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Superfluous - by Neetu Maim
Superfluous - by Neetu Maim
(SENTENCE IMPROVEMENT)
1. Please report to me when you return 3. The university asked him to return
back from Delhi. back the funds allotted for the
(1) you have returned back from project.
(2) you return from (1) No improvement
(3) you returned back from (2) to bring back the funds
(4) No improvement (3) to settle the funds
(SSC Section Officer (Audit) (4) to return the funds
Exam. 09.09.2001)
(SSC CAPFs SI, CISF ASI & Delhi
2. The article should not exceed more Police SI Exam, 21.06.2015
than hundred words. IInd Sitting)
1. (2) ‘Return and back’ do not come together in a sentence because both means
the same thing.
2. (3) Replace ‘exceed more than’ with ‘exceed’.
Because using ‘more than’ with ‘exceed’ makes the sentence superfluous.
3. (4) ‘Return and back’ do not come together in a sentence. Replace ‘to return
back’ with ‘to return’.