Peer Feedback Form Writing number: _______________

Writing Genre: Writing Trait:

Narrative Organization

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1. Topic sentence
 Does the paragraph have a topic sentence?
 Does the topic sentence mention the main character(s) of the story?
 Does the topic sentence give background information of the story?
 Does the topic sentence tell the main event of the story?
2. Setting the scene
 Does the beginning set up the situation for the story (time, place)?

3. Order of Events
 Are the events sequenced logically so that the story is organized and easy
to follow?

4. Conclusion that connects

 Does the paragraph have an ending that connects to the heart of the story
and provides readers with a sense of closure?
5. Timely Transitions
 Does the paragraph use time transitional words, phrases and clauses such
as meanwhile, at the same time, early in the morning… to show the passage
of time?
6. Ideas development
 Are there sensory and/or emotional details in the story?
 Does the paragraph use appropriate verb tenses?

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I like how you

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I see these minor mistakes in your paragraph:

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One suggestion for your paragraph would be:

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