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Mass Media

Mass Media
by ADRIAN HILARY DILO ANAK JOHN KEPLY Moe

General metrics
2,468 390 21 1 min 33 sec 3 min 0 sec
characters words sentences reading speaking
time time

Score Writing Issues

47 45 22 23
Issues left Critical Advanced

This text scores better than 47%

of all texts checked by Grammarly

Writing Issues
22 Correctness
6 Wrong or missing prepositions
3 Incorrect verb forms
6 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
2 Faulty subject-verb agreement
1 Conjunction use
1 Incorrect noun number
2 Comma misuse within clauses
1 Confused words

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Unique Words 46%

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percentage of words used only once in your
document

Rare Words 35%

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that are not among the 5,000 most common English
words.

Word Length 5.2

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Sentence Length 18.6

Measures average sentence length words per sentence

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Mass Media
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High-speed Internet has contributed positivity throughout the pandemic. It has
helped people connect with their loved ones when lockdowns were initiated,
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and soon after, jobs start to introduce 'work-from-home' concept which highly
depends on mass media platforms. Mass media is also where teenagers and
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adults alike interact with virtual communities across the globe and has proven
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to give an impact to teenagers. Mass media greatly in uences teenagers today
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which increases social awareness, higher interaction rate, but it also poses
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high risk of scams.

Firstly, teenagers gain an increase in their social awareness through mass

media. The many platforms of social media made it easier for anyone to upload
a post to be seen by the world through social media and the majority of users
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are teenagers. Take for example, the saddening news of Her Majesty Queen
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Elizabeth II's passing was announced through mass media from television,
radio and social media. People across the globe received the news quickly and
it proves that social awareness even among teenagers increases with the help
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of mass media. Therefore, mass media has increase and in uences teenagers
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in social awareness.

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Next, mass media promotes higher interaction rate among teenagers.
Teenagers start to invest their time by creating server rooms on Discord, Twitch
and many other platforms to interact with their virtual community. These
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servers also allow them to do a live-stream of games they are playing as well as
interact with their subscribers around the world. Through Twitch streams,

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teenagers are also able to gain donations from subscribers or even getting paid
by Twitch as an incentive. Therefore, the higher interaction rate through mass
media platforms in uences teenagers in their social interactions.

However, there are cons to mass media. Teenagers are at high risk of getting
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scammed while they are on mass media platforms. We have all heard of 'Macau
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Scam' and 'Love Scam' across several countries which impacts the livelihood of
the victim. Scammers do anything they can do to get money out from their
victims and with little to no supervision by adults, teenagers could easily fall
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victim into these scams. Therefore, the mass media poses a threat to teenagers
with this scam.

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As a conclusion, the mass media has its advantages than its disadvantages. It
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has helped the world connect and made communication easier especially
among teenagers in the age of digitalisation.

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1. to positivity Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

2. has Incorrect verb forms Correctness

3. the 'work-from-home' Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

4. has → have Faulty subject-verb agreement Correctness

5. to → on Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

6. and higher Conjunction use Correctness

7. rate → rates Incorrect noun number Correctness

8. a high Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

9. , for Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

10. from → on Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

11. increase → increased Incorrect verb forms Correctness

12. in Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

13. a higher Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

14. live-stream → live stream Confused words Correctness

15. getting → get Incorrect verb forms Correctness

16. the 'Macau Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

17. impacts → impact Faulty subject-verb agreement Correctness

18. into → to Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

19. As → In Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

20. a conclusion Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

21. the mass Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

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22. , especially Comma misuse within clauses Correctness

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