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Exercises Week Four
Exercises Week Four
point of view, do not correspond to any of the reference samples analyzed, and this is in
agreement with what can also be highlighted by other publications in the literature.
10 unnecessary use of we and one
Rewrite these sentences so that all instances of we, us and one are removed
1. First of all, we need to explain the presence of several plateaus in the graph. We can
justify this behavior by bearing in mind that a given node corresponds to a set of
possible clustering values. In order to clarify this concept, let us consider nodes that …
2. If we focus our attention on the nodes, we can see that they present, at the same time,
a low average degree of X and a high average of Y.
3. To summarize, one can reasonably assume that X is likely to be the most important
factor.
4. Observing the average values of some metrics, we can conclude that X is equal to 3.
5. In the literature one can clearly see that many of these problems have already been
solved. In addition, if we focus on the comparison between the two subfigures in [36]
we can easily observe that …
6. Since this latter observation may be counterintuitive, we need to underline that the
presence of X does not preclude Y.
7. We suppose that the heterogeneity of these indices is mostly caused by the presence
of a large number of Zs.
8. In conclusion, the structural analysis leads us to assert that X consists of:
11 replacing a verb + noun construction with a single verb
Replace the verb + noun construction with a single verb.
The patient demonstrated a strange behavior.
= The patient behaved strangely.
1. Table 1 shows a comparison between X and Y.
2. As shown in Figs. 13 and 14, the calculation makes a prediction that X will …
3. The arrival of the X occurred at …
4. The evaporation of X then takes place.
5. An increase in X of 30% was achieved.
6. Even though this results in a significant reduction in overheads.
7. The design of X is aimed at supporting multimedia services.
8. This device is used as an interface which allows the transfer of x to y to be
performed.