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Tran Nguyen Khang - Portfolio Writing Task 2 - 2nd Draft
Tran Nguyen Khang - Portfolio Writing Task 2 - 2nd Draft
Student
Name: Khang Tran S3935748
number:
Simon
EU-S422203A 17/04/2022
Class: Teachers: Worden Date:
Word 588
Count:
Student self – assessment: Select Good OK or need to improve for each area
Correct sentence
Used teacher OK
structure, subject OK
feedback to improve verb agreement
and punctuation
Structure & Planning Vocabulary
Logically ordered,
cohesive (linking OK New vocabulary OK
words, pronouns)
Made and followed a OK
Spelling & Word OK
plan. Forms
false alarms because of system problems or human-caused and with many false
alarms, when there is a real alarm, people ignore and do not heed the warnings
given. The above solutions only be used for a short time, so we must take long-
term measures
To sum up, flood is a highly destructive natural disaster for many countries around
the world. However, with short-term measures in the short term and long-term
measures in the more distant future, people will certainly control floods.
Word
s:588