Perú,

17/05/2022

Dear,

My name is SeCOND, I hope you are in very good health and are having an
extraordinary day, the person who writes to you is your best friend with whom you
have had a friendship since you were very little, who writes this letter to you with
great affection and appreciation, from Peru, City of Trujillo
It's been a long time since you went to Spain, it's true that while you were there and I
here in Peru, we still contacted each other through WhatsApp, but something had to
happen for my cell phone to get lost and lose your cell phone number, that’s why I
chose to write you a letter and send you by mail.
Well, I know you remember my mother, the shortest of the whole family and the one
who always liked to go on excursions with your mom and her other friends, because
she has been planning this trip for more than a year, as well as saving for a long time
the money needed for the excursion to the city of Lima and you may have wanted us
to invite you and come with us to enjoy this beautiful Date where we celebrate the
National Holidays in Peru.
On July 28 in the morning we will find ourselves watching the civic parade and the Great
Military parade, where the military, schoolchildren, and Paso horses will parade, this will
take place throughout the Avenida Brazil, then at the end of the first event we will go to
the gastronomic contest, where they will exhibit all kinds of gastronomic dishes as well
as we will taste all the tasty typical dishes, such as Papa la huancaína, Ceviche and
many more I know you do not like the cream of the papa la huancaína but well, we'll see
what you order from eat, at the end we will go to the Plaza de Arms in Lima where we
will be spectators of typical dances of Peru and we will take some photos to remember.
I know that the trip is a bit expensive from Spain to Peru, but I hope you tell your mom
about this letter and that they are encouraged to come and spend a nice time on an
excursion with us. Good friend, I say goodbye with a big hug from a distance and wish
you to continue focused on your studies, never give up and keep going, good luck in
everything! Your best friend Second.

. P.S.: Answer me soon as possible.

Attentively:

CRITICAL OPINION
This opinion is not to belittle your work, colleague Luis, but rather
to be able to give you some advice on how your letter should
have ended. In itself, your writing is very well planned, you
respected the adjectives and you expressed your daily routines,
but I think I needed to add a touch of more enthusiasm in such a
way that Azucena feels much more eager to want to come and
spend a little time with you. That's all-mate Thanks!