GPPW - Writing Assignment: Globalisation – Friend or Foe?

Write an essay of between 250 and 300 words on the topics that follows.

You will find a framework for planning. Please Note that you will have to submit both the planning sheet and final
essay for assessment.

Include everything you have learnt: SDGs, lenses and perspectives, arguments, etc

Globalisation – Friend or Foe?

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28.09.22

Globalization is the main key

Globalization is a key for
for humanity to develop and
humanity’s development
stay together

developed countries each time

create more and more advanced
technologies and people from all
over the world adopt these
technologies and can work with the
whole world on an equal footing
Sharing new informational
technologies with world
Globalisation has several pros
Standardization of living

globalization enables countries

to fight against poverty and
improve the standard of living
of the people.
Globalizations leads to competition
appears, which leads to the fact that
international corporations introduce
more and more new and affordable
products to the market.
Extensions of market
Globalisation increases
inequality and interference
of the most economically
developed states in the
internal politics of the less
developed

Globalisation has its disadvantages, however they still be overlapped by many

cons and be the most powerful force for global development.
GPPW - Writing Assignment: Globalisation – Friend or Foe?

Globalization has become increasingly common in the modern world. This concept means that the world unites
its economy, politics, resources, technologies, cultures and society. With other words world is “shrinking”. To
my mind, globalization is a main key for world to stabile develop and make the world better place for everyone.

Firstly, transfer of technology is one of the most common sentence that used in describing pros of
globalization. Countries can change with their discoveries and improvements in technology development, for
instance, fair dedicated to the energy technologies of the future, which was held in Astana in 2017. The
exhibition was attended by representatives of 115 countries and shared their vision of the "energy of the
future".

Globalization sets the world standards for people's lives, thanks to the fact that countries and politicians are
united. So, for example, in order to solve global problems, the United Nations created 17 sustainable
development goals and 163 countries agreed to them. Standardization leads countries to try to meet the
requirements of the world community. Standardization leads countries to try to meet the requirements of the
world community. The government is trying to improve the quality of life of people, for example, to eradicate
poverty, hunger, reduce child mortality and achieve gender equality in all sectors of society. For instance, to
achieve the goal of reducing poverty, the United Nations helped Kazakhstan distributed 6.6 million dollars (due
to https://kazakhstan.un.org/en/sdgs)

Globalization of markets is one of the most fascinating developments of this century. Its impact on economic
transactions, processes, institutions, and players is dramatic and wide ranging. Market expansion is one of the
most necessary parts of globalization. People from all over the world can see goods from all over the world on
their shelves. In this case, Apple became the world's largest smartphone retailer in the fourth quarter of 2020,
with a company-record share of 23.4%. It is reported by Reuters with reference to the research company IDC.

On the other hand, globalization has disadvantages for people’s life. Globalization can lead to an increase in
social inequality, due to the fact that the level of education and technology development in the world is
increasing. Thus, the number of highly qualified foreign workers is increasing, and they are willing to work for
lower wages. For instance, all dominated MNCs in the world are located in the United States, this companies
are buying cheaper labor from developing or underdeveloped countries for their manufactures. China, India and
Africa are common examples of this. It increases the employment of such countries, however they are lagging
behind relatively developed countries.

To conclude globalization has its disadvantages, however they still be overlapped by many cons and be the
most powerful force for global development
GPPW - Writing Assignment: Globalisation – Friend or Foe?

SUMMATIVE ASSESSMENT FOR THE UNIT 1.

This must be complete as the evidence of your learning progress and submitted by SEPTEMBER 30.
Arguments
In class, you have explored globalization and looked at it from different perspectives.
Subject Reference Learning Objectives Success criteria:
 Learners have met this Learning Objective if they have:
CO3 demonstrate that they have planned their argument
 develop an argument that is supported demonstrate that they have the skill of developing an argument that is supported
develop and with some reasons and evidence with reasons and evidence
present reasoning, written an argument with some structure
argument and
 present an argument with some
structure that is mostly clear written an argument that is mostly clear
claims reached conclusions that are generally related to their reasoning and evidence
 reach conclusions that are generally argued the point and supported their claim / conclusion through different
CO4 perspectives
related to reasoning and evidence
select and use used technical terms
appropriate  select and use some technical terms used prior knowledge and research to support their argument
technical terms
and cite  use some sources to support argument
references
TASK: Write an argument of between 250 and 300 words on the following topic:

Globalisation – Friend or Foe?

GPPW: Grade: 11 ARGUMENTS - Globalisation – Friend or Foe?

Beginning (1 pt) Developing (2 pt) Proficient (3 pt) Excellent(4 pt)

Planning Planning partially Planning completed, but not Planning completed and Planning is well thought
completed. well thought through and with thought through. Effort was through and shows that
minimal effort made. deconstruction and
reconstruction took place.

The argument Doesn’t say what the Arguable claim is buried, Makes an arguable claim but Clearly states an arguable
argument or claim is. confused and/or unclear. does not propose a solution, claim. Proposes a solution,
course of action or new course of action or a new way
approach to the topic. to approach the topic.

Claims in support of Does not give convincing
the argument claims in support of the
argument.
Gives 1 or 2 weak claims that
don’t fully support argument
and/or irrelevant or confusing
reasons.
Outlines supporting claims,
but may overlook important
reasons.
Gives clear and accurate
supporting claims in support
of the argument. Uses logic
with facts, statistics, research
and named sources.

Reasons against the Does not acknowledge or
argument or claim discuss the reasons against
the argument or supporting
claim.
Says that there are reasons
against the argument or
supporting argument but
doesn’t discuss it specifically
Discusses the reasons against
overall argument or
supporting claim but leaves
some reasons out and /or
don’t explain why the claim
still stands
Discusses the reasons against
overall argument or
supporting claim and
explains why it is valid
anyway.

Organization, Writing is aimless and
Sentence fluency and disorganised.
Word choice Many run-ons, fragments
and awkward phrasing
makes for difficult reading.
The same words are used
over and over again. Some
words may be confusing to
the reader.
Writing is organised, but not
well structured and can go off
topic Sentences are
sometimes awkward and/or
contain run-ons and
fragments. Word choice or
usage is often inappropriate or
wrong.
Writing has a beginning,
middle and end. It is
organized, but could be more
compelling.
Well-constructed sentences,
making use of routine word
choices.
Writing has a compelling
opening, an informative
middle and satisfying
conclusion.
Sentences are clear, complete
and of varied length. Words
used are apt, varied and
effective.

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