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EAPPQ1 - Module2 Week3-4
EAPPQ1 - Module2 Week3-4
EAPPQ1 - Module2 Week3-4
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LESSON 4
THESIS STATEMENT OF AN
ACADEMIC TEXT
WHAT I KNOW
Directions: In your answer sheet, write true if the statement supports the
principle of thesis statement; write false if otherwise.
1. Thesis Statement is the first sentence at the beginning of each
paragraph.
2. It makes a claim that other people may dispute, challenge, or oppose.
3. It is a question in response to the writing assignment
4. It is a road map for a paper; it tells the reader what the paper will focus
on.
5. It is a simple statement of fact
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6. The first thing you should do after receiving your writing prompt is write
your thesis statement.
7. A good thesis statement is a broad generalization about your topic.
8. "Blue printed" thesis statement is a statement that includes the main
areas of support in the order you will introduce them in your essay and
thus acts as a blue print for the essay.
9. The Yankee Doodle Restaurant is a great place to eat, because the staff
is friendly, the food is delicious, and the atmosphere is relaxing is an
example of blue printed thesis statement.
10. A thesis statement should reflect the main idea of an essay.
WHAT IS IT
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• If so, settle on one single focus and then proceed with further
development.
3. Is your thesis statement too general?
Original thesis:
There are serious objections to today's horror movies.
Revised theses:
Today's slasher movies fail to deliver the emotional catharsis that 1930s
horror films did.
These words tell the reader next to nothing if you do not carefully explain
what you mean by them. Never assume that the meaning of a sentence is
obvious. Check to see if you need to define your terms (” socialism,"
"conventional," "commercialism," "society"), and then decide on the most
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appropriate place to do so. Do not assume, for example, that you have the same
understanding of what “society” means as your reader. To avoid
misunderstandings, be as specific as possible.
Compare the original thesis (not specific and clear enough) with the
revised version (much more specific and clearer):
Original thesis: Although the timber wolf is a timid and gentle animal, it is being
systematically exterminated. [if it's so timid and gentle -- why is it being
exterminated?]
Revised thesis: Although the timber wolf is actually a timid and gentle animal, it
is being systematically exterminated because people wrongfully believe it to be a
fierce and cold-blooded killer.
Revised: any great action verb you can connect: "to generate," "to demolish,"
"to batter," "to revolt," "to discover," "to flip," "to signify," "to endure..."
POST ASSESSMENT
Directions: Read the following statements very carefully. Select only one more
effective thesis in the introductory paragraph of a short essay. Keep in mind that
an effective thesis statement should be sharply focused and specific, not just a
general statement of fact. Write the letter of your answer in your answer sheet.
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2. A. There is no question that cell phones have changed our lives in a
very big way.
B. While cell phones provide freedom and mobility, they can also
become a leash, compelling users to answer them anywhere and at
any time.
3. A. Finding a job is never easy, but it can be especially hard when the
economy is still feeling the effects of a recession and employers are
reluctant to hire new workers.
4. A. For the past three decades, coconut oil has been unjustly criticized
as an artery-clogging saturated fat.
5. A. There have been over 200 movies about Count Dracula, most of
them only very loosely based on the novel published by Bram Stoker in
1897.
B. The iPad, with its relatively large high-definition screen, has helped
to revitalize the comic book industry.
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9. A. Like other addictive behaviors, Internet addiction may have serious
negative consequences, including academic failure, job loss, and a
breakdown in personal relationships.
B. Drug and alcohol addiction is a major problem in the world today,
and many people suffer from it.
https://www.thoughtco.com/exercise-in-identifying-effective-thesis
ADDITIONAL ACTIVITIES
Open this link below to enhance your skill in identifying thesis Statement:
https://human.libretexts.org/Bookshelves/Composition/Book
%3A_Basic_Reading_and_Writing_(Lumen)/Module_2%3A_Critical_Reading/
2.05%3A_Identifying_Thesis_Statements
LESSON 5
OUTLINING
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Competency 5: Outlines Reading Texts in Various Disciplines
Learning Objectives: At the end of the lesson, the learners shall be able to:
1. define outlining;
2. identify the various techniques in outlining; and
3. make an outline of the various academic texts.
WHAT I KNOW
3. Tavis is writing an essay on the features of the ocean floor, which idea
doesn't belong in his essay?
A. The ocean floor is a very interesting part of Earth.
B. Volcanoes can spew hot lava everywhere.
C. There are many parts to the ocean floor.
5. What is a hook?
A. opening sentence that captures the reader's attention
B. the last sentence of a paragraph
C. a tool used to catch a fish
D. a boring sentence
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WHAT IS IT
What is Outlining?
To outline, you must create a linear, organized plan for your paper that
shows the main ideas that you will discuss as well as their relationships within
the paper.
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• The terms Introduction, Body, and Conclusion do not have to be included
in the outline. They are not topics; they are merely organizational units in
the writer’s mind.
I. MAIN IDEA
A. Subsidiary idea or supporting idea to I
B. Subsidiary idea or supporting idea to I
1. Subsidiary idea to B
2. Subsidiary idea to B
a. Subsidiary idea to 2
b. Subsidiary idea to 2
It is up to the writer to decide on how many main ideas and supporting ideas
adequately describe the subject. However, traditional form dictates that if there
is a I in the outline, there has to be a II; if there is an A, there has to be a B; and
so forth.
The following outline is for a 5-7-page paper discussing the link between
educational attainment and health. Review the other sections of this page for
more detailed information about each component of this outline!
I. Introduction
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II. Background
V. Major Point 3: Physical health and mental health correlate directly with
one another.
VI. Major Point 4: People with more financial worries have more stress and
worse physical health.
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B. Minor Point 2: Financial problems are often correlated with unhealthy
lifestyle choices such unhealthy food choices, overconsumption/abuse
of alcohol, chain smoking, abusive relationships, etc. (cite sources).
VII. Conclusion
I. Family Problems
A. Custodial: Non-custodial Conflicts
B. Extended Family
C. Adolescent's Age
WHAT'S MORE
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Activity 1.
Directions: The column on the left contains a list of points that are not in any
specific order. Plug the unorganized points into the classic outline format on the
right to achieve a logical, organized structure. Copy the table below and write
your answer in your answer sheet following the outline on the right column.
Thesis: College provides an environment for intellectual, social, and
physical growth.
ADDITIONAL ACTIVITIES
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Activity 2.
Directions: Read and analyze the text very carefully and create a topic outline
or a sentence outline. Write your answer in your answer sheet
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Your teeth and the structure of your mouth play important roles in your
ability to eat, speak, and stay healthy. Everyone has several different types of
teeth. Each type has a unique name with specific number of teeth, has
development, has a slightly different shape, and performs different jobs and
purpose.
The teeth in the front of your mouth, and the easiest to see, are called
incisors. There are four incisors on the top and four on the bottom. Incisors are
usually the first teeth to erupt — at around 6 months for your baby teeth, and
between ages 6 and 8 for your adult set. Incisors are shaped like tiny chisels
with flat ends that are sharp. These teeth are used for cutting and chopping
food. They are the first teeth to chew most food we eat.
The pointed teeth on either side of your incisors are called canine teeth.
People have a total of four canine teeth, two on top and two on the bottom.
Primary canines generally appear between 16 and 20 months, with the upper
canines coming in just ahead of the lower canines. Because they are pointed
and sharp, they are used to tear food.
Next to your canine teeth are the premolars. You have eight premolars in
all, four on top and four on the bottom. The first premolars appear around age
10, with the second premolars arriving about a year later. They have a
completely different shape than both the incisors and canines. That is because
premolars are bigger, stronger, and have ridges – all of which makes them
perfect for crushing and grinding food.
Finally, there are your molars. You have eight of these, four on the top
and four on the bottom. Molars are the toughest of the teeth. They are wider and
stronger than premolars, and they have more ridges. Molars work closely with
your tongue to help you swallow food. The tongue sweeps chewed food to the
back of your mouth, where the molars grind it until it is mashed up and ready to
be swallowed.
By age twenty, four more molars grow in the back of the mouth, one in
each corner. These are called the wisdom teeth. They appear between 12 and
28 months, People do not need wisdom teeth now, but many years ago these
teeth were necessary to help people chew tough plants, which were an
important part of the human diet. Now, many people get their wisdom teeth
pulled by a dentist, a doctor who takes care of teeth, to keep them from
crowding their other teeth.
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The next time you eat, pay attention to which teeth do which jobs. Having
a cookie? Incisors do a good job of biting into that tasty treat. What about a
carrot? Those molars get the job done, not the teeth in front. How about a slice
of pizza or a piece of bread? Your canines will help you tear at the food, and
your premolars and molars will help you grind up that pepperoni pizza or peanut
butter and jelly sandwich.
POST ASSESSMENT
Directions: Study the outlines based on the passages and answer the questions
that follow. Write the letter of your choice in your answer sheet.
I. English Lab
A. Physical Plant
1. in Administration building
2. two adjoining rooms
B. Resources
1. computers
2. video stations
2.In the above outline, which is the most important idea?
A. English Lab
B. Resources
C. Computers
D. Two adjoining rooms
E. Physical Plant
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3.In the above outline, which is the more important idea?
A. Physical Plant
B. Resources
C. Physical Plant and Resources are equal
adjoining rooms
D. Two adjoining rooms
E. computers
4.In the above outline...
A. you could substitute "in the Administration building" with "two
adjoining rooms"
B. you could flip "Resources" with "computers"
C. you could exchange "Physical Plant" with "English Lab"
D. and still not change the meaning of the outline.
E. you should be in the Administration building
I. The Internet
A. What it is
B. Web Sites
1. How to see them
2. How to save the information
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B. What it is
C. How to save the information
D. are all equal.
E. What shall I do
I. Types of measurement
A. Volume
1.Quarts
2.Pints
3.Gallons
B. Length
1.Miles
2.Feet
3.Inches
II. Types of money
A. United States
1.Pesos
2.Cents
B. Other Countries
1.Lira
2.Yen
3.Francs
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C. Types of measurement
D. Pints
E. Quarts
10. If you had to add the word "meters" to the outline, where would it go?
A. as number 4 under B - "Other Countries"
B. as number 4 under B - "Length"
C. as number 3 under A - "United States" D. as C under II-"Types of
Money"
D. as new section III.
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WHAT I HAVE LEARNED
GETTING DEEPER!
Lesson:
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KEY TO ANSWERS!
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