth and horizontal developments.
 It is a leisure activity which is for fun and recreation.
 Advantages:
 It leads to exchange of culture and tradition.
 People can overcome the loopholes of own culture.
 Its leads to single culture.
 It’s enhances horizons of people.
 Most country earn exchange.
 Improves diplomatic perpetual relationship among country.
 It’s makes aware about a distant possibilities.
 Its flourished domestic regions, hospitality travel and tourism
industry.
 Disadvantages:
 Its ruin own culture and tradition.
 The youngster get addicted to bad habits.
 It damaged environment and human health.

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 Deforestation is employed for construction and infrastructure.

 It hampers a heritage side by teaching and tracing.
 It increasing the price of basic amenities.

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Museum
 Main points:
 Museum is a place to keep antiques and interesting objects for the
public to see and observed.
 There are different types of museum such as war museum, science
museum, and natural historical museum.
 People visit museum for enjoyment, education and entertainment.
 Museum could provide more information then what several clouds to
provide.
 Science museum saw as model for several species of flora and
fauna.
 War museum so many weapons used in the bygone days and they are
enable us to have comparison of them with present weapons.
 Museum consumed our culture tradition and value of life.
 In depicts our origin and history.

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Culture and Tradition

 Main points:
 Culture has defined has the totality of positive qualities of a group of
people.
 Culture includes belief, rules of behaviour, language and art, style of
dress, religion rituals, political system etc.
 People are not become with culture but they have to acquire it.
 Weddings in India are times of great celebration, expense and
feasting.
 The selection of the spouse depends upon nature of the family.
 Indians are generally religions and family oriented. There lives are
deported traditional spirituality. Family are generally large and in
forms the basic unit of rural Indian society. The elders are respected
and cared by the family.
 The father is regarded as the head on the family.
 Women are ready to sacrifice their personal comfort for welfare of
families and guest. Women are generally respected by both young
and old.
 Opinion of elders are considered as the worlds of wisdom. Here the
teacher is mentored parents are worshiped.

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Global Concern
 Main points:
 The world has been suffering from many burning issues and one of
them is -; which is should is resolved by the conscious efforts of both
individual and “prevention is better than cure”.
Reason:-
 Population hiking by leads and bounds
 Excessive industrialization
 E-wastage
 Extensive access private transportation
 Deforestation
 Disposable culture
 Use of plastic and plastic bags
 Research on radioactive material
 Lack of suage management
Measures:-
 Reduce, reuse, refuse
 Go concern
 Use of renewable resources
 Banned plastic
 Civic sense
 Awareness and comparing
 Use of public transportation
 Garbage disposable
Body 2 initiative:-

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 Significantly serious steps are needed to be taken as,” stich in time

saves nine”.

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Adventures sports
 Main points:
 Extreme sports, action sports aggro sports
 Extreme sports by their nature can be extremely dangerous,
conductive to facilities, near-facilities and other serious injury.
 The imminent and inherent danger in this sports has been considered
an unnecessary part which is partially a result of pressure for
athletes to make more money and provide maximum entertainment.
 Extreme sports are gaining in popularity among all age groups and it
is strongly argue that such life threating game should be banned.
 Dangerous sports prostrates negative picture of sport in society.
 Such sports are involved great name and fame and the youth in
order to gain the same copy of them but they ignore the risk of life.
 Lifelong industry associated with such games.
 It involves speed, height and high level of physical extension example,
rafting, rock point, rock-climbing ice-climbing etc.

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City side and country side

 Main point:
 If you look and around the globe each and every country whether
developed or undeveloped they comprise of rural and urban regions,
the ever widening gap between them has become an issue of debate
for most of the country.
Reasons:-
 Lack of education
 Lack of basic survival needs (therapeutic services, freshwater,
transportation, infrastructure, electricity and defines.
 Conventional method of agriculture.
 Lack of opportunities.
 Orthodox and superstitious.
Measures:-
 Free compulsory education.
 Investment in therapeutic services.
 Government should invest in 5 years plan.
 Government announced country side as SEZ.
 Subsidies and interest free loans.
 Use of technology in farming for example drip emigration.

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Art history and music

 Art:
 Art is a natural inheritance which is possessed by very few people of
the society.
 Freedom of expression is one of the fundamental rise of every human
being which is enshrined in the consumption of all democrats all the
worlds.
 There is a demand for different expression of art has believe in world
were stress and tension are but a realities.
 For example, Leonardo Vinci’s Mona Lisa creates different impression
on people who look at eat. In the bygone days which there were
governmental invention, people could produce wonderful work of art.
 History:
 History depicts the study of the past which takes a person inside into
wise and fall of civilisation.
 It’s elaborated our culture, tradition and other aspects of the life.
 We can learn from the history about why and how we have changed.
 Add on to this, we can learn from the mistakes of our predaceous.
 Music
 Music is a one kind of tonic which remove stress and helps us to come
out of hectic life style.
 It could rejuvenate from our routine life by availing a change,”change is
the spice of life”.
 Music inspire our emotion and gives sensational delight.

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