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Clinspy - Argumentative Essay - Ni Putu Sitha Regina Pramesti
Clinspy - Argumentative Essay - Ni Putu Sitha Regina Pramesti
pandemic?
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Abundant factors have contributed to the increased mental health issues during
Covid-19. The combined presence of fear caused by the pandemic (e.g., worrying about a
family member with chronic disease) and financial hardships (e.g., fear of poverty) is
correlated with higher stress and anxiety (Salameh et al., 2020). Another finding by Gao et al.
(2020) showed that excessive exposure to social media (e.g., false information) also
positively correlates with anxiety and the combination of anxiety and depression (CDA).
These examples visualized the decreasing mental health and the urgency of attending
intervention usually consists of modules and exercises divided into the self-guided or
therapist-guided program, aiming to create positive change for people with mental health-
related assistance (Barak et al., 2009). However, the question is “does online therapy is the
best solution?” This essay believes that online therapy is a necessary and convenient
solution to mental health issues. However, another option, such as blended therapy, should
also be considered to a certain degree. This essay will elaborate on how knowledge and
preference of online therapy and explain why coach-guided intervention programs are more
between web-based therapy and blended therapy, therapists who had already used
computer or media support in their practice are more likely to have positive attitudes about
e-therapy (Schuster et al., 2018). From this finding, the article assumes that therapists'
preferences in countries with less advanced online health services are less likely to use
blended therapy (i.e., integration of face-to-face therapy and online therapy), therapists'
opinions were shifted. Despite online therapy benefits of having good accessibility,
flexibility, and cheaper cost, Schuster et al. (2018) mentioned that therapists were concerned
with the lack of nonverbal signals, missing important disease aspects and problems in the
therapeutic process, or dealing in crisis which is handled by blended intervention with less
challenge. This doubt about online therapy is caused because people were not familiar with
the empirical evidence of successful intervention online. One of the pieces of evidence shows
therapy (ICBT) is effective for anxiety disorders and depression intervention (Păsărelu et al.,
2017). The writer believes that promoting positive attitudes about online therapy through
primary prevention, such as psychoeducation in health facilities and schools, will open
broader knowledge for psychologists' perspectives on online therapy and attract possible
prefer online therapy. Because digital treatments were thought to be more suitable for those
depression (70%), moderate depression (57%), and 27% for severe depression. Meanwhile,
ICBT's recommendation rates are 47%, 16%, and 2%, respectively (Topooco et al., 2017). The
readers should bear in mind that the article was written before the pandemic. However,
some care systems are viewed as lacking in the preparation of internet-based interventions.
Thus, the writer believes that blended therapy should consider people with severe forms of
depression. Schuster et al. (2018) demonstrate that therapists also believe that higher
treatment intensification, quality, and suitability with a broader range of clients in blended
therapy are shown by a slightly higher mean than online therapy. As long as the therapist
and the client followed the protocol of covid-19, such as wearing masks, applied hand-
sanitizer, and socially distancing themselves, blended therapy would be beneficial for
decreasing risks such as suicides attempt that is more likely to happen for people with
severe depression.
are recommended online therapy that demonstrates similar outcomes to those found in
regular CBT; on the contrary, self-guided ICBT is concerned with clients' worsening signs of
deterioration. A contributing factor such as vulnerable people with low economic income
caused by the pandemic has limited access to available treatment services. In which self-
automated emails or texts (Barak et al., 2009). However, Holst et al. (2017) show that
primary care patients value the need for face-to-face meetings with the therapist, which
guides the ICBT process through check-ups. The therapist's feedback can be done through
(Barak et al., 2009). Because without meetings with therapists, clients are not pressured to
look at the therapist in the eye and easily lied. Holst et al. (2017) also mentioned the
importance of the client's perception that someone is attentively listening and encouraging
them. Self-guidance ICBT can give too much responsibility to the client, and they can crash
in solitude with the notice of the healthcare clinician. Thus, it is preferable to choose a
To sum up, increased mental health issues in the covid-19 pandemic are caused by
many factors: fear caused by the pandemic, financial poverty, and frequent exposure to
social media. These causes demonstrate that therapy, especially online therapy, is a solution
that desperately needed during the pandemic. However, some people will have negative
attitudes toward online therapy and vice versa based on their knowledge and experience of
Furthermore, clients with severe mental health problems (e.g., severe depression) can choose
blended therapy into consideration to prevent suicide risks. However, those with milder
mental health problems are recommended to use internet-based intervention, especially the
Barak, A., Klein, B., & Proudfoot, J. G. (2009). Defining Internet-Supported Therapeutic
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Gao, J., Zheng, P., Jia, Y., Chen, H., Mao, Y., Chen, S., Wang, Y., Fu, H., & Dai, J. (2020).
Mental health problems and social media exposure during COVID-19 outbreak. PLoS
Holst, A., Nejati, S., Björkelund, C., Eriksson, M. C. M., Hange, D., Kivi, M., Wikberg, C., &
therapy in primary care. Scandinavian Journal of Primary Health Care, 35(1), 46–53.
https://doi.org/10.1080/02813432.2017.1288813
Păsărelu, C. R., Andersson, G., Bergman Nordgren, L., & Dobrean, A. (2017). Internet-
delivered transdiagnostic and tailored cognitive behavioral therapy for anxiety and
Salameh, P., Hajj, A., Badro, D. A., Abou Selwan, C., Aoun, R., & Sacre, H. (2020). Mental
https://doi.org/https://doi.org/10.1016/j.psychres.2020.113520
Schuster, R., Pokorny, R., Berger, T., Topooco, N., & Laireiter, A.-R. (2018). The Advantages
and Disadvantages of Online and Blended Therapy: Survey Study Amongst Licensed
https://doi.org/http://dx.doi.org/10.2196/11007
Topooco, N., Riper, H., Araya, R., Berking, M., Brunn, M., Chevreul, K., Cieslak, R., Ebert, D.
D., Etchmendy, E., Herrero, R., Kleiboer, A., Krieger, T., García-Palacios, A., Cerga-
Pashoja, A., Smoktunowicz, E., Urech, A., Vis, C., & Andersson, G. (2017). Attitudes