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Eng Yr5 Unit3 Examiningmediatexts
Unit 3
Examining media texts
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5 weeks
This unit includes an assessment task/s that support teachers to collaboratively moderate. This will ensure
consistency of teacher judgement of assessment evidence against the achievement standards in the Australian
Curriculum.
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Guided reading Monitor student ability to: • Reading conferences checking • Individual student reading
• decode, read with expression for and setting goals in conference books
Groups set up according to needs as identified through data sets. and understand content. See decoding, listening for fluency, • reciprocal teaching resources
Groups can be run as Reciprocal teaching, book club, literature circles or phonics if required. The Big 6 components of and comprehension questions. • checklists
• One day per week – Explicitly teach reading strategies, decoding, fluency and comprehension. reading). • other teacher assessment tools
• Other days of the week – Each group to read, discuss and practise strategies explicitly taught by teacher. Be aware of: • monitoring tools (literacy
Teacher to rotate through groups, one per day, to support and guide their reading. • students needing to change Progression).
groupings as
concepts/strategies are
mastered.
Spelling Monitor student ability to: • Weekly dictation and other • Scope and sequence
• understand word patterns written spelling work • school diagnostic tools
Groups set up according to needs as identified through diagnostic screening. and use appropriately. • correctly spelt words in other • teacher composed dictation
• One day per week – Explicitly teach new sounds or letter strings, morphemes or etymology from the year 5 Be aware of: writing tasks. which includes words studied
spelling scope and sequence. • students who have gaps in for each group
• Other days of the week – Students practise new words in a variety of activities including: their understanding and • lists of games, websites and
o sounding out or Elkonin boxes address these on a one-one other strategies for activities
o chunking into syllables basis via intervention. • monitoring tools (literacy
o segmenting into base word, prefix and suffix progression).
o games that use the words
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Evaluation of evidence
Students will:
• learn the difference between news and feature articles
• select and evaluate evidence
Unit sequence • support a point of view
• create an opposing point of view
• present a point of view.
Learning intention: To be able to evaluate the reliability and credibility of different types of evidence according to agreed criteria and consider how evidence can be used to support
and present a particular point of view.
The difference between news and feature articles Teacher tips Can the student:
• Read and explore all example resources prior to • identify a feature article?
Learning intention: To understand what a feature article is and how it differs from a news article.
beginning this unit. Adaptations will be required to • discuss similarities and
Learning intention: To be able to understand how media texts influence an audience and can present points of view.
cater for each particular cohort of students. differences between feature
Note: In preparation for this learning sequence, teachers will need to have sourced a range of news and features
• There are some news reports and articles articles and news articles?
reports that are current, relevant and appropriate to the student cohort. KIDSNEWS, Behind the News (BTN) and provided throughout this unit as examples to guide
Australian Geographic are good sources to find current examples. Students will need time to explore a range of the teaching and learning sequence. However it is Examples of collected
articles and to highlight the different language features used to present a point of view. recommended that teachers source alternative, evidence:
authentic and contemporary news articles to be used • documented observations of
Introduction to the unit
as model texts for this unit. prior knowledge through
Whole class • This first part of the learning sequence is focussed on whole group, partner or small
• Facilitate a class discussion to understand students’ prior knowledge of media texts. engaging the students with the news and feature group discussion
o Discuss where people get their news. articles, so provide example texts that are relevant to • contribution to class
o Discuss student opinions about news. interests, events, or topics being covered. discussions.
o Ask students: Do you think the news you hear or read contains all of the information about the event or issue? • Important alert: remember prior to using any
o Define what the term multimodal means and provide examples of media texts that are multimodal.
resource, review the content to ensure suitability for
o Explain that in this unit students will be learning about how authors of media texts manipulate point of view.
each school context and class.
This means influencing the way the reader thinks and feels about a topic. The media texts in focus in this unit • When exploring contemporary news reports, be
are feature articles. Students will be learning about how authors use text structure and language features to aware that some texts could potentially cause anxiety
influence the reader. or trigger trauma for students. For further teacher
advice read 5 tips for talking to kids about the news.
What is a feature article and its similarities and differences to a news article? • Find information to support teacher understanding to
Whole class be able to clarify differences between news articles
and feature reports via Axia Public Relations’ blog, ‘3
• Provide a definition of a feature article and provide examples of where they can be found, such as magazines,
crucial differences between a news story and a
websites, television, and newspapers.
feature story that will make you a better writer’.
• Provide an example of a feature article and news article to compare.
• Throughout this next learning sequence, students will
• Ask students the following question and get them to think, pair, and share their answers.
require access to ICT at a whole class, small group and
o Do you notice anything similar about the two texts?
independent level. Teachers will adapt activities
o Do you notice anything different about the two texts? according to the ICT available at their site.
• Discuss with students how feature articles are similar to newspaper articles, but they have some key differences. • Highlight the requirement for students to use ICT
For example, feature articles are not time dependent, can hold a clear point of view and are generally longer with appropriately and in accordance with the schools
greater detail than news articles. Identify that both text types use; a headline, images, paragraphs, and are expectations.
sometimes written in columns.
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• Highlight how a feature article can have a point of view, whereas newspaper articles are expected to remain Learning alerts
impartial, or in other words, they do not present a point of view and stick to the facts. Be aware of:
• Create a large poster or display to capture all of the observations about the difference between feature articles
• students who struggle to differentiate between
and newspaper articles. Either a class created anchor chart or Venn diagram would fit well. feature articles and news articles
Time for students to explore feature and news articles • students exploring websites away from those
recommended.
Pairs
• Students to find examples of feature articles and news articles that explore local or national issues.
• Students to identify the purpose of each article and its point of view, presenting findings to the class.
Whole class
• Tell the students that they will be learning many new terms in this unit. Begin a class word wall to and add the
definitions of a feature article and a news article, ensuring that students have a shared understanding of
meaning.
• This word wall can be built upon over the course of the unit. Resource 1 – Metalanguage of media can be
provided to students to support understanding of the key terms and metalanguage that is used throughout this
unit.
• Display and show students Resource 2 – Guide to manipulating point of view and use it to briefly outline the
learning areas to be covered. This resource provided can be used to support understanding of the teaching and
learning sequence to be covered in this unit. At the end of some learning activities the teacher can refer to the
different sections of this resource with students and use the writers’ tips as a checklist summarise and further
consolidate the learning. A prompt to refer to this resource will be provided.
o it is an article of interest
• Ask students to imagine what a news article that could be written about this topic. For example, breaking news:
giant class pet Roger Rabbit destroys student art displays.
• Highlight with students the key language features of the article, such as headlines, paragraphs, images, reporter,
and lead sentence.
• Ask students to determine the point of view of the article. For example, is it for or against every classroom having
a class pet?
• Discuss how students know that the article is ‘for’ by identifying what evidence has provided.
Pairs
• Students to read aloud the article together. Next highlight parts of the article that provide evidence for
presenting a point of view. If using Resource 3 – Should every classroom have a pet? students will highlight
evidence that demonstrates the benefits of having a class pet. Students can annotate the article to show who is
providing the evidence and whether they are a student, teacher or an expert.
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• Ask students to give their opinions about how this feature article has influenced them to agree or disagree.
informal formal
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• Ask students to consider how the formality of language changes depending on the purpose of the text. For Ideas for monitoring
example, consider the language to greet people, such as ‘waz up’, ‘g’day,’ ‘hello’, or ‘good evening, ladies and Monitor students’ ability to:
gentlemen’, and plot them on the continuum. Discuss how and when the use of this language changes depending
• apply an agreed criterion to evaluate the reliability of
on the level of formality and purpose.
a range of sources of information.
• Consider the words ‘tummy’, ‘stomach’ and ‘gastrointestinal system’ and plot on the continuum. Discuss how
these words would be used in different texts ranging from informal to formal. For example, telling your parent or Learning alerts
carer you have a sore ‘tummy’ compared to a science project on the ‘gastrointestinal system’. Be aware of:
• Tell students that as writers and speakers they have the power to change their language depending on their • students who have difficulty evaluating the reliability
purpose. Discuss how and when students need to change their own language and why this can be important. and credibility of sources of evidence according to
• Look at some news reports and features articles and discuss if the language is formal or informal. Discuss why specific criteria.
media reports typically use more formal language?
• Note: The purpose of news reports is to inform with clear and concise language and typically slang and everyday
language is avoided. Features articles often have a point of view and can persuade, feature articles can be less
formal than news reports.
Independently
• Students identify whether the sentences are either informal or formal on page 1 of Resource 4 – Formal or
informal language. This sheet could be provided individually to students or explored as a class or small group.
Whole class
• Discuss the sentences and ask students to explain their answers.
o Attitude
o Facts
o Emotions.
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• Tell students they can use this test throughout the unit when evaluating evidence that is used to support a point
of view, to check if evidence is reliable.
• Discuss how authors who present reliable and credible evidence are more likely to influence an audience to
support a point of view.
• Model using the SAFE test to evaluate the reliability of a feature article selected by the teacher. Teacher to select
a feature article that is contemporary and a topic that is of interest to their student cohort.
• Model the process of identifying reliable sources of evidence using the SAFE test on a piece of evidence.
• As a class look at Part 1a – General features of Resource 2 – Guide to manipulating point of view looking
specifically at the ‘writers’ tips’ with students, ticking each box as you read these notes.
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Read and select evidence to support a point of view o How do words change to present the different • checklist against the ‘Can the
points of view? student’ questions
Whole class
o How do the images change to present the different • whole class feedback record
• Provide students with a topic that can have two opposing points of view. Keep it simple and relatable for
points of view? and notes
students. For example, ‘all classrooms should have a pet’. Resource 3 – Should every classroom have a pet?
• Provide multiple opportunities for dialogic talk, and • page 1 and 2 of Resource 6 –
could be used again.
structured talk to enhance learning and enable Selecting evidence to support
• Model applying the SAFE test to this feature article with students. For example, ask how we know ABC News and
students to practice using the metalanguage of a point of view.
ABC Behind the News (BTN) are reliable sources.
feature reports.
• Explain how it is vital to use evidence that supports a point of view, in order for it to have credibility.
• Provide a definition of the term emotive language
Pairs or small groups and check for understanding. The class may need to
• Students work together to choose a point of view and find pieces of evidence that support the chosen point of explore how writers evoke emotion using images and
view. Use page 1 of Resource 6 – Selecting evidence to support a point of view to record the evidence selected. language further.
• Apply the SAFE test to each piece of evidence. Consider how each piece of evidence made them feel about the
topic and make a judgement whether the evidence is reliable to use or should not be used.
Ideas for monitoring
Monitor students’ ability to:
• Students share their evaluations regarding the selected evidence.
• select appropriate language, images and audio that
Examine how to evoke emotion combine to present a particular point of view.
Whole class
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• Explain the meaning of bare assertions as ‘a statement that contains no supporting evidence’. For example:
Be aware of:
o Glenelg beach is the best in Adelaide.
• students selecting unreliable sources of evidence.
o Adelaide Crows are the greatest team in the AFL.
Pairs
• Students make up bare assertions and share them back with the class.
Whole class
• Consider and discuss with students what it means to evoke an emotional response from an audience. Why is it
important to evoke emotion? What is the purpose of evoking emotion in your audience?
• Discuss the ways that words, images and sounds can be used to influence an audience to believe a particular
point of view in a multimodal text.
• Refer to page 2, Resource 6 – Selecting evidence to support a point of view and the images included for evoking
emotion. Provide students with the opportunity to discuss these images and then brainstorm the emotions being
felt.
• Discuss and present examples of how language, images and audio can create emotions in the audience for
example, look for television commercials that use emotive music to persuade.
• Explain and complete the language of affect table found in page 2 of Resource 6 – Selecting evidence to support
a point of view
• Sort the words listed in this resource into the table. Discuss how emotion can be used through images and
language to support a point of view. This could also be done as a pair activity, so students have a chance to
experiment with using the language included in the table.
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• Discuss when writers might choose to use language that create security and when they might choose to use
language that creates insecurity. Ask the students:
o When would language that creates insecurity rather than security would be chosen?
o Discuss how some feature articles have a positive or negative effect on the viewer? Why?
• Consider some examples where writers might want to create a feeling of insecurity by choosing to use a negative
language of affect. For example, writing about plastic being thrown into our oceans or writing about the
outcomes of bullying.
• Consider some examples where writers might want to create a feeling of security by choosing to use positive
language of affect. For example, writing about volunteers helping elderly people in the community.
• Tell students they can use language of judgement to respond to literature, things, objects and people. The
language of judgement can be used to persuade in media texts because it allows the writer to influence the
reader’s opinion about people and issues.
• Provide a provocation for students such as an image or topic. For example, all classrooms should have a pet.
Show Resource 7 – Language of affect and judgement to support students with language to use when making
judgements about the topic or the issue presented.
Independently or pairs
• Students to use two headings with the columns positive and negative and to use language that presents a
negative and positive point of view. For example, if looking at using the topic all classrooms should have a class
pet positive language could include relaxing, calming, supportive, fun, important and negative language could
include distracting, unhealthy, fragile, and needy.
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Individual or pairs
• Read and select evidence to support an opposing point of view. For example, ‘classrooms should not have class
pets’.
• Ask students to look at this topic differently and list reasons why classrooms should not have class pets.
• Students work together to choose a point of view and find pieces of evidence that support the opposing point of
view. Use page 3 of Resource 6 – Selecting evidence to support a point of view to record the evidence selected
and evaluated that shows an opposing point of view.
o Apply the SAFE test to each piece of evidence. Consider how each piece of evidence made them feel about the
topic and make a judgement whether the evidence is reliable to use or should not be used.
• Students to share their evaluations regarding the selected evidence.
o use of precise vocabulary to evoke an emotional response such as a sense of security or insecurity in the feature article: either in favour or against.
audience o Remind students to choose precise vocabulary to
o use of reliable and credible evidence to move beyond bare assertions; use of objective and subjective evoke a sense of security or insecurity in their
language. audience by referring to the class chart, sheet
Affect and Judgment. For example, ‘cuddly rabbit’
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Construct a feature article to present a point of view evokes sense of security, while ‘huge threatening
rat, with sharp teeth’ evokes sense of insecurity.
Whole class
• The writing is an initial assessment piece that is used
• Explain that students will take on the role of a magazine writer and write a feature article using language features
to demonstrate progress at the end of the unit.
that influence the audience to believe a point of view.
• Provide scaffolding for students, such as sentence
• Share with students Resource 8 – Feature article plan and go through how to use this planning sheet. Clarify
openers, word banks, or whole class plan.
questions.
• Prior to writing, revise language features and ways to manipulate a point of view using part 2 of the Resource 2 – Ideas for monitoring
Guide to manipulating point of view. Monitor students’ ability to:
• Discuss what sources of evidence they might use in their feature article for example, an eyewitness or an expert. • understand and use learning area specific language.
• Ensure students purposefully use and identify the necessary language features in their planning.
• Co-create with students an editing checklist using agreed criteria above to ensure the desired point of view is Learning alerts
presented. Alternatively, use the example provided in Resource 9 – Editing checklist to guide students through Be aware of:
the expectations, ensuring a shared understanding of writing requirements. • students who cannot identify the elements of a
Independently feature article.
• Allow 10 minutes for students to plan a feature article and 30 minutes to write a feature article.
• It will be used to compare to the final assessment task and to determine students’ growth between feature
articles.
• Students use the developed checklist to provide self and peer feedback on their feature articles.
• Encourage students to consider what they have done well in the feature article and what they could improve
upon using the checklist as a guide.
• Students share responses with class.
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Comprehend a feature article – modelling close reading Teacher tips Can the student:
• Teacher to gain background knowledge on what is • use appropriate text
Learning intention: To be able to use text processing and comprehension strategies to read and interpret ideas in
meant by ‘close reading’. processing and
texts.
o The main intention of close reading is to engage comprehension strategies to
Whole class students in the reading of complex texts. Fisher, comprehend an article and
• Provide Students with Resource 10 – Problem plastic feature article and Resource 11 – Problem plastic feature Frey and Hattie (2016, p. 89) outline four elements answer both multiple choice
comprehension to support close reading: and short answer questions.
• Ask students to predict the main ideas before engaging in a close reading activity. - repeated reading of a short text or extract
• Note: This feature article will be reread, with specific elements of language from the text focused on over this - annotation of the short text or extract to reflect Examples of collected
next teaching and learning sequence. thinking
• Review text processing strategies to understand how to skim and scan texts for specific details.
evidence:
- teacher’s questioning to guide analysis and • completed comprehension
Pairs discussion activity
• Prior to reading the article ask the students to skim read and circle any words they do not understand. - students’ extended discussion and analysis. • whole class feedback
• Ask students to share their words, with the teacher using the context of the learning to create shared documents
o Snow and Connor (2016) define close reading as
understanding of word meanings. “an approach to teaching comprehension that • observations of techniques
Examine text structure of the feature article insists students extract meaning from text by used during comprehension
examining carefully how language is used in the activity.
Whole class passage itself” (p. 1).
• Briefly discuss the visual layout of the feature article, for example what students notice about: • The selected model text has been suggested to place
o the choice and position of images emphasis on Sustainability a cross-curricula priority.
o layout, including main and subheadings “Through the priority of Sustainability, students
o the use and length of paragraphs develop the knowledge, skills, values and world views
o hyperlinks and references necessary to contribute to more sustainable patterns
o and anything else they note
of living.”
• The suggested model text can be replaced if required.
Read the feature article • It is recommended that teachers continue to adapt
Whole class the teaching and learning sequences and suggested
• Teacher to read the article and the students to follow.
resources to suit the needs of different student
cohorts.
• After reading discuss the following:
o the purpose, audience and point of view presented
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the degree of formality of the language used to present the point of view.
o • Provide opportunity for discussion around the
• Explore how to use text processing strategies to read and answer multiple choice questions and understand how questions ensuring that students are required to
distractors are used in the construction of multiple-choice questions and response options. explain their ideas.
Independently • Stop and review the questions and students’ answers
regularly, in order to identify errors and provide
• Students comprehend the feature article by responding to a variety of multiple-choice questions. Use Resource
feedback.
11 – Problem plastic feature comprehension that has been provided to the students.
• Teacher may need to support a group to work
Whole class through the activity. Alternatively students who need
• Discuss answer choices and strategies employed. support could complete the comprehension with a
partner.
Comprehend short answer questions • Utilising strategies like Question-Answer Relationship
Whole class (QAR) throughout whole class discussions will support
• Review comprehension strategies to interpret and analyse information and integrate and link ideas. the learning.
• The QAR strategy supports students explore the
text. QAR challenges students metacognitively and
can be used across the curriculum and year levels.
The QAR framework includes four types of questions
that help students to ask and answer questions about
their reading (Raphael et al, 2006).
o ‘Right there’ helps students create or find answers
to literal questions, often using the same words as
in the text.
o ‘Think and search’ means students need to search
across the text to create questions or find
answers.
o With ‘author and you’ questions, the student is
invited to make connections between parts of the
text and their own experience.
o ‘On my own’ encourages students to use their
background knowledge to answer a question.
Learning alerts
Be aware of:
• students who are not using evidence from the text to
support their ideas.
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Examine language features – noun groups and sentence starters Teacher tips Can the student:
• Discuss and clarify ‘skim read’ if necessary. • identify and explain how noun
Learning intention: To understand how language features are used to influence an audience to accept a point of view
• Spend time revisiting noun groups and expanded groups and sentence
Examine noun groups that construct a point of view noun groups if necessary. Also check for beginnings foreground ideas
understanding of verbs. and influence an audience to
Whole class
• Dependent on the class, provide as many examples accept a particular point of
• Teacher reread Resource 10 – Problem plastic feature article. view?
of noun groups as required.
• Review understanding of nouns and noun groups, establishing how they can provide rich and detailed information • identify and explain how the
about the person or thing. Ideas for monitoring starting point of a sentence
• Model finding a noun or expanded noun group in Resource 10 – Problem plastic feature article and discuss whether Monitor students’ ability to: foregrounds ideas and
it establishes a point of view. For example, in: • identify sentence beginnings and explain how they influences an audience to
o ‘Mass production of destructive plastics’, what is the purpose of the word ‘destructive’? influence an audience. believe a particular point of
o ‘Gargantuan amount of plastic’, what impact does the word gargantuan have? view?
o ‘Roland Geyer, the study’s lead author’, what is the effect of using ‘the study’s lead author’? If it just had the word Learning alerts
author would it have the same impact? Be aware of: Examples of collected
• students who cannot identify sentence beginnings
evidence:
Pairs
• students who cannot identify noun groups. • completed resources
• Students highlight a range of different noun groups and expanded noun groups in Resource 10 – Problem plastic
• observation of students’
feature article.
ability to identify noun groups
• Students provide each other with feedback on some of their findings and explain how the point of view created.
• low-stakes assessment – quiz
Whole class • whole class feedback
• Reflect on how expanded noun groups can be used to manipulate an audience’s point of view. documents
• Discuss how and where the noun group has been used to influence a particular point of view. For example, is the • observation of students’
noun group foregrounded at the beginning of the sentence? ability to identify how noun
groups can be used to create a
Examine the starting point of a sentence point of view.
Whole class
• Review the opening sentence and discuss that a sentence can be structured to support a particular point of view.
• Model how the opening sentence creates a point of view that plastic is problem, identifying the key language that
produces this point of view. For example, ‘Mass production of destructive plastics’.
• Clarify how the starting point of a sentence gives prominence to the message in the text and allows for prediction of
how the text will unfold. Therefore, the message often supports the point of view presented. For example, ‘Mass
production of destructive plastics, which began just six decades ago, has accelerated so rapidly that it has created
8.3 billion metric tons—most of it in disposable products that end up as toxic trash’.
Pairs
• Students examine sentence structure in Resource 10 – Problem plastic feature article, discussing and predicting the
message of each sentence using the sentence beginnings.
Whole class
• Ask students to share how the sentence beginnings impacted upon them as the audience.
• Analyse what message is foregrounded by the sentence beginnings.
• Discuss the issue that is given prominence in the article through the deliberate choices made when constructing
sentence structures.
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Examine language features – possessive apostrophes and direct speech Teacher tips Can the student:
• Teacher may need to support students by guiding • identify, insert and explain
Learning intention: To be able to identify and explain the purpose of possessive apostrophes.
them through the first few questions in Resource possessive apostrophes?
Learning Intention: To understand the role of direct speech in supporting a point of view. 12 – Singular and plural possessive nouns. • identify the role direct speech
Recap of previous learning • Complete regular ‘check-ins’ to ensure students has supporting a point of
• Ask the students to explain how the structure of a sentence can influence an audience. have understood the learning. view?
• For further teacher background information
Possessive apostrophes regarding grammar, including teaching the use of Examples of collected
Whole class possessive apostrophes and the use of direct evidence:
• Display three sentences with apostrophes used for possession in different ways. For example: speech in writing refer to ‘A new grammar • completed resources
o A dog’s toy. companion for teachers’ by Beverly Derewianka. • observations of students’
o James’ car was very fast. • Provide multiple examples of apostrophes and ability to use apostrophes
o The students’ lunches had arrived. direct speech to increase student understanding • checklist against ‘Can the
• Bring students’ attention to the apostrophes and compare how they are used and why.
and encourage students to locate examples in the student’ questions
texts they read. • low-stakes assessment – quiz
• Model using apostrophes for possession in other examples and check students understanding with questioning.
• Model examples to class of how to punctuate • whole class feedback
Independently direct speech accurately. documents.
• Students to complete Resource 12 – Singular and plural possessive nouns.
Whole class
Ideas for monitoring
Monitor students’ ability to:
• Use individual whiteboards to quiz the students and assess individual understanding, discuss any errors and make
corrections. Ask the students to explain answers to further deepen understanding. • identify the need for an apostrophe for possession
• identify and punctuate direct speech.
Direct speech
Whole class Learning alerts
• Review what is meant by direct speech and discuss its purpose. Be aware of:
• Provide an example piece of direct speech and discuss the punctuation. For example, “We all knew there was a • students who do not recognise an apostrophe
rapid and extreme increase in plastic production from 1950 until now, but actually quantifying the cumulative • students that are unfamiliar with the terms
number for all plastic ever made was quite shocking,” says Jenna Jambeck. singular and plural
• Explain how the use of direct speech provides credible, convincing evidence to present a point of view. • students who do not recognise inverted commas
• Allow group discussion to consider why direct speech is more convincing when presenting a point of view. • students who are unable to distinguish between
Pairs where speech begins and ends.
• Students identify examples of direct speech in Resource 10 – Problem plastic feature article.
• Students discuss the purpose of the direct speech included in the text.
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• As a class look at Part 4 – Visual features of Resource 2 – Guide to manipulating point of view, looking specifically at
the ‘writer’s tips’ with students, ticking each box as you read these notes and making sure there is a shared
understanding of terms.
Independently
• Students to complete activity 3 in Resource 13 – Engaging in close reading 1.
Analysing the language features used to persuade the audience to hold a particular point of view
Whole class
• Provide students with Resource 16 – Engaging in close reading 2 to guide and support learning.
• Show students slides 9 to 12 of Slides 2 – Ruthless march of a toxic invader in order to guide teaching.
o Students complete questions in Resource 16 – Engaging in close reading 2 and discuss the answers students
provided as a class.
• Show students slides 14 to 16 of Slides 2 – Ruthless march of a toxic invader in order to guide teaching.
o Students complete questions in Resource 16 – Engaging in close reading 2.
• Define and discuss the terms ‘equilibrium’ and ‘adapt,’ establish shared understanding of meaning, and add to the
class word wall.
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o Model and guide students to underline the concluding paragraph’s concluding sentence. develop and expand ideas? They are able to
o Discuss the purpose and importance of concluding sentences.
clarify and provide additional information
through the subordinating clause.
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• With students, create a list of the evidence that could support a different point of view.
• Review the language and text structures that should be included in a feature article to influence an audience to
believe a particular point of view. For example, consider the use of expanded noun groups and objective and subject
language to influence the audience about an issue.
• Create success criteria for writing a feature article paragraph, referring to the Resource 9 – Editing checklist.
• Model writing a paragraph for a draft feature article and discuss the features and structure as it is created, linking
back to the success criteria in Resource 9 – Editing checklist.
Independently
• Students write a draft paragraph for a feature article that presents a different point of view.
• Practise developing a handwriting style that is legible, fluent and automatic.
Edit a paragraph
Whole class
• Build understanding that editing is a component of the assessment task: Create a multimodal feature article. Refer
to Resource 21 – Assessment book.
• Discuss Resource 9 – Editing checklist.
Independently
• Students to edit their draft paragraph using the Resource 9 – Editing checklist. Ask students to:
o discuss their editing choices with a peer and exchange feedback
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o explanation of how text structures and language features of the article persuade the audience to believe the
author’s point of view about the topic, using examples from the text to support explanation.
• When designing the comprehension task use a combination of multiple choice and short answer responses.
• Assessment concepts and example questions include:
o Use of vocabulary — precise vocabulary. For example, find and record two examples of precise vocabulary the
author has used.
o Use of vocabulary — meaning related to context. For example, find and record examples of language chosen to
evoke emotion. Why has the author chosen to use these words and what affect does this vocabulary have upon
the audience?
o Text purpose — text structures and language features that meet purpose. For example, what are the structural
elements of a feature article? Where do you find topic sentences? Is the writing formal or informal? Why has the
author chosen this image? What is the point of view represented in this article?
o Text processing strategies — navigation. For example, reading for specific purposes, predicting and confirming,
skimming and scanning.
o Comprehension strategies. For example, constructing meaning from print and digital sources.
Independently
• Student complete the teacher-created assessment task.
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Conduct the assessment task: Part A — tasks 1 to 3 o Part B: Plan and write a multimodal feature article
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o possible puns are shown in the line ‘snapper still in the red’, ‘Fishermen see red’ or ‘Snap the ban’
o noun groups are used to positively display the fish and negatively display the fishermen
o Verb group shown through the use of ‘devastated’ which emphasises problematic actions of the
fishermen.
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o ‘Devastated by greedy fishermen’ would be categorised as ‘Evidence for’ because it portrays fishermen
negatively and supports the point of view that the ban on fishing for snapper should be in place.
o What are the two points of view presented in the Roving reporter notes? - That ‘snapper ban should
remain’ and ‘fishing should be allowed to return’.
Small groups
• Allow discussion time and ask students to decide which point of view they will adopt to write their feature
article and why they have chosen a particular point of view.
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• Students can re-write and sort the evidence they are using into logically sequenced arguments or highlight
the evidence in different colours if using ICTs.
Reflection
Pairs
• Where possible, organise students into pairs with opposing points of view.
• Students share their selected evidence with a partner and determine if the best information has been
selected to strongly present different points of view.
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Introduce draft of a feature article for the assessment task: Part B – task 6
Whole class
• Explain that students will take on the role of a news reporter for the fictitious Whyalla Times and use the
information recorded in their plan to write a feature article about the snapper in the Gulf St Vincent and
surrounding waters.
• In the next sequence of learning students will begin drafting their feature article Resource 21 –
Assessment book using their planning sheet as a guide.
• Clearly establish the success criteria with the students, using the checklist as a guide, page 8 of Resource
21 – Assessment book. Ensure this stays specific to the learning that has taken place.
Reflection
Independently
• Students use the success criteria to assess their draft against.
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• Engage students in a discussion about editing and proofreading and allow discussion among groups to o What did you find difficult about the self-editing and
o Revise and discuss the proofreading process by modelling the proofreading of a sample text on the
• Review and discuss understanding of a multimodal text: article? Large headline at the top of the page and the
o combines two or more different ways of communicating article text in columns.
o can be created using a combination of language, images and audio features.
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• Encourage a class discussion about how images and text will be placed in the feature article to present a • If necessary, model some of the skills required and the
point of view. features available to students to publish their multimodal
• Remind students that they will be using a word processing program such as Microsoft Publisher or feature article.
Microsoft Word to create their multimodal feature article. • Provide students with assistance as required and encourage
• Discuss how to construct a multimodal feature article using a word processing program. students to regularly check their work.
• Remind students to take into consideration the improvements made during the editing process and
provide students with an opportunity to clarify any components of working with the word processing
program.
• Allow time for students to publish their multimodal feature articles.
Reflection
Independently
• Allow time at the end of the lesson for students to proofread their work and highlight any areas requiring
editing for the next lesson using the editing checklist.
• Students share what they have noticed from their proofread with a partner.
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Assessment tasks
Assessment tasks
Summative assessment
Assessment 1 – Comprehend a familiar article
• Students interpret and analyse information from a feature article. Prepared by teacher.
Warning: When using any of the recommended resources that are linked to third parties, for example, websites, applications, multimedia or video hosting sites, it is important to assess and mitigate the potential risk to students. Advertising, in-app
purchases, video recommendations and other products marketed at potential consumers are not always appropriate for the target audience. Always review external content prior to use with students and regularly check both free apps and commercially
available resources carefully to make sure inappropriate or harmful material is not made available to children or young people.
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