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BẮT ĐẦU TÍNH THỜI GIAN LÀM BÀI ( 40 PHÚT CHO TASK 2 - 20 PHÚT CHO TASK 1 )

Đề bài: The maps show the transformation of the village of Eastminster over a ten-year period (xem hình

comment)

Dàn bài ( 5-7 PHÚT )

1. Những từ vựng thuộc topic sẽ dùng trong bài này

Accommodation, construct, replaced, extend

2. Những từ trong đề mà em nghĩ sẽ phải Paraphrase & list những từ Paraphrase của từ đó ra

Emergence, beween and

 3. Có note lại những điểm ngữ pháp nào sẽ dùng trong bài viết để tối ưu điểm ngữ pháp không?

Bị động

4. Dàn bài mà em lập cho đề này

Đoạn 1 mô tả năm 1999 đoạn 2 là năm 2009.

Bài viết của em ( luôn nhớ max 300 words cho Task 2, max 160 words cho Task 1

Tham khảo cách triển khai bài nhé: https://www.ieltstutor.me/blog/map

Given is the picture illustrating the emergence of a village of Eastminster between 1999 and 2009.

Overall, it can be seen that numerous accommodations were renovated and extended.

In 1999, the accommodations accounted for a fraction. To be more specific, there was an extensive house with

gardens in the middle of the place, and this residence was directly opposite to several shops, a school, and a

hospital to the bottom. Furthermore, plenty of houses on the top were between a woodland to the left-hand side

and a park to contrast side.

In 2009, the residence was expanded, and the backwater was diminished. From this perspective, while the

houses were widened, the park was lessened. In addition, an adventure park was built on the wasteland, and

numerous houses and factories were constructed on the bottom right-hand side. Moreover, the huge house was

replaced by a hotel with a golf course, while the school was replaced by a shopping complex. => Đoạn này nên

thêm một câu mô tả những công trình không thay đổi gì nhé

Tham khảo

● Overall:

○ It is clear that this town experienced a significant transformation regarding residential, commercial

and industrial developments throughout the period given

○ The area south of the river experienced greater changes.

● Body 1: viết map 1:

○ Map chia đều ra thành 2 phần khá đồng đều (In 1999, Eastminister was a small town, which was

bisected into almost equal parts by the river)

 ○ Phía dưới sông:

■ There were streets of houses, public garden, shops, school and hospitals along the railway

line

○ Phía trên sông:

■ The four major establishments to the North of the river were the Park, large houses with

gardens & the woodland >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ

"establishment" tiếng anh

● Body 2: viết map 2

○ Phía dưới sông:

■ The construction of factories and warehouses along the railway line

■ To the east, the streets of houses were demolished to make way for blocks of flats.

■ The conversion of the school on the river into a new shopping complex.

■ The expansion of the hospital west of the old-school situated on the river.

○ Phía trên sông:

■ More houses were also built encroaching on the park in the northeast.

■ The large house with gardens had been replaced with a hotel and a golf course

■ The woodland in the northwest was turned into an adventure park.