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Loop Two
Loop Two
Bachelor in Education
Teaching English as a Foreign Language
Subject: Writing Strategies in English
Looping: Loop Two
In this section, you are going to think, choose and define a summary taking into account the
first activity calling Loop One, for writing free paragraphs on the following Topic:
* Plan: Establish a summary of the first activity in some short lines with the creating sentence in
the first unit: Use your summary sentence as your starting point.
* Write: Establish a new summary in two paragraphs taking into account the second writing in the
first activity one for this unit calling Loop One and with the idea:
Maturity, in this order of ideas, deprives us of childhood memories because as we develop, our
conception of the world in general changes and therefore the memories we had with the child's
mind, will no longer serve and so they are discarded.
* Reflect: Read what you have written. Analyse. Look for the summary in the last two paragraphs
and identifying the most interesting thought, the richest detail, the most intriguing or compelling
issue. Your goal is to identify the ‘core’ in the text you have generated. Write an evaluation of you
have written and put it in the next lines:
our conception of the world in general changes and therefore the memories we had with the child's
mind, will no longer serve and so they are discarded.
In summarizing the above, important details of the subject that were not taken into
consideration in the first textual creation emerge. When writing the first text, I related my
research on childhood amnesia to events I don't remember from my childhood. Going a little
further into the subject and from personal experience, I feel that the traumatic events I
experienced were forcibly forgotten by my brain. I have tried to recall the last few days several
stages of my life and have not been successful in it, that's why I wrote about that subject.
* Plan and write: Establish the reflection about the first and the second activities in some short lines
with some points Rinse and repeat until you’ve had enough, until you’ve got enough words to be going
on with. If you have the energy, you may like to conclude your looping session by reading through all of
Author: Diana Margarita Araque
Adapted by: Rubén Mauricio Muñoz – Elsy Marina Cantor
Corporación Universitaria del Caribe “CECAR”
Bachelor in Education
Teaching English as a Foreign Language
Subject: Writing Strategies in English
Looping: Loop Two
the loops again and marking any ideas that you didn’t explore that are still worthy of following through.
Please answer the next questions?
* Write: Establish a new draft if you want to check all aspects in activity one and two (It isn’t
mandatory):
* Reflect: Read what you have written. Analyse. Look for the sentence (Loop One), the summary
(Loop Two) and the reflection in all process and write your ideas in the next paragraph (the next
lines):
The topic I chose when writing freely was childhood amnesia as trying to remember many
events in my childhood is impossible and interesting as it happens to everyone. The desire
to know where all those memories go leads me to think a lot about that subject and what
we can do to recover those first memories.
For me it is amazing all that the human being can store in his memory, it is fascinating all the functions
that have to be fulfilled in our head to be able to remember events, experiences, and experiences. My
purpose in bringing this up is to show you all my interest about all that we have forgotten or perhaps is
in our minds and we just need a push to open a window into the past.
Author: Diana Margarita Araque
Adapted by: Rubén Mauricio Muñoz – Elsy Marina Cantor
Corporación Universitaria del Caribe “CECAR”
Bachelor in Education
Teaching English as a Foreign Language
Subject: Writing Strategies in English
Looping: Loop Two