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The Arden Hamlet Harold Jenkins
The Arden Hamlet Harold Jenkins
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71 HAMLET INTRODUCTION 75
Press correction Q2 as th e most authoritative text, is based primarily upon it.
Extant copics of the Folio show press correction on eight pages of Earlier edi tors, who tcnded to follow F, still ofcourse incorporated
Hamlet; but whatever the bibliographical interest of Ihis, it is of from Q 2 or its descenda nts passages which F lacks; and since
sca nt te'x tual significance. The corrector was evidently less can. some at leas t of these were apparently cut before the foul papers
cc rn cd with accuracy than tidiness. He attended to obvious mis~ were transcribed (see abovc, p. 43), it is as well to recognize that
prints and little typographical faults like turned letters a nd inked th e edi torial tradition fm m Rowe on has always included things
quads; but it is apparent that he neither checked proofwilh copy which, though indubitably of Shakespeare's composition, wcrc
nor mad e any seriou s attempt to discover or emend errors. Three probably nevcr spoken on the stage. In sccki ng to present the
limes wrong or defective punctuation is put rigbt ; occasionally pla yas Shakespeare wrot c it ralli er than as it was shortened and
spelling is alLererl, most notably when the maimed burial rights adapted for pc run·man ce I do no morc than follow tradition.
morc properly become rite.s (V. i.2I 2). The only genuinely sub Even those who insist that a play is created only in th e lheatre
stantive variant is the correction of lalu to thanke at IJ. ii. 83. The would hardly, I think, prefer the contrary procedure ; and those
existence in the un corrected state of a page: set by Compositor E who like to imaginc that some passages were cut by Shakespeare
and containing one wrong word-division and one rej ec ted spelling himself! will not quarrel with their rctention . While foll owing
(a sunder, Crocodile) which also occur in Q2 is important as Q 2'S fuller version, I naturally include al so anything pre~ rved
corroborating the usc OfQ2. t Full details of the variants are given in F whi ch I ta ke 10 ha vc hcen los t from Q2; btl t all words and
in Hinman, i.30 I- 4. phrases in F whi ch I judge 10 be playhou~e additions to the
dialogue (sec above, pp. 62- 3) I omit.. Some readers may regret
4· THE EDITORIAL PR O BLEM AND THE PRESENT T~XT the disappearance of some words - like the exclamations '0
Vengean ce' at II. ii. 577 and 'Ecsta!;y' at m. iv. 142 - whieh have
The tex tual situation discusscd above confronts an cditor with the
become part of the fam iliar text; but a n editor who sees no reason
following complica tions. Of three texts, each of the last two,
for attributing them to Shakespeare while recognizing that they
though largely substantive, owes something to its prcdecesso r,
often dist urb metreftfrdT'lllnatic..scnSG-or-bgth.J: ' crnatiVC )'
while the first, the only wholl y independent text, has all the
but to reject thel"ft Yct decision is sometim cs diJ(jeult as with
unreli abilit y of a memorial reconstruction. Q 2, the onc whi ch
IV. ii . '29, 'hide Fox, and all after alid v:tt"'18 , l aue 1, a touch' ) ;
stands closcst to the author, lcaves obscure a number ofpassases
and where words occurring in F only arc more easily attributable
which arc no t repre~ented in the ",9 ..llrr1.w tiiiii ilr. 1fieseincl udC
to Shakespea re tha n to the ac tors (as with III . i. 32, 'lawful
( some, though not all'0)flnc Tamous cruxes (cf. above, p. 55). On
I
aucmpts at correc ting deficiencies in Q 2 by not very inspired to F; but I have incorporated the additional directions of F and
guesswork. vVhen th e editor believes th is to have happened, he
need aecon.l LO F no higher authority than belongs to later Folios
:;;:.d edi to rs: paver Wilson cs t.ablisb crl !he priR~t in suc h
.. QI wherc they specify ac tion the dialogue implies or provide fo r
its ord inary stage accompaniments (such as properties, noises, or
ligh ts) . Directions, however, which chan ge what is ca lled for by
cases the editor sho uld proceed not by accepting F but l~ Q 2 I have rejected. These would have their place in a reco rd of
aUCi"nplmg to cmcn~ ire1-nstantC"iii"Wh1 cn i nave done tlus the play's stage history rather than in its accepted text; but they
~"S at v.iu Jg.lcrc both texts are wan ting, as at Iu.i v. '71 a re of co urse given in the collation . Stage-directions added by
and )"v . i.40, I have been assisted but not felt bound by previo us later editors, i.e. a ll originating later th a n F, are placed within
attempts to fill the gap. square brackets; but brackets are not used for mere verbal va ria
QI has had its greatest value in sugges ting the so urce of tions such as conventionalize the form of directions while leaving
corruption whcre the two be lter texts arc at variancc - in ex the substance unafTccted. These arc noted in Ihe appa ratus when
hibiting, for exa mpl e, the proba ble contamination ofQ2 through th e original wording may be of inte rest in itself, but oth c rv.,ise
its usc of its predcccssor or of F through th e influcnce of stage not: e.g. Cum ali}s for 'with Others', but not Exeullt EmbasJodorJ
performance. But , though instances are necessarily r are, I have (F Exit Ambass.) for 'Exeunt Voltema nd and Cornelius'. The
been glad to accep t th e guida ncc ofQI wh en it co nfirms that both names of characters in stage-directions and speech -p rcfixcs a re
the other texts a re wrong. (Stt above, p. 36.) standardized without noticc.
The newl y pcrccivt:d relation of the three tex ts, with Q2 con In th e modernization of spelling the criterion must be that
ceivably lakjng crrors from QI and F likewise from Q2, greatly accidents arc relinquishcd while substance is preserved; but it is
enlarges of co urse the invitation to emend. I have little hesitation difficult, as all modernizi ng editors find, to know where to draw
in acccpting T heobald 's bawds for bonds at 1. iii. 130. The emenda the line. Some ea rly volulnes in this series - unwisely as we now
tion diesl at IV. vii. 56, th ough hitherto adopted only by Dover Ihink - permitted occasional a rchaisms, such as murther and u;/dt ;
Wilson in a la te reprint, is beyond any qu estion. Readings com but wi th the present general editors the prac tice has now changed.
mon to Q 2 and F whi ch have incurred suspicion include Iv.iii." If murdn- a nd muTther are, as one edi tor insjsts, ' more than variant
smooth and eUCTI (' hypcrmetri cal and tautologous' I) , IV.V.Jlg spellings', they a re no more than accidental varia nts of the sa me
browl (F brow), v . ii. 274 ~auen (F Ileauen ) ; but these seem aU word . 'f o follow Q 2 in murlhe" its preponderant and so conceivably
sufTiciently within the range of Shakespeare's carelessness for
l. This is the fallncy tha t haunts all the cu rrent research on compositors.
emendation to be resisted . Co njecturcs like slings for slings
Useful as it is to have: knowledge of their slin u and the errors each was prone to,
(m.i .s8) and sconce for silence (m .iv.4) ma y reccive more co n- thi s can still not identify errors. What it may do is to give': confi rmation of elTors
i. No~ wo !'\h y, p. 1,:,6. suspec ted on other grounds.
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Shakespearean lo n n, wo uld logicall y in volve printi ng a lso h Ull. I h ave reta ined the colloquial forms OfQ2, and On the assunlp
drtlh (l.'i .237) and fadom, (I. 'v.n ), and even lid., (I. iii. 125), tion th at the Q 2 composito rs were ca pable of occasional sophist
\\-' jlh a rcsuJt t ha t co uld nei th er be consi stent nor a modern (('x l ica tion, I h ave introdu ced a f(:w from F (UI . ii. 235, v. i. 75, 9 1, etc.).
a t a ll .! On the o lher h and, moderniza tion is not ex tended 10 O n tht: evid en ec of Q 2 I have rega rded "ry and Ilry beJore a
gramma r a nd vocabu lary. 1 have not replaced such words as vowcl as th e us ual Shakespea rean forms instead of t he mo re
whiles a nd somtver with Lh cjr modern cqui vaJen l", even though litera ry mint and thine, which a re frequent in F ; and ho ld ing a gain
lhis was already done in r. ~fy principle is to preserve archaic tha t the Q2 composiLOrs ma y so metimes have sophtsti ca tecl, ]
forms in the following cases onl y : h ave ado pted my a nd thy wheneve r th ey occur in eithe r text. But
(i) W here: they a rc a ma tler n Ol of spelling Lut of g ra mmar, as as I do n ot suppose tha t Sha kespea re himsclf would necessaril y
in Q2, 'hee ha th bore me' (F borru, v. i . 179), Q'2 slrookm be eonsistent, wh ere mil1e a nd thine arc found in both texts r ha vc
(HI. ii. 265) may becom e strucken (as in F ) bil l. not stricken . made no emend a ti on.
(£i) Where, as in whiles a nd somelJt r, or in silll for s;nCl!, th e Elision is a ve ry dtffi e ult m a tt er and not one to be de te rmined
archa ic '()n n may reasonabl y be regarded as a sep a rate word . In by the Q2 sp elling. This will often aJlord a clue, but we ca n neve r
this ca tego ry th e OED has been, though no t an a rbi ter, a useful be sure in an individual case th a t it reproduced the copy; and
g uid e. even if we eould , we should not be entitled to ass ume th a t Shak c
(iii) Whe re Ihe a rchaism is one to whieh rn odC' rn read ers a re spear(:'s own spelling was systematic.: on the point. His pages in
ha uitumcd, so th a l in its contex t it is likely 10 seem less stra nge Sir ThomaJ' M ort, indeed, sugges t the contrary. I have never
th a n th e modern equi valent would. Thus in the co ntext of deferred to a contrac ted spelling in Q 2 aga inst thc obvious re
II.ii ·437 sallds will , ] judge, be more acceptable th a n salads. But quirem ents ofth c me tre (e.g. ll. ii . 97, UI . iij.6) . In the past forms
] see no reason wh y margin in its ordinary munda ne sense of verbs the criteri on must unquestiona bl y be the mctri cal re
(v. ii . 152) should cI isguise itself as margent. 2 quirement and not the Q 2 spelli ng. The Arden conventio n is to
(iu) Where the archaic spelling indica tes a pronuncia ti on th a t print ' d where the me tre requires elision. -td where it d oes no t
is required for the ve rse. Thus I p rint crownet (Q2 cronei) rath er (except tha t word s ending in -ied arc not in a ny case contracted) .
than coronel (F) a t IV. vii . 1 7 1 and at I.i v. 82 follow F artire (for The endi ng -led takes no elision since it is necessaril y syllabic, and
whi ch Q 2 futu re ma y bc a misprint) rat her tha n the artery of Q5 with -red, -ned elision is alwa ys in the fi nal syllabic. I declin e to
or the co ntrac ted arCry of ma ny editors. believe th a t a uistine ti on ean or should be mad e be twee n qlftr'd
(v) Wh e re th e fo rm sugges ts a di a lec t or colloquia l usage. and off'rtd, poisorld and pois'ned on the basis of the Q 2 spelling.
Some forms of cou rse ma y belong to m ore tha n one ca tegor y: Wh ere the occurs before a vowel, Q2 usually marks the elision
crowner (v. i· /l, 22 ), ] ta ke it, would be admissible in th e third if (th') while F is lia ble to ex pand. But since Q2 could also expanu
not alreau y in th e fifth . But, unlike SOBle rece nt editors, 1 find n o upon occasion (as shown b y the umber for thumbe and the practice
place for ncraldy (I. i. 90, 1I. ii. 452 ) 01' ,auiary ( II . ii . 433). which , like of the same co mpositors in reprinting Titus Alldronicus ) and the
romage (I. i. 110), obtrude a n antiquaria n pedantry. vVord s whi ch evidence suggests tha t the contracted form is more Shakes pea rean,
havc gone oul of usc should adapt to modern spelling. F Jarre (cf. I ha ve chosen it wherever it occurs with metrical proprie ty in
Ja ffe) is na turall y acclimatized as Jar (lI . ii. 35 I), and mobled either texl. Thus 1 follow F atl.i . 64 (where Q2 may be cont a m
(n. ii · 4gB- 9) - tho ug h here the tradition which has rh ymed it ina ted by Q I ), 1. iii. 45, II. ii.505. O ccasionall y Q 2 contrac ts un
wi lh ennoblt'd p resents us with a d ikmma - is be tler ma tched with me tri call y and r expa nd - some times, as a t n. ii. 450, with the
cobbl, d (spdt cobled in F COT. I. i. 194). By cont rast the common support of F, a nd some times, as a t v. ii .S56, without it. In all
and in the sense of 'if' is left un cha nged : it is the editors' an, other cases where elision is in qucstion I have been guided by Q 2
nei th er ori ginal nor modern , whi ch he re is artificiaL to the extent tha t I ha ve used eontrae tcd spellings o nl y wh cre it
gives precedent. Wh en , as often ha ppens, F aJone contracts, it has
I . F occ:;uionally modernizes to murda but a t least once doc:.~ tlar. reverse. It
p(.'rmi ls both rOWlS in the Sil m c $pccc:h. Vile, the invariable fon n in Q '2, bcco m~ n o clear authori ty a nu may possibl y be mista kcn. For exa mple,
d/de in F "",ill'" t il t: com posi tor is n. A moral st"('nlS clear. whe re Q2 has 'I a m too much in the sonne' a nd F cont ra cts to
'2. Cr. note un ribboll, I V. vii. 7(j. 'I am too m uch i'th' Sun' (l.ii.67), it would be possible to prefer
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INTRODUCTION 8,
'I'm too much in the sun'. Where Q2 reads 'you are in the right'
(L v. 132), it might be better to Contract ' yo u are' rath er than prefixes, of variant nomenclature for the_same characters. insig
nifican t verbal diflerences in equivalent stage-directions are like
read, as F does, 'you are i'th' right '. The retention of the un
contracted Q2 phrase at least gives the reader the opportunity of wise ignored . Variations in line-division are recorded when they
choi ce. The frequent failure of both Q2 compositors to provide are, or may be, metrically or bibliographically significant, but no t
for elision in pronoun- vero combinations (I will, he wiJJJ he when, as in F's frequent division of the first line of a speech, their
wou ld , etc.) suggests dlat Shakespeare himself may not have done
interest is no more than typographical. With thf"-se cxceptio ns aJl
F variants a re naturally given. Owing to the extent of divergence
so, and since the rhythm may often be kept by running syllables
together wilhout actual elision, the editor sJlould, ] think, be it would not be profitable, or indeed possible, to list the variants
sparing of contractions. Si..milarly with the un accented vowels in of QI ; but the agreement or QI with either Q2 or f where these
polysyllabic words. It must be admitted that Q . herc is a very differ is usual1y noted, and its independent readings are occaslon
dubious authority: it prints sulphrns at. 1. v. 3 but has just had a ll y cited, especially where thcy may co nceivably assist in es tab
soueraigntie and desperate (I. iv. 73, 87) and will go On to adulltTat~ lishin g th e t.ext . In the interes ts of both c1arity and econom y and
and 'troyttTous (J.v·42, 43). In these and o tlier cases I have not to avoid the frequent repetition of such locutions as QI .ruhst.! it
wished to mark an elision where the original does nolo will I hope be sufficient for me to remark here that while varian ts
are cited in the spC"lling of the text in which they occur, where twO
The problem of elision of course concerns verse only. The
contractions that modern spelling permits in prose an~ limited to or more texts are listed as having the same variant the spelling
those of colloquial speech. may be th at of the first only. Since Quartos later than the second
The punctu a ti on ofQ2 d ese rves to be trea ted with respect both and Folios la ter than the first were each printed from th eir
for the signs of intelligent handling and the presumed closeness of respective predecessor''S, thei r variants, when they arc not merely
the tex t to Shakespeare. But the idea that it relies almost entirely errors, have only the status of editorial emendations a nti are
upon the punctuation of its copy is impossible to endorse.l The acco rdingly noted only when they have intrinsic interest or
Titus Andronicus reprint shows the compositors, though attentive historical importance.
to their copy, ready to depart from it on occasion, and they may
well have been tile more so when the copy was foul papers (see A word should perhaps be added on onc innovation in th e
above, p. 46). I have normally retained their punctu ation where Commenta ry. Not all that has made H amiel the most discussed
it seems compatible with sense and modern practice, bu t I have
play in the world is mattcr for an editor ; but there are numero us
not hesitated to vary it as a modernized tex t requires. The
detailed controversies on points of interpreta tion which no
Elizabethans used commas or colons in many cases where modern
annotator can ignore. It has become increasingl y obvious to mc
writers would use full stops, which I have often therefore sub~
that annotation of this play, ifi l is not to be hopelessly inadeq uate,
stituted. I do not subscribe to the view that to follow an Eljza~
canllol be accommodated, according to Lhe IlIuch-valued Arden
uethan quarto in punctuating long speeches almost entirely with
practice, at the foot of the page; amI this practical difficulty I have
commas somehow makes them more dramatic. The dramatic
sought to cope with by a compromise. While ret a ining the usual
aims of E lizabethan pOinting will often be better fulfilled by
format of a footn ote-commcn tary, I have supplemented this by a
translating than preserving it.
scries of ' Longer Notes'. The existence of a ' Longer Note' on any
passage i5 always ~ignallcd by the letters LN. r\everthcles~ I have
In the textual apparatus no notice is usually taken of spelling and tried in the footnote always to give a suffi cient gloss for the reader
punctuation (including presumed mispriuts), except where tbey to get at lhe bare sense without having to look beyond the page;
a n-eet, or may affec t, the sense; of variations in spacing (as in a when he seeks supporting a rg ument. he may perhaps be willing to.
Since the determinan t of the Long(-~ r Notcs, however, is primari.ly
.
whilt, to day, mt thinks, a sundt r) ; or, in stage-directions and speech
the call on space, th ey arc necessarily miscellaneous. Some defend
I . M SH , pp. 196-7. The rival hyperboles or Dover Wilson••('aJh.ing-ofsheer th e readings of' the text, or debate interpretations. Some sup ply
beauty') and the recent Pcnguin (,TIle pun ctuation is chaotic') may be allowed
so urce material or conlemporary ill ustration of mauners or li nguis·
to cancel one another ou t.
"--- ---------------- tic usage; some, in however inadequate a sUlTImary, im.licate
[l2 HAMLET INTRODUCTION 83
a context of ideas. It is, moreover, only by means of Longer 'ghost which el'ied so miserably at the Theatre, likc an oysler~
Notes that one can do justice to the many questions which criti wife, Hamlet, revenge'. 1 It is usually assumed that the play thus
cism has hy now made inescapable - like the question of Hamlet's acted at the Theatre was the same as the Hamlet of which
age (sec v.i. 139- 57) or of the King's behaviour at the dumb-show Henslowc's Diary reoords a single performance at. Newington Butts
(m.ii.133 S.D.) . Some famous matters of debate find a focus in inJune 1594, and {hat this in turn was a revi val of the Hamlet play
Notes on single words, like fishmonger (II . ii. 174) Or nunnery akcady being sa,irizcd by Nashe in a famous passage in his
(m.L 121 ). Other Notes range beyond word or phrase (Q engage Preface to Greene's Menaph on in 1589:
with a whole speech. To take contrasting examples, Hamlet's
soliloquy beginning 'To be or not 10 be' (Ill. i. 56~8) and Ophelia's I t is a common practice nowadays amongst a sort of shifting
running commentary on her distribution of flowers (IV. v. 173- 83), companions, that run throug h eVCI'y art and thrive by none, to
the one already too much disc ussed, the other - for this play leave the trade of Noverint, whereto tb ey werc born, and busy
strangely - too litlle, caJJ in Illy judgment for fresh interpretation. themselves with the endeavours of art, that could scarcely
Latinize their neck-verse if they should have need; yct English
Such speechcs as the recital about Troy and Pyrrhus (II. ii. 448 Seneca read by candle-light yields many good sentenecs, as
5 ( 4), the Queen's desc rip,ion of Ophelia's dea,h (IV. vii. 165- 82), Blood is a beggar, and so forth; and uyou entrcat him fair in a
Hamlet's apology to Laerlcs (v.ii.222- 40) cannot be properly frosty morning, he will afford you whole Hamlcts, ] should say
understood if they arc merely viewed , as they have too oHcn been, handfuls of tragi cal speeches. But ... Seneca, let blood line by
in relation to the motives and reactions of the characters. In the line and page by page, at length must needs die to our stage;
editorial task of explanation, the Longer Noles have not their which makes his famished followers to imitate the kid in Aesop,
least important function when what has to be explained is not who, enamoured with the fox's newfanglcs, forsook all hopes
just the verbal meaning, which may even be plain enough, but oflife to leap into a new occupation; and these men, renouncing
the place and purpose of a speech or episode in the play's large all possibilities of credit OJ' estimation, to intermeddle with
d esign. Italian translations. . . (Nashe, iii·315- 16).
In one othcr respect I am aware of departing [rom custom. It This passage not only vouches for the existence of the old
seems to me a rational proced ure when commenting on a modern. Hamlet playas early a~ 1589 but may be thought. t.o give a clue to
ized text of Shakcspeare to give quotations from other aUlhors, the author of it. The fable of the kid, in any case more Spenser's
save those whose language is that of an older period, in modern than Aesop's, % appears to be brought in less for its aptness than
~pclling too; and except when the original spelling is or may be
for the pun on a writer's name. Although speaking of 'a common
relevant to the point at issue, this is what I have normally done. practice', Nashe is focusi.ng on onc practitioner. For it cannot be
The reader wiJI not be surprised therefore if references to a a coincidence that Thomas Kyd had been bam the son of a
standard edi tion in old spelling arc accompanied by a modern scrivener; not keeping to this 't.rade of Noverint', t.ook to literary
spelling quota tion . Occasionally, Jar the sake of intelligibility, I composition; not having bcen to a university, could be said to
have not shrunk fi'Om modernizing punctuation also. have had a limited classical education; was nevertheless an
imitator of Seneca, from whom he culled many sententious say
5. SOURCES ings in his Spanish Tra.t:edy and elsewhere; but forsook that
The Ur-Hamlel occupation [or a new one when in 1588 he published The House·
holder's Philosophy <first written in Italian hy .. . Tasso'. To remark
It is reasonably and inevitahly supposed that lhe immediate with McKerrow that others as well as Kyd meddled with Italian
SOurce of Hamlet was an earlier play on the same subject, which
scholars have corne to call the Ur-Hamlet. This play is not extant I . Wit's Misn;J. 1596, p. 56. 'Hamiel , revengc' became a byword. Sec
and was apparently never printed, but th:\t it did exist is weB Dekker, Sali,omtlStix, Iv .i. 121; Rowlands, 71u Night·/Uutm, 16'20, sig. 0'2.
known from a number of contemporary references. Its perform~ 2. Till Shephud's Calendar, May, 174- 305. Spenser's story is a variation on
ance in or before [596 is witnessed to by Thomas Lodge's allusion Aesop's fable of the ~'olr and the kid , substituting a fox for the wolf and an
cnding in which the kid, instead of staying unharmed, i~ 'so enamored with the
(() what seems to have been a notorious fea ture, the pale~Yizardcd newell' that he succumhs.
161 HAML ET
as Danish, this i,\ a notahit': Anglo. 9 17- 10, 'a Reynold . . T hat by his
Saxon name, a nd as such occurs in shifts his M aster rurnish can'. The
ea rl icr Elizabethan dra ma, as in t.he cha nge to Montano in QI, along
pseudo-historical A Knack to Know Q with that of Polonius (q.v.) to
Knave and the titles of two other Coram bis, is unexplained.
plays in Hens/owt'. It is not a pparent 2 1. A Pritst] At O phelia's fun eral.
why Sha kespeare gi v~ ii, like Oswald, So F, Q I ; bu t Q2 has only thespccch_
to ont: who insp ire!! contempt. .\Oh:rdy headi ng D (XI. (twice), which Oovl:r
THE TRAGEDY OF
'3, Courtier' 0 11 entering in Q~. he Wilson lakes for a costume note a nd HAMLET , PRINCE OF DENMARK
Fran. Barnardo ?
Bar. H e.
5
Fran. You come most carefully upon your hour.
Bar. 'Tis now struck twelve. Get thee to bcd, Francisco.
Fran. For this relief much thanks. 'Tis bitter cold,
And I am sick a t heart.
Bar. H ave you had quiet guard? 10
Fran . Not a mouse stirring.
Bar. Well, good night.
Title. TR,\GIm'l] Q2,F; TragicaH Historic Q J.
ACT I
Scent J
Ar.-r I SCENt:: 1.] F (Actlu P,imw. Scena Prima. ) ; not in Q2. S.D.] Q 2, F;
E nfu two CtTltil1el.s. QJ" FrOn(;Sal "/Jon hi!>' Post; En l~ r) to llim, BcmarJo. Ca/Hll.
12- 11 .1 ..11 Q2 : /mm F.
S. n. Stlllillt:Lrl The scen e is thc plat* ' is dramalie:ll1y iro nic.al ill view of all
form of the b:lt tlcmc.nlt:d castle:. that foIl0\\'5' (Dover Wilson).
Cr. I. ii. '2 I] . 6. upon your hour J on the stroke of
1*'"'25. 1L:'t. your appointed lime.
!l . mrl Em pha tic. h i ll the sentry n. much t"fltlkI ] 'Tb ~lI\ks ' Wa.Il often
o n guard who hal the right to used as &ingular. cr. u. ii. 'J S; Ant.
challenge. II. vL .n ('it libr:ral thanks' ).
3. Limg l ij~ I~ A*t'Vl! I \V!let her or 9. lick fi.l htar'-' Friln('Lsco's mclan
not this i. the ronnal pa!IJword. as cboly. ror which no r~n is given,
often IUPpo.·\('<!, Bam.trdo idcmi lics c:onlrih U1CS to the imprell(ion that a ll
himself :..Ill 0 0 (" on lawrul hll1'; intlS. is not wdt. It 'for("~ h<tdowll HaUl let'
cr. ~tarcd ills al I. tG. Uut the !i.pa::ch (I)ow:r Wilson ).
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IGG HAMLET [ACT l SC . IJ HAMLET 1G7
If you do Illeet Horatio and Marcellus,
T ouchin g this dreaded sight twi ce seen of us .
Stand, ho! Who is there ? 15 Hor. Tush, tush, 'twill not appear.
Hor. Friends to this ground. Bar. Sit down awhile,
Mar. And liege men to the Da ne. And let us once again assail your cars,
Frall. Give yo u good night. That are SO fortifi ed against our story, 35
Mar. 0, (;, rewdl honesl soldier, who hath relicv'd yo u? What we have two nights seell.
Fran. Barnardo hath my place. Give you good night. Exit. Hor. Well, sit we down.
Mar . H olla , Barnardo! 20 And let us hcar Barnardo speak of this.
Bar. Say, what, is l"Ioratio there ? Bar. Last nightofall,
lfor. A piece of him . When yo nd same star that's westward from th e pole,
Rar. Welcome, Horatio. Welcome, good Marcellus. H ad made his course t'illume that pa rt of heaven 40
Hor. What, has this thing appear'd again tonight? Where now it burns, Marcellus and myself,
Rar. I have seen nothing. 25
Mar. H oratio says 'tis but our fantasy,
And will not let bclieftake hold of him , 29- 30. a long With us] along, With vs Q2 j aJong With vs, F. 36, have two
15 S. D.] As SiSJol1; after / '1 Q 2,F ; after ' !j Dyet. ' 5. hal Q~j not in F. nig hts] Q!I,Q I " two Nights halle F.
Who is] Q2; who's F. ,8. sold ier.! F,QI ,' souh.licrs Q,2. Ig. ha th]
Q 2,Q l" ha's J;: 24. J·lnr.] Q:l; Mar. F,QI.
'4. rivalsJ partnen, which QI l'Cads. tone of humorous de flation, cr. his 29.] An explana tion for the benefit ( .... attempt to gel you to listen to).
cr. rivali ty, !Int. lII.v. 8, a nd C heuk, r<'joinders to Ham let at I. ii. 16g, of the audience rather than Dnrn 38. of alll Emphatic ; cr. last of a ll ,
/1offman, ' I' ll S(.-a l tJH.'e by m y throne I. v. 131 -·2, m.ii,273 , 279, v.i.199· al"do, who was expecting Horatio to 39. yond same slnr] ~nlou g h there
o r S(:\tc. And make thee riva l in those 23, Wt/come . . . M(lrcellus.] Colt·· come (I. 2 1). neoo Ix no reference to an idcn ti·
govcrnm£:111s' (MSR. I. 735). ridge (i. 39) distinguishes the 'glad olong] \Villt the common omiS!ion fiabl e SIal', Sha kesp<:<lre had pre·
16. the Dane] Ihe J)anish king. ness' of ' We lcome, Horat io!' from of the verb of motion. Abhott 30. sumably secn the brilliant sta l'
cr. l. ii. 44 . v.i·':.I5 1. th(: mere 'courtcsy' of ' \\ 'c1eome, 30. W ith 11$] TIt~ Q2 punctuation Capella , which would appear in the
17. (,'i l'l!'j i.e. (may) God give. good Marcellus!' as well as the metre connec ts this willler sky 'westwnrd from the pole'
C f, LLL I V . ii. 78, 'God give you good 24. lliis Ilting] The riram<l tic re primarily with 'to watch' ra ther ( _ pol(!·s tar), as the:: star.l of Ihe
morrow'. quirement suppo,·ts the a uthori ty of th"n wilh 'along' ; but the word G reat Dear, which have a lso heen
2 1. what] It is diflicult 10 a uach a Q'l in the attribution of this line to order pe rmi ts us to lake il with both . suggcsted , would not (N&Q, CCV IU,
precise val uc to these lilll ~ int<!I·. B onltio ra ther than Marcellus.. II is 32. approvej confirm the trust· 4 12- 1 3).
jcctiOlls, whid l give the dTec l of the unheliever who describes as 't his wOrlhines.~ of. 4(). }lis 1 its. lIis was the ordina.ry
I.xuh Ilaturahu:ss aud urgell ey. Th is thing' what !\fa n.:dhls "",ill pr<!selltly sfMak to il] LN. form of the neu ter. as well as mascu
seems ( 0 co mbine the w/lnt or a ca ll rder to as 'lhili d l'cadcd sight ', ' this 33. Sit down] This may seem incou li ne, possessive. The Elizalx tha n
(i n r('pl y to !\hrceUus's Holln) wilh aprKl riti on'. lly these u nspecific gr uoll~ for a sentry. W . J, Lawre nce a lternati ve was ii, as at l.ii.216,
rhe whnl which prdlld (~s a question llJlulliOiIS Sh:lkespc:lrc wonlicrful.i}' (<is in I. i. 42 S. D, LN) argucs Iha l 'The V. i.214. lis occurs in some late
(d: I. 24, u. i. 107, a nd sec OED What keeps us ill ~lI s pcn se. O nly when Ihe sea ted attitude was adopted 10 con· Sha kespearean quartos (including
A 21). Ghoot hn.s actually appcart.:d does he cell lrale a ttention on the spectre', Ham. Q4) and ra rel y in the Folio,
22 . A p j~ct of him1 The hand he particularize it n!l a figure ' like the which wou ld emerge ' in front of where it i5 presumably an editor's o r
o(Jhs is solid enough, but the dark King tha t's deael' , Ihem through a trap'. But cr. l.i.42 printer's modernization. Cf. Abbott
which concen ls Ihe rcst of him enables 26. falllaJY] delusive imagination. S.D. L:"l. 228.
him 10 r~('rvc fu ll p!lrticipation. The LN. 36. What] O bject of the verb of illume] Apparently <l Shakespearea n
sccpl i<.: is already char<.lcte rizcd hy his say ing implied in aHait your tors coinage.
168 HAMLET [ACT I sc. I] HAMLET 169
The bell then beating one- H OT. Stay, speak, speak, I charge thee speak. Ex;t Ghost.
Mar. 'Tis gone a nd will not answer. 55
Enter GHOST. BaT. H ow now, H oratio? You trembl e and look pale.
Mar. Peace, break thee off. Look where it comes again.
Is not this something more than fantasy?
Bar. In the same figure like the King that's dead.
What think you on' t?
Mar. Thou art a scholar, speak to it, Horatio. 45
H OT. Before my God, I might no! this believe
Bar. Looks a not like the King? Mark it, Horatio.
Without the sensible and true avouch 60
Hor. Most like. I t harrows me with fear and wonder.
Of mine ow n cyes.
Bar. I t wou ld bc spoke to.
MaT. Isitnotlikethe King?
Mar. Question it, Horatio.
Hor. A, thou art to thyself:
Hor. What art thou that usurp'st this time of night,
Su ch was the very armour he had on
Together with that fai r and warlike form 50 When he th'ambitiolls Nonvay combated.
In which the majesty of buried Denmark So frown 'd he once, wh cn in an a ngry Farle 65
Did sometimes march? By heaven , I charge thee speak. He smote th e sledded Polacks on the icc.
Mar. It is offended.
'Tis strange.
Bar. See, it stalks away.
Mar. Thus twice before, and jump at this dead hour,
42 S.D.] Q2,Qr; afler off F. 44. figure] Q2,QI; figure, F. 46. aJ Q.; 54. theel Q.2,QI; tbe:e, F. 64. he] Q2,QI; TJDI in F. th' ] F; Ihe Q !?,Q ,
it F,QI . 47. harrows] F ; hon-o wes Q.2; horron QI. 48. Ques tion] 66. l'olacks] M aione ; pollax Q .:.>,F (Pollax), QI" Poleaxe F/ , Pole·a xe Rowe;
1'~Q l ; Spt".akc ( 0 Q2. 52. thce] Q2, 1-~ Q.I" thee, ROUM. Polack Po/Jt.. GU. jump] Q.:.>,QI; iust F.
42 . btating] striki ng, though the at v. i.I73 . Though QI a nd F locut.o r is not the one it seeks. See before. Dowden remarks tha t t he
sugg("''Slion is rathe r of rhythmic n".gularizc here to it, bolh retain the n ext n OIe:. armour would be reme mbered and
rcpc:tilioll than of a single st.ro ke. ma~lI lin e pronoun in I. Gt). In 1;1Ier 55. will not an;wn] GhosL'l. t' vell long poin ted out; but the truth , I
cr. to beat a drum, and Q I towling. sccnCi, he ami ;1 alternate , pal'll}' whcn qucstioned, will speak onl)' to think, is that althol1gh it la ler suilS
42 S.D. Enttr Ghost. ] LN', at.'COrding as the Glu:r.it is thought those for whom Lhe y h.\\'c a message. Shakespeare to dale the victory ov(:r
44. Iht same] i.e . the same as on of in its cha ral·t.:r of apparitio n o r as Cr. 1.i. J7G. Fort inhras on the d ay of Prince
previous occasion!\. the spirit of I-IumJcl's J'alhr.r (sec e.g. 58. OI'1 't] For 01'1 where w e U$e of, Ham let's birth , he docs not at thi s
like the King ] Nute the refraining TIl.iV. 136-8); hut it would be ....'rong sec Abboll 18 1. Cf. I.. 9'J:(F). stage attach any prec.ise date to it .
from accl'pting that it is in f:tct the 10 look for any COllllislCnt d is tinction . 59. might] was Mill common ly lIsed ef. \' .i. 1 39 ~ 57 and lAo!.
King. cr. bdow, 11. 46-7. 50 ~'2. B4, 47· hlrrro!tlsJ la cerrucs (OED 4)· in ilS origina l scnsc: of 'coukl '. C r. 61 . N OrWD)' ] the: King of Norway,
11 2- 13; T.ii . qt!). 244. Doub t as to Cr. I.v.lfi. QI shows an intcrC!\f.ing I. ii. [41. the ckkr Fo rtinbra~. Th c com bat is
the G h ost's iJcnlity ill pn:senl fro m confus ion, litH the Q~ JtQrrowu finds 60. lIlt Jtn.lib le . /wo/lchl the dt:sc:ribed II. 65 tT.
the fir ~ 1. a prlCcedcnl in A Ilem,-d), for Sedilion assuraoce given hy the evidence Qf 65. frolt't/'J] A~ be fitted" m:lrtia l
45. ;(IIolor1 (;1 L 3~ Ll"1. Thl)Ugh ( 153fi ), 'They . . . horrowe wi th t.he scnsc.~. tII·ouch, test imon y. Cf. hero. Cr. 1. ii. 230 and n.
L "l.lin , as l"tlitors re:mark , was nc(;cs .~p<l(ks' ( ~4). 'vouch', MeaJ·. II . i VA 156. The t:oll\.·cr patiel parley. encounlcr (.ami pe r
!!ary for tht' C'xorcillm of spirit!!, that 48. It u:auld be X/JOke IU.] cr. I. :-1 2 LS .. sion o f the sceptic (cf. II. Q6-7 } will haps one not limitt.-d to words) . Sec
is not the: po int hen'.. The purpO:le of 49 . W UI!l';/! Il oratio challeoges persll adc~ the a ud ience to a cce pt L G6 L:>I .
question ing (I ghOil i1\ 10 discover both the Ghost'!\ right to illv"df" the the objective rC;"llilY of the Ghost. G6. sledded I'olachJ Poles borne in
' whn it ill, and \!that is its lnl!\l nCS$' ni!(h t and its righl to asnll:m: til Bul it ..... ill on l), enha n ce unec:rtainty s l ed~ . IA'I .
(G n )lle, Prozillnlli Glu.uary). rOml or the: dc.."l.d King. as LO its nature ancJ purpose. C r. 68. jump] exact ly. Cr. v . ii '300, und
46. 01 O,lIoqubl 1{lf ha = he; 5 1. f)c nmlJlAllhr K ing of I)c·Tllnark. II. 70-'.l. , I;JI - 4'l j l.iv· 4o- 57; JI .ii·594- Olh.. II. iii. 37<1, ' hring him jump wht'n:
(;om11l0n in the E liza lx' lhan dr"ma, Cr. Norw ... y. I. 64. 9· he may Cassio rind .'
but oftt' n (impropt'fly) n.~prt:Scntn::l 52. Jomtt mv..J1 form erl y. 63 . lite l'try armour] There is perhaps dead] has ominous connotations or
by 0' in mod ern te-.x ts. 1 t is frequtnt 53. II ;J nJjrwitfJ.J Not (as l·rot\1Cr, an ineonsistl'ne y ill allowing H orn-tio 'the dead or night ' (cr. Til. Il.iii.99),
in Q'J (Do\'(:.r W ilson count ed 37 pp. N be(.';m~l· il ill im'okt'd 'lly to know this dctnil or what tbe pl"y the time; of s{ illn C5.~ and dnrknc5s,
irul .mccs), bu l is. tcttlJllnl in F on ly hea\'l:n' but hec:tu~ th i~ inler will la ter say happened thin y ycars ....·hen the normal acti vilies or life
186 H A MLET [ACT I sc. II] HAML E T 18 7
And with no less nobility ofloyc 11 0 But the great cannon to the cloud s shall tell,
Than th a t which dea rest fa th er bears his so n And the Kin g's rouse the hea ven shall bruit again,
Do I impa rt toward YOll. For yo ur intent R c-spcaking earthly thunder. Com e away.
With martial stalk hath he gone by our watch. Whose image even but now appear'd to us,
HOT . In what part.icular thought to work I know not, 70 Was as you know by Fortinbras of Norway, 85
But in the gross and scope ofmy opinion, Thereto priek'd on by a most emulate plide,
This bodes some strange erup tion to our stale. Dar'd to the combat; in which our valiant Hamlet
Mar. Good now, sit down, and tell mc, he that knows, (For SO this side afoul' known world esteem'd him)
Why this samc strict and most observant watch Did slay this Fortinbras, who by a seal'd compact
So nightl y toils the subject of the land, 75 W ell ratified by law and heraldry 90
And why such daily cast ofbrazcn cannon Did forreit, with his life, all those his lands
And roreign mart [or implements ofwar, Which he stood seiz'd of to the conqueror;
Wh y such impress of shipwrights, whose sore task Against the which a moiety competent
Docs not divide the Sunday from the week . Was gaged by o ur King, which had return'd
What might be toward that this sweaty haste 80 To the inheritance ofFortinbras, 95
Doth make the night joint-labourer with the day, Had he been vanquisher; as, by the same cov'nant
\¥ho is' t that can inform me? And carriage of the article design'd,
HOT . Tha t can l. His fell to Hamlet. Now, sir, young FOl'tinhras,
At least the whisper goes so: our last King, Of unimproved mettle, hot and full,
90. heraldry] heraldy Q2, Hcraldric F,Qr. 91. those] F,Qr .. th~e Q2.
71. m y] F.Qr; mine Q2. 76. why1 F,Q.I.' with Q2, cast] F; cost
92. or] Q2,QI; on F. 94. rcturn'd) F; relurne Q2. 96. eov'nanl] F;
Q 2, Q/.
coma.rl QR; compac t Q 1676. 97. article de!ign'd] 1'2; anicle desseigne
Q2; Article d.csignc F; articles dcseigne Q3·
are suspended. Cr. I . ii. 198. Applied subjetl) subject! (collcc ti ve), as in
10 midnight, 3S often (M etu. Iv. ii . 59. l.ii.:13. cr. Meas. H.iv.27. 'The
86. emulau] emu lous, cager to competent] suffIcient. Ilamlc l Slakes
R3 v. iii. 180), it concen trates these general 5ubject to a wcll· wish'd
excel. lands enough to rna leh aU those of
suggcllitions upon an t'xact point of king Quit their own part'.
08. this side of Qur known wo,ld] Fortinbras.
timc, and so here, thollsh the hour i6. wJvol With ellipsis (Ihere is).
' r.: the whole western world (as we 9+. fdufn 'e1] A loose usc, not to be
is onc not twdvc (1. 42), it ha~ the cast] casti ng.
should say )' (Dover Wibon ). taken as implying that Fortinbras
additional dfc.."C1 of reinforcing jum/J. 7(>-8. bra~1I connon . .. shipwrighLr]
89. compact) The st ress on lhe would have got back f>O$..~essions
70. 10 work (i1l)J to let my mind be A refif':Clion of Denmark 's contero· second syflable is usual in Shakes· originally his.
occupied (wilh). porary war pn:paralions under Chris· peare. 96. lite same CO;J'1I/wt] i.e. the 'com·
71. Ihe gWH and sco/Je J Ihe general tian IV. A decade ca dier Sir J erome 90. ltefa/dry) the recognized usages pact' or I. 8g. LN.
drift, ::l..S c;ontmslCd with the 'parlicu· Horsey ( Trmlels, HakluYI, Soc. , pp. or chivalry, o r which the heralds were 97. c(1rriage . . " e1esign'e1l purport
lar t hought' (1. 70). 241- 4) had complained to C hrillt i<t n', arbiters. Else..... here Shakespeare em· or the article rererred to. LN.
72. This Ixxles ... sla/t.] COnlj1('lIcd prcdcec..'SSOI· or 'Ihe enticing away' or ploys the word in its morc usua l sense 99. unim/Jfoveel] unreslrain<."<i. 'To
by hi5 'own eyc~' (I. 6, ) Lo abandon English 'shipwright! to rash ion yOur or the lo re of armorial bearings or, by improve' is (I) to turn to good
lhe- thcory of'rantasy' (I. 26), Horatio navy' and ' the carrying away' rrom synecdochf':. for the eo.'l. I-or.arms account, a.'I in the only Shakcspt'.arean
adopt! an orthodox alternative. Cr. England (cr. Jortig1l marl ) or 'much ilsclf. (Cr. II . ii +52; All's W. II. iii. 256. ) US(:, 'his means, ir he improve them.
L~l\'at cr, lI .xvi: 'Ir thry be not vain ordinance, hOlh bra.~$ and iron. Low arid IUfalJry. though soroetirnc...'S may well slretch ' (Qus, n , I. 159);
pcrsua5ions, or nalural thing5, then pieces <Jnd OIhcr munition '. taken as a henrliadys ror heraldic .....hence unim/Jrol:eel, either (0) ' not
an: they rorewarnings or God. ' 77. morn {= markf't ) Ir'ading, law, more probably implies Ihat the yet used fOI' advantage' (Skeat,
trlt/}/ionl violent outbl·ca k. C r. Cou. 7R. i",p" ssJ imprc.."Unlcnt (ror rorced agl'cemen I was executed by a legal GloJsary), untried, 'waiting 10 be
I. iii. 78, 'strange eruptions'. service), <:onlic.:ript ioll, a!J in Troil. instrument (d. seol'd ) as well as given shape or purpose' (Alex.
73. Good nowl An expn.'l!Sion or Il,i·95· hav ing heraldic approval. ander), or (b) with Uri· d('notinl{
entr(":l.Iy, 'good' being a vocative Bo. toward] imminen t. cr. v.ii.370. 91. DidfqrJeit . . ,allJ LN. reversal rather than mere negation,
with the omission of the noun. Also th. That am I. ) Horatio"_ position g2. ~iz.'d of] possa'iCd of. Still of undisciplined, ill.regubl<."<i, 'a llowed
at E". IV. iV.'l I. AbboH 13. as inrormant here contrasl5 with his course the regular legal term. to run rial ' (Verity) : (2) to rcprove,
75. toibl ( tran s.itive) impt)S(,.'S toil unramiliarity ..... ith affairs ill Den· 93. moieljl] portion (nol necessarily condemn (L.. improbau ), whence
on. C L Abbott 290, mark ill I. iv. See l, iV.12- 13 LN. limited to a ha lf). unimproved _ 'unrepl'oved' (Nares),
17 2 HAMLET [ACT I SC . I] HAMLET 173
Hath in the skirts of Norway here and there 100 Comes armed through our watch so like the King
Shark'd up a list oflawless resolutes That was and is the question of these wars.
For food and diet to some enterprise H OT. A mote it is to trouble the minu's eye. 115
Tha t hath a stomach in't, which is no other, In the most high and palmy state of Rome,
As it doth well appear unto our state, A little ere tbe mightiestJulius fell,
Bu t to recover of us by strong hand 105 The graves stood tenantless and the sheeted dead
And terms compulsatory those foresaid lands Did squeak and gibber in the Roman streets;
So by his fa ther lost. And this, I take it, As stars with trains of /ire and dews of blood, 120
I s the main motive ofour preparations, Disasters in the sun; and lhe moist star,
The source of this our watch, and the chief head Upon whose influence Neptune's empire stands,
Of this post-haste and rummage in the land . 110
115. motel molh Q.a, mote Q4. Ilg.1 OmissiOlllllarked tifter this line! Jmnens.
Bar. I think it be no other but e'en so. 120-3. ] As Q2; oJttr 128 Tschisdw:ilz.
Well may it sort that this portentous fjgure
occa5ion of the war. It! being 'armed' slak1 in the territorial and political
(0 (. lawlCc\S] Q2,QI" Landlesse F. As] Q2; And F,
104 . aceords with the danger of war. sense, as at I. 72. Christopber North
106. eompulsatory] Q2; ComplIlsatiuc F. 11 0. rummage) Q2 (Romadge), portentous] in the strict sense. Cr. (Blackwcod's, I..xVI, 252- 4) insists
F (Ramage). 111-28.] Q:z; not in F,Qr. Lavater, I.i, 'Por/ell/um is that. whit;h that it implies 'at once Place a['l(.\
forsheweth some thing to come, as indwelling Power'. 'The high and
unr<:buked, uncensured. pay but their) food. Rather they arc when strange bodies appear in the palmy state of Rome' thus corres
100. skirts] outlYLng parts. to serve as 'food .. , 10 some enter air, or bb.1.ing slars ...' ponds to Virgil's ' rerum . . . pul
101 . Shark' J up] gOl together by prisc·. cr. ncxt note. I 15. A mote it is ] Not, pace Dover cherrima Roma' (Cl!'Orgics, 11 ·534)'
snatching up indi.serim ina te'I>·, as a 103. a stomach1 'nle entcrprise is Wilson, because Horatio sees the 11 7- 23.j FOI' the prodigies pre
shark docs il.~ food. OED presents pcn;oniftcd by it s possession of a incidc:nt all insignificant hut because ceding Caesar's de~H h , I.N.
it sets lip irrit:ltion in the (mind's) Itg. squeak] Ghosts tmditionaUy
'shark' as a va..iant or 'shirk', to trick stomach, or a spirit of daring, the
and hence to prey o n otlH~r.I, in wh ich stomach being traditionally the seat eye . Tilley M IISg. Thc Q2 moth spoke in a thin shrill voice. In Ihe
this sense is strengthcnt'd by the of coul'age, Cf. Ccus. v.i.G6, 'If you is a n alternalive, and probably a Odyssey the sou ls of Penclope's su itors
predatory connotations of th e noun. dare fight today, come 10 the field; ShakcspeMcan, spelling. cr, QF of squeak like bau ( XXIV. 5) . Cr.
The suggestion of the shark 's ~av:lge If not, when you h:lVt: ~ t.omachs'. LU_ Iv.iii.157 and F of John Iv.i·9~ , Aeneid, \'1.492-3, 'vocctn cx iguam';
rapac.it)· anticip<.ltcs lawleJJ. Cf. Sir There is a play (In thc literal semc, HS IV. i. '77, LocrinL, Ill. vi. 19, 'shrieking notcs';
Thoma! More (MSR, Addn II. 207-9), the slomach of the enterprise being to trouble] Hl1gh of St Chcr, com I.V.2 n. below.
mentlng on Psalm iV.4 (see Vulgate, 120. As] The aw kward eon ncetion
'ruHianll liS their fan eil:g wl'oughl .. supplied with 'food' in the shape or
would .~ hal'k on you', :mcl Dover the 'lawless r t.:.~o lllt cs'. Ikl slc, 1504), distinguisht:5 bctween suggests possible omis~ion. LN.
\Vi bon, NCS, pp. xxx\·i- x.'(xvi i. the sinful anger which blind!!., and 121. Disaskrs] signs of ill omen. A
log. htlldJ fountain-head, origin,
list] iiI. a catalogue of soldiers' as at lI . ii.55, the zealous a nger which merely 'disas ter' (ef. L. as/rum) is etymolo
names, and so a In)Qp . 110. past-iuute] furious aClivity. troubles (turbot ) the eye for a time, gically 'an unfavourable aspect of a
fowhss resqlu/ts J desperadoes. When cr. J. Ho. like a coll yrium, so that it may later star or planel' (OED),
we sec Fortinbras's nlfn in Iv.iv they rumma.£:"/!'j (of which the: QF readings see more dcarly. So the mind, no\\o' the mout .ftarl the moon (ef. Win/,
are a well-disciplincd army. Shnkc ar<: Oterdy old spdlings), bustling troubled by the Ghost, may later I.ii. I), often ca lled 'watery' with
siX'are proba bly ehallg-cd his dcsi1;n acti....ity, turmoil. Primarily a nautical sec what it betokens, a5 happencd referen ce not si mpl y to its pallid
in counc of c;ompo:sitiofl, wil lI!- Jul tcrm for the removal and rearra nge with the Roman portcnts Horatio light but to the belief that it drcw lip
filling an original idea of introducing ment ora ship's cargo. now cites. The emphasis, however, is moisture from the !lea. I t has power
a revenging son .....ilh an unru ly mob of 111-!l8.] With the omwion of this on prescnt perplex ity rather than on over 'Neptune's empirc' thl'ough itJ
I r thou hast any so und or use of voice, Hor. Do if it will not stand.
Our state 10 be disjoint and out of frame, 20 You, good Cornelius, and you, Voltemand,
Colleagued with this dream ofhis advantage, For bearers of this greeting to old NOIway, 35
He hath not fail'd to pester us with message Giving to you no further personal power
Imponing the surrender of those lands To business with the King more than the scope
Lost by his father, with all bonds of law, Of these dilated articles allow.
To Our most valiant brother. So much for him. 25 Farewell, and let your haste commend your duty.
Now for ourself, and for this time of meeting,
Thus much the business is: we have here writ ~~;. } In that, and all things, will we show our duty. 40
To Norway, uncle of young Fortinbras~ King. We doubt it nothing. Heartily farewell.
Who, impolent and bedrid, scarcely hears Exeunt Voltemalld and Cornelius.
Of this his nephew's purpose~to suppress And now, Laertes, what's the news with you?
30
His further gait herein, in that the levies, You told us ofsome suil: what is't, Laertes?
The liSIS, and full proportions are all made You cannot speak ofreason to the Dane
OUI of his subject; and we here dispatch And lose your voice . What wouldst thou beg, Laertes, 45
:11. Collcaguedl F; Colcaguc:ci Q2; Co-leagued Ca/Mll. this ) Q:l; the F.
That shall not be my offer, not thy asking?
advantage,) adu3lltagc: Q.2,' Aduantage; F. 24. bond!!] F,' band! Q2. The head is not more native to the heart,
25 · him.] Q2; him. I F.rrl« Vol16mand and Cornelius. F. 31. herein.] Q2;
hecrein. F. 33· subject1 Q2,F; subjects Q5. 35. bea.ren] Qz,Qr; hearing F. 38. dilated] F; delated Qz~' related Qr.
40. Cor. Volt.] Qz; Voli. F; Gent. Qr. 4t S.D.] F subs"; nol in Q:t,Qr.
20. dujojnt ond out of fTame] cr. 29 · Importing] having for its sub- 45-6. Laertes, . . . asking?] F; LaerteJ,? _ .. aski.ng, Qz.
ironically .,\1.196, l.i'72, (. iv.go, etc. stance. Dowden rightly reject!
frame, systematic o rder, often re,.. Abbolt's' importuning' . 37. To] ror (Abbott 186). But nothing doubt prevailing'; Ahbott 55.
(erring to the created universe. cr. 24· with QU bonds of law] Cf. Kittredge takes 'to business' as an 42. UurUl] 'Caressing him with his
lI .ii.2g8; IH.,. !l1. i.16; Mac. 1II.ii. [6 I. i.89-g8.
infinitive. name four limes in nine Iinl,.'S' (Dover
(' Let lhe frame orl hings disjoint').
'25· So much for him.] Not or course 38. dilated] set out at length. The Wilson), the King shows his gracioU5·
21. ColleaguedJ allied. The assump that Fortinhras is now d isposed or. Q2 delated, which editors have made nes.o; to Polonius's son . But much more
tion that it must qualify the subjec t. But 'so much' for what he has done heavy weather or, is simply a varian t important, Shakespeare takes this
Fortinbra!$ (I. 17 ), led Warburton and ' now' for my reaction to it.
spelling, recorded in MinshCll ('to opportunity of spotlighting the youth
and o th ers to explain that Forlinbras 26./or 2J the rea~oll for.
Delate, or speak at large of anything') who is to be Hamlet's ' image' (d.
had only his own dream for an ally. 28. Norway, uncle of)·ollll.t~ Fortinbrar] and amply demonstrated in OED. v. ii. 77 ), foil, foc, and ultimately
Dowden and Dover Wilson , with Fortinhras's uncle has !'I ue('eedccl to
Neithcr tbe common interpretation kill er. Cr. Intro., p . t33.
bett er sensc if nOI synlax, t<lkc it with
hi ~ fathcr'$ thron e. This adds to the 'conveyed' nor Dovcr '\'ilson's 4+ the Dane] the Danish king. Cf.
'supposal'. BUl I think it is to hc parallel between the si tuations of 'accusing' commends itself. I. i. 16, v.i.'251.
laken as ap!)lying to the gencral Hamlet and Fortinbra." which aI/ow] Possibl y subjunctive ('may 45. Ilwul The change from you
idca or II. 18-:1:0. In Fortinbras's Shakespearc may have initially de
allow'), more probably 'attracted to thou expresses fri endly intiml'r.cy.
m otives his Ilotion or Dcnmark's
signed to Ile more important than it into the plural by the plural noun 46. I1!J offer . . . arking] givcrr hy me
weaknc!t5 is linked with his dream ~lIbscC'J uentl y becoml,.'S. It should a lso arl~kJ ' (Kittrcdgt» . Cf. lII.ii.I9'2 spontaneously without your having
concern ing himself. refute suggc!l:tions that Claudiu!'! is in and Abbau 412. to ask.
drtam ql hil adt.'anlage] e ither Ihe some way a USurper. 39. ,Your haste commend 70ur dug] i.c. 47. TM head . .. tk Juar') Claudius's
illusion or his (prescnt) superior posi. 3 t • goi/] going, proceeding. OED your haste ra ther than your wonJs. 3SS(':rtion gains strength from the
tion, or tllC~: vision or his (pn:)(Spcct ive) gate Sbl 6. Claudi us anticipates the IIsuall,.,.... rting traditional correspondence bctwt.'tn
gain. The first gOCl' better with this, 32. lists] Cr. d. 101. form ula, exemplified in I. 253 and thc human organisrn, with the inter
the second with colkagued. proportions) numbers, esr-ccially in v. ii. I 79. Cr. Ll.l. IV. i1. 13~, 'Stay not d ependence or its various rncmben,
22 . messoge] Pos.,ibly pluml. as military contexts ; forttll. Cf. 115 thy compliment ; I forgive thy dUly'. and the body politic. The king is
'pcstcr' would 5Uggt·St. O n the sup I . ii. 304, 'Let our proportions for Sec PQ, I, 7t-3. naturally the bead, and in mediaeval
pression of Ihc innexion ancr -ge these wars He soon collected'. ,p . nothing] This advcrhia l usc is allegory the councillors are onen rc
see Allbou 471. 3.3· subjecl] Collective, as in T. i. 75. common. Cf. Cor. l.iii.99. 'they ferred to as the htart. See Kellett,
,82 lIAMLET [ACT I SC. n] HAMLET 183
The hand more instrum ental to the mouth,
Ham. A little more than kin, and less than kind. 65
Than is the throne of Denmark to thy father.
King. H ow is it th at thc clouds still hang on you?
What wouldst thou have, Laertes?
Ham. Not so, my lord, I am too much in the sun.
Lacr. My dread lord, 50 Qjlctn. Good H amlet, cast thy nighted colour off,
Your leave and favour to return to France, And let thine eye look likc a friend on Denmark.
From whence though willingly I came to Denmark Do not for evcr with thy vailed lids 70
To show my duty in your coronation, Seek for thy noble father in the dust:.
Yct now J must confess, that duty done, Thon know'st ' tis common: all that lives must die,
My thoughts a nd wishes bend again toward France 55 Passing through nature to eternity.
And bow them to your gracious leave and pardon. Ham. Ay,madam,itiscommon.
King . Have you your father's leave? What says Polonius? Queen. If it be,
Pol. He hath, my lord, wrung from me my slow leave Why seems it so particular with thee? 75
By laboursome petition, and at last Ham. Seems, madam? Nay, it is. I know not 'seems'.
Upon his will I seal'd my hard consent. 60 'Tis not alone my inky cloak, good mother,
I do beseech you give him leave to go. Nor customary suits of solemn black,
King. Takc thy fair hour, Laertes, time be thine,
Nor windy suspiration offorc'd breath,
And th y best graces spend it at thy will.
But now, m y cousin H amlet, and my son 65.' Asidt I Thtohflld 2. 67 . so] Fj so much Q2. in the sun.! Q2 (sonne);
i'th' Sun F. 68 . nigh led) Q.2; nightly F. 7',/.· (;ommon :] common;
50. My dread] Q2 ; Drcad my F; My gratious Ql. 55. toward] Q2; Theob ald; common Q2; common, F . li ves] Q2,Fj livc F2. 77. good]
towards F. 5R. Hr.] F,Qt; nol in Q2; A Parrott-Craig. 58- 60. wrung. F; eoold Q2.
consent] Q.:t; nQl ill F,. wrung from me a forced graunt Qt. 64. Ham le r,]
Q2,F; Hamlet, Exit [Laertes]. Qt. laor than a brother ; oflcn used of a cause ; Seneca, Ad Pof;·hium,
nephew. Works, tr. LorJge, 1614, p. 692, ,tt
.suggeJti01lS, p. 31 , and d. Cor. I. i. 113- the omission of the pronoun in Q2 by 65. more thall kin . .. kind ] morc than is therefore a great comfort for a man
'4 , ' The king ly Cl'owl1ed head ... The suggesting that ' Polo. Hath' re prc.~nt~ kiosmcn in our actua l relatiooship to oclhjnk hi mselr that the same hath
counsellor heart'. naliLw:, closely <l mi.ueading of 'Po l a [ = he] hath' and less than kinsmcn ill our likeness happcocci un to him, which all othcrs
joined in nahl re. cr. All's W. I . i. 209, ( M SH, pp. 110- 1 I ) . Y CI although Q~ to one another and in our mutual have suffereu Uc(orr. him, anu all that
'kiss like nati ....e things'. In the next invariably 1.ISCS 'Pol.' for the spcech fedin gs and beh aviour. kind, mem follow him m ust endurc, anu there
line (he kin g as the hand is the provider heading c1l1ewhere, it would nor be bers of a ramily all naturall y unitcd in fore . .. nature hath maJe that most
for his subjects. unlike Shakc:speare to wri te 'Polo' commu nity of feeling. L!'i. common whir.b is most grevious'.
49. ,Ire throne. . ji:lher) From this on the firSl occasion and 'Pol' subse 67. in lhe sun1 With plill on 50/1. LN. For ollier elass.ical and Renai.1sanee
acknowledgemen t of Polonimo's se r que nlly. 6D. flighted] night-like. Cf. Abbott in.stances ~ee B. Bo)'ec, PML.4 , LXIV,
vice there is no justifica tion for 60. seal'dJ The metaphor is that of 77 1 - 80 .
294 ·
inferring (bat br. has helped C laudius aRi:-:ing a sea l to a document (with 69. Drnmark] WhellH'r this means all lhnl /iL,tll For the not un common
10 th e throne. It is the throne ibt:lf~ a play on lUill) to give it authori ty. the King (as at I. i. 51, I. ii. 125) 0'· the uje of the inflexional s with a plma l
not its prc!'.Cnt occupant, that ill in hard ] reluctant. kingdom is hardly pouiblc to "1.y. subject, sec Abbott 333·
debted to him. Note that the fn-st &1. Take lhy fair hour] Enjoy the 70. Do 1Iol/or ellt'r] Ironical in view 75. /)()rtiruiar witll thet1 to affect
reference 10 Polonius ;.1 10 him as the fa ....ourable season of your ·life; rOllg hl y of 11. 1.'J.5- 51. yOll as a thing peculiar to yourself.
father of LacrtC$, strC$.Sing what is to equivalent 1.0 cQrpt diem . vaile(fllower cci. OED ,p.. 77 . 'TiJ riot alo1loe) Im plying a con
be a determining fa ctor of the plot. 63. grauJ] a ttractive quaJitics; ell i ~. 'lis commoll] Thi5 sentimcJlt, to trast with the character or hi... mother's
56. leaue and pardon] Kittredge com dowments and aCl.;om plishmcnu. Cr. be atnplifil.."d in the Kiog's flcxt spt·ech, own m()uTnin~ .
pares Morc, R ichard III (cd. Lumby, Mer. V. II. vii.33, 'I do in birth deserve is a tradition:;! l commonplace of con~ 79. sW/JiratioJll sighing. OED citcs
p. 76), ' W'hen the duke hau tbill her, and in forlunes, In graces, and 5olation. Cf. Ovid., Mel., II'. Gold ing, this passage to ill mfrate the 5Cnsc
leave and pardon 10 spea k'. pardo", in qualiti~ ofbrct=ding' ; Alit. H . ii. '34 ; xv . 550, (to Egeria wecping for her 'brea thing'; but Ihe li tera l meaning
indulgence, as al IV. vii. 44. H81.ii.122. husband's death) 'Thy mourning is. more apt.
50. He halh 1 Dover VVilson explains 64· cou.sin] any kinsman more dis - moderate . . . Not on ly thou hast forc'dJ fo rcjbly c~pe ll cd.
blclfl ~ of pa$sion) . The frequent and in lJ. 103-6 cf. Seneca on death: m id- 17th century. 105. tht first carse] Abel's. An un
illlcrpn:lation 'mode' is unauthenti 'Hoc patri luO accidit . . . hoc 93. conJolemellt] grieving. happy instan ~ a ll C laud ius's part,
cated. For though there \\'as some om nihu5 ante te, hoc omnibus post 95. inamectJ uncorrectco, undis with the irony o f an analogy which
tncl-ging of mood (O.E. mOd ) and mode te' (I:.pist/u, 77). See ahove, I. 72 n. ciplincd; hence lIot ~ubmissive, re g~ beyond what the speake!" in tends.
(L. modllJ), the lIse of the la ller in 90. the sllroiWr bound] Grammar and calcitrant. Cr. ul.iii .37--fl.
its mwern non-technical sense was a Kittredge Sl..Iggcst ' (that fa ther) OOlmd 97. simfJIeJ untutored, ignoran t. he] for him. See Ahbott 205--6.
17th-ct:ntllry development, whi(;h the survivor', scnse 'the survivor 99. aIry . .. to suue 1 lbat which IS 106. throw to earth] The phrasing
was no doubt l~pofl'li hle l'Or the (was) bound'. most familiar to common observation suggellts that he should bury it
reading modeJ in QI695 as wdl as 91. some term] Cf. 1. 70, '00 not fo r of anything therc is. cr. Abbott 4' ga (a long with his father) .
lor mode in F3 of 2114 I V. v. 200. e.. . er'. Such advice is again tradi and , (or 'a ny' with su perlative. Cym. 107. I1n/Jrtuailing] unavail ing. cr.
shapts] This 'correction' of the Q2 tional. S~ esp. Ecdoiasticus xxxviii. l.iv . .'l7. ' any the rarest of o ur ladi('",s'. OED prevail v. 4; Rum. llI .i ii .60.
chalKS is supported by Shakespeare's 17. ' Weep bitterly. and make grcat I'ulgar, widely current (cf. Lr IV. vi. log. immediateJ nc,'<t in succession.
frequen t usc of shopt in t he $eme of moan ... and tha t a day or two ... '212, 'MO!\t sure und vulgar; ~(":ryo n e Cr. 2H 4 v .ii.71, 'th 'i mmediate heir
appearance, sometimes in conjunc and then comfort thyself'; Seneca heat'll that' ); sense, perception th rough o f England' (Prince Hal). The King's
tion ..... ith 'form', often denoting (Lodge, p. 706), 'Lt:t our sighs be the senses. statc m ~nt need not be incon.sistent
illusory appcar:lncc, and some times drawn from the bottom of our heart.s; 100. peeL,j!lI] fooli5hly per\'('"ne. with a n e1cclive monarchy (see
in rcfercncc (0 grief. Sec Ado v . i. 14, yet h-t them have an end'. Plutarch 102. Joull to nat UTe J oUence aga inst I. ii. I LN ). Indeed in a hereditary
'such a grief. In every lincam('n t, simila rl y depreca tes 'maki ng no end the natural order of things. mona rchy there would be no occasion
hram:h, shape. and form' ; '~LL or sorrow' (tr. H olland, 1003, p.5to). 10:1- 4' wll/m .. who] 'The antc for it.
\,.ii·75 1; R211.ii.'l2 . F sheu..w is m orc Cf. All's W. I. i' 48-9' cedent seems to be Iw lurt mi he r than
424 HAMLET LO~GF.R NOTES 42 5
th e Hamlet ghost, cit her in l.i v- v or in llt.iv. Yet for all the im
HAMLET, PRIN CE OF DENMARK portance o r addressing it (sec below, 1.1.8, l.ii.214, 24:)), to do so
in other than du e form would be to risk ofIe nee and consequent
I. i. 1- 25.] T hese fi rs t 25 lines are an excellent example of Shake danger to oneself. H ence the necessit y for havi ng present a man o r
speare's techniq ue in incorporating short colloqui a l exchanges in superior learning (ef. J. 45).
what is essentially a blank-verse scene. (Cr. I.ii .224- 13 and n.)
While speeches of as much as five feet sca n easily as blank vcrse l.i . 42S,D. EII/er Ghost.] Possibly via a trap-door (cr. J. 33n.),
(11. 2, 6-8, etc.) , shorter speeches often do not, a nd ca nnot be like the spi rits in Greene's AlpllOllSUS, Cha pman's Blissy d'Ambois,
expected to, ad d up to regu lar me trical units. & e McKcn ow, J onson's Ca tiline, a nd other plaY5, as is held by Lawrence (Pre
Prolegomena, pp. 45- 6. I have not h ere followed the usual editoria l Res/ora/ion Stag' S/udi,s, pp. I04 ff. ) and Sprague (Shakespeare and
practice of wren ching into a typographical simulation of the the AcloTs, p. 128). This, though not pe rhaps in conflict with, is not
bla nk-verse pattern what is clea rly no t meant to conform to it. supported by, th e djalogue, which suggests moveme-nt across the
Coleridge (i. 18, 38-9) notes in th is opening the fami liar langu age stage (II. 43, 129- 30). On departing the fi rst time the Ghost
of common lifc, which lcatls gradually a nd nat uraUy to chat state 'stalks away ' (I. 53 ). The second tim o it 'raded' (I. 16,), but this
in which the bighcs t poetry will a ppea r. word, like ja ppcnrs' and 'vanish'd' (l.ii. 20 1, 220), is used not
during but arter the event. But ef. I. v.g l S.D . n. What the Ghost
1.i . !l6. fantasy] This reflects a co ntemporary opinion concerning looks like is desc ribed at II . 50, 63, 65 a nd I. ii. 200- 2, 226-33· Its
the na ture of g hos ts. W hile mos t 3Ulhoriti cs affirmed them to being in armour is repeatedly stressed (cf. I.iV·Y2) .
exist, it was generally acknowledged , even b y those who believed
in them most firmlYJ that they co uld in some cases be the product l.i.66. sledded Polacks] This much-disputed phrase is usually
of the subj c<: ti vc mind . Sf< e.g. Taillepied. ehs. 3- 5. Cf. Cues. taken, and I think rightly, to refer to inhabitants of Poland riding
I V. iii . 274- 5, ",rae . Ill. iv. 61 If. Le Loyer (Des SpccJn.r, (586), with in sleds. I t is true that the spdling sleaded pol/ax, deri ving from QI,
a ter minological rticcty not u:!iua.l, d istingui.shes between a p han suggests that the early actors a nd printers did not so understand
tom an d a spectre. H en ce Horati o's scepticism need no t imply it. They must have thought the second word wa~ pole-axe, Of', as
tha t he denies ghosts a ltogether. Ye t that 'ntrulY good and godly F4 prints it, poleaxe, of whieh pol/ax was a regular 16th-century
mco- held all app..'l.ri tions to be ha llucinations was conced ed by spelling. But this spelling may have aristn in Ql through an
L avaler (t. ii), Cf. Burton on spiri to (Allot. <!I .Melancholy, l. ii.1 actor's misunderstanding of what he hea rd and said . (Cf. Inlro.,
(2»), 'Ma ny will not believe lhey ca n be seen.' T his view, call ed p. 23.) Paillek, spel t in Qo Pollacke, QI Polacke, F Poleak, is norm al
'dam nable' by Jam(>~<; I, had been mai nta ined in R eginald Scot's Elizabethan for ' Pole', as in 1I . ii.63, 75 and (in Q2 ) Iv.iv. 23 ·
D iscovery of I'V;lchcrqfl (with append ix on ' Devils and Spirits'), Despite so me assertions to the co ntrary, the plural ' Polacks' (or
1511 4. On the dramatic lIse Shakespea re makes o r eoniJi cting eOIl ' Polakes') also occurs, a!'. in R. J ohnson, Kingdoms and Common
tempo rar)' a uitud el'i to g hosts, see Dover VVilson, WHH, pp. 59 f1'. weals ( The World, 160 1) , pp. 127, 128; M oryson , llintrafJ', 1907 - 8
eeln, iii. 380. Scholars who accept pole-axe (for a recent defen ce or
r.i ·3 2 . speak 10 it] T hey ass ume that the G hos t wishes to eom~ which see D. Haley, SQ , XXIX , 4°7- 13) ei ther assume a battle-axe
municate but is unable to. For, in popular belief, 'A ghost has not wit h a sled, or sledge: i.c. ham mer, to it (so Schmidt), despite the
the power to speak till it ha5 been first spoken to; so that, not lack of authority for sled in this scnsc, o r take steaded as a corrup
wi thsta nding th e urgency of the !.Jusiness on wh ich it may come, tion or ' leaded ' or (b y analogy with FIJ.. v.xii.(1) of 'studded '
everyt hing must sta nd still till the person visited e;"l n fin d suffi (N&IJ.., eel, 509). In any event they see King H am le t striking a
cient co urage to speak to i t' (Crose, A Provim;ial Glossary; Brand, weapo n on the ice. This interpretation, since it avoids actu a l
PO/JlJ.lar Antiquities, cd. H az litt). cr. T om J ones, XI, ch. 2, 'The lighting, may bo thought to be ,upportod by parle (but see below) .
otlter who, like a ghmt only wanted to be spo ke to, read ily The objecti on to it, apa rt altogether [rom the diffi cu lty of sleaded,
answf"..red . . .'; Bos'w eWs ]ohmon, 'Tom T yers .. . said .. .• You is the pointlessness of the incident it leaves us with; ifno Polandcl's
arc like a g host: you never spcak till YOll arc spoken to' . Nor does and no sledges, why ice? A pole-axe connects with nOlhing else in
426 HAM1.ET LO N GER NOTES 42 7
the play, as is still true if you take it to refer to the man who bears tbe bypothesis that pollax is an actor-n:pone r's homo nym de
the weapon (a nd have to invent a soldier on a sledge or hurdle of mands the plural Pollacks ). There is obviously no substance in rhe
disgracc, N&Q, CCXIX, 1'28- 30). An attempt to attach an incident argument that only the Polack himsclfwould bl! 'sledded', and to
with a pole-axe to the combat against rortiniJras seems refuted uy object that one man could not 'smite' the Polish army shows a
the adverb on", which implies a separate occasion.. Clearl y neglect of common idiom (cf. Judges iii. 13, 'he . .. went and
allusion is bt!ing lIIad e to a second exploit which wil) para llel the smote Israeli ).
combat agai nst Fortinbras as an ill ustration of King Hamlet's The difficulty of reconciling the parle of I. 65 with smiling foes
martial prowess. And what, along with the natura.l sense o f has I think been much exaggerated . Adams improuably suggests
sledded, gives the preference overwhelmingly to Poles in sleds lli> (h a t King Hamlet may ha ve struck the Polish king 'with his glove
the objec t of his smiling is thcir power to stir the lmagi nalion, or hand '. Others rcmark that frown'd, implying the vi:w r up. is
\~,:hi c b a pole-axe so signally lacks. II is true th at the Polish explo it more compatible with parley than \vilh fig hting, but the revcrse
is not suuscq ucnlly elaborated as the co mbat agai nst No rway is is surely true of on the ice. And the frown itself, traditio na l of Mars
and that no source fo r one has been found; uut we cannot doubt (cf. r.ii.230n.). is as much embl emat ic as realistic. It no t m erdy
it!'; potentiality for ela bora tion ann it m ay well have ueen in the d escribes the wad ike mi en, but suggests the \va dike action : as th e
dramatist's mind at this stage to make m ore of tbe Pol_ish mat ter 'armou r ' when he 'co mbated' (I t. 63- 4), so th e frown wh en he
than he subsequently did. Was it th is that Ird him to call th e 'smote'. Kittrcdge expla ins, 'The parley b roke u p ion a battle, in
minister Hamle t kills U)' the re ma rkab le name of Polonius? (Was which the Ki ng smo te (routed ) the Polanders'. But I !;uSpeC Lthat
th ere a n idea for a n ave nging Polack !ion alongside the so n of parle itsclfmay im ply a more than verbal enco untcr. For a ltho ug h
Norway? Sec Rice V.Studs., LX, 104- 5.) But the Pol es arc not de I can cite no paralid for slich a use o f parle, Shakes pea re more
pend ent on such spec ulcujon for th eir releva nce. They belong to than once uscs the verb splak, in similar unde.rstatement, to mean
the p lay's backgro und wars in which Norway is balanced by 'cngage in com ba t'. In Coriolanus th e reply to ' H as Our gencra l
Poland and whi eh a re a lready being prepa red for, wi th the sleds me t th e enemy?' is 'They lie in view, uut have no t spoke as yet'
giving a northern JocaJ colour. Shakespeare seeU'ls to have thoug ht (I. iV.4); and Antoll Y, in defiance or Pompey's navy, says ' We' ll
or th ese two countri es as both borde ring Denmark (sec II . ii. 74--8, spca k with thee at sca ' (Ani. 1l.vi.2S)' Was it not Ihis kind of
IV. iV.3- 4 amI LN; also K e ith Brown , ' Hamlet 's Plaee on the Map', speaking that took p lace in (he parle on (he icc?
• .%.Studs., IV, 160-82) . For Poles in sleds he wou ld ha rdly need
wlrticular aut hori ty. O rtcJi us's Epitome of the Theatre of tht. ~Vorld I . i. 9 I .
Didforfeil . .. all] Allthos< his IOllds, if strictly inter pre tc",
tells how in the frozen rens or Li thua ni a, then ' l1ncl(~r the crown or should include Fortinbras's Norwegian dominions; uut it is not
Polon ia', me n 'pass over th e iec wit h sleds drawn by horses' (Eng. likely to tro ubl e us that uy on e or Shakespeare's lillie inco nsis
tran s. 1603, r. 94v) j and Samud Lewkcnor's Discourse of Foreign tencies Norway con ti nues as a n apparently indepc nd ent kin gdom
Cities ( 1600) similarly d escribes how the Tartars a round Vi lna (L ii; II. ii ). All JJl ay deri ve frolll Bellcfores t, who, however, app lies
travel in sleds over snow ' not unl ike the ocean'. cr. Ca\·\, ley, Tire it to the treasure (toules les richesses) in the defeated warrior's sh ips.
Voyagers and Eliln Drama, p. 247 n .) ou th e regula r association or (See Intro. , p. 93. ) The d ifficult y, if it is onc, arises from tran s
sleds wilh the people of this region. Still more 10 the present pur rerring (he rorrei t to la nds; it ca n hardl y be resolved by supposing
pose the pictorial Carta Marina of th e Swede Olaus Magnus ( 1539) (wi th H oni gmann, Stratford-upon-Avotl Studies, 5, p. 134) tha t
shows armed men riding on the Baltic, which others cross in 'lands which he stood sejz'd of' could mean merely ' lands . . .
horse-drawn sledges. Even ir he had no pan ic ulor incident to seized ... in war'; nor (wilh M. Coylc, JV&Q , CCXXIV, 11 8- 19)
draw on, Shakespea re would not be o ffend ing plausibility in that 'all' may refcr onl y to lands 'against (h e which' H amle t
imagining a n encou nter with sJcddcd opponen ts on a frozen la ke gaged an equivalent portion or his. The text, conven ientl y or no t,
or sea. is specific: all th e la nd s h e possessed.
T he reading Polack (si ng.), meaning th e Ki ng of Poland, wou ld
correspond with II . ii . 53, 75 a nd IV. iv. 2:.~ and provide an attract i. 96. lile same cou'llant] Some tditors adopt the Q 2 comari,
1.
ive parallel with Norway (I. 64); b ut it fails to explain pol/ax (i.e. whi ch ~1a l one explained as a 'joint bargain'. Thougli it is h"rd to
434 IIAMLET LONGER NOTES B5
succession in some ambiguity, it is clear thal he became king with C la ud ius. The uiffe renee is perhaps not grea tly mat erial ; for wha l
public conse nt. T he pla y docs not question the lega lity of his Ha mlc t seizes on in the words cousin and .ron is the relationsh ip
title, even though it a lso rega rds the Prince of Denmark ,1$ tlte Ihey signify. His rejoi nder is therclorc bl.'st applied , I thi nk , lO
future king. Sec l. iii. 20-1-, III. i . ' 54. At I. ii. 109 the K ing publicly hid" himself and C la udius) or rather to the: relati on in whieh they
nominates Hamlet as his successor; bu t th is is not ncccssaril y in s{(1nd to one anothe r. A 'cousin' is ' kin ' bU l a '500 ' is ' morc'; and
compat ible with the prin ciple of elec ti on, in whi ch tJ,c Prince's l-Iamltt's rcscn rrnent at being made Cla uclius1s son as wel l as
hereditary status a nd ' the voice of the King' (m .ii'33'2- 3) wo uld nephew glances allh c in cestuous marriage wh ich has crea lecit hi s
be important. Jas. H owell in 1632 refers to the eldest son of the ' marc th a n' natural relationship. Kind i5 oftcn used as a n ea r
Danish ki ng as ' King elect of DCllInark', explaini ng th a l ' though sy nonym ror kin. as in Gorboduc l I.i . 18, ' I n kind a rat her, nol in
that C rown be purely elective, yet for these three last Kings, they ki ncHillcss'. Uut the di ~ tinction there be tween hind and killdlints.r
wrought so wilh the people, that they go t th eir cJdCSl sons c hosen, a pproxima tcs to the one Sha kcspc;ne makes bClwee-n kin a.n d
and declared before their deat h' (Familiar Lt lters, cd. J a cobs, killd. Both word s rertr to the members of one ra mily, but whereas
p. 294)· Fro m the rererCllCe 10 the Queen asjuilllresJ (1. g) Dover kin has rrgard only to th e raC I or relationship, kind has regard a lso
\Vil son infers that Gertrud e had a life-interes t in the crown, and to ils mallifestation ill a community and mutllality of feeling . Cr.
it may be that Shakespeare had in mind how in ea rlier versions kindltJs , ILii. 577, vo id of lla tura l feeling ; Bastard, EpigrallIJ, 15g B,
of the story Hamlc t's father acqu ired Ihe throne uy ma rriage; but iii .29, ' Nevcr so many co usi ns; so few kineJ'. Thc human pa radox
the rights he accords Gert rude as do\\'agcr he is con tent not to de lhat kin arc not a lways kind is ort en cxprcssc:d in Eli;r.abethan
fine. VVh at is clear is that Claudius became king before taking her literature (cf. T illey K 38), and th e dilTcre nt mean in gs of kind arc
'to wire' but consolida ted his posit ion by a pruuen t marriage. a fa\'ourite sourcc or word-pla y. Instances a re given by K ittredge
antI oth('l"s. T he adjective kind, in its Eli zabr.than \lse , included
L Ii. 1 1. ~Vith an auspicious lind a droppil/g 9t] It was proverbi ally the modern se nse (' benevolent' ), but onr.n rc wined th e strong
said of th e fa lse man tha t he looks up wi lh one eye and down wit h primary meaning of ' na tural', a nd especiall y 'showin~ reelings
tbe othcr (c.g. Fcrgusson's Scouish Provtrbs, cd. Bever idge, Scot. natural a mong blood rela tions' (ef. Lear's ' unkind' da\lgh te rs) .
Text Soc., p. 56). This was a variant or the ancient proverb, To Even so, the usual interpre tation of the present passage, whi ch
laugh with one eye and wecp wilh the other (Tilley E 248), whi ch t~,kes kind as a n adjccrive, instead ofa noun in antith esis with kill ,
was traditi onall y applied to Fortune (as in Chaucer, BoDie of Ihe necessari ly weakens its fo rce.
Duchess, II. 633-4) in indication of hcr fickleness. See B. White,
'Claud ius a nd FOrl une', Anglia, LXXVU, 204- 7. But though t.his J. ii . 67. ill lht sunl ( 1) Althoug h to Schmidt slLnsh ine suggests
may give the phrase, from C la udiu s's lips, an ironic und ertone, it 'earch-'ss id\r.Ilc.~'i: (' 1 .un more can:less and id le than I oug ht to
is a m istake to suppose that in itscl rit proclaims him hypocri te. In be'), the- obvious nH~'lning or the me taphor is th:ll Hamlet , \villi
EIYOI'S Govemour (II. ch . 12) a woman yir.lds her maidenhead 'with the mclaru;holi c' s ch ara cteristi c preferen ce for the shade, objects
a ll cye half laughing half mourning' wh ile affirming cons tancy; to the brightn ess into whi ch he is brough t, whe-th er it lie th e glare
and Paulina "had one eye declined for the loss of her husband, or p uLEe noti ce (cr. Cald cco tt, ' I am torn prc:maturcly from my
a nother c.levatcd th at the oracle was rulfilled ' ( Wint. v. ii. 72 - 3). sorrows l and throw n illto the broad glare or the sun ') , th e g<licty
The idea or Fortune bas sugges ted 'a uspicious' for the happy eye or th e Co u rt, or, more pointed ly, the sunshine or the K ing's
and th e 'scale' ofl. '3 ; for th e king as ji"orlu nc's surroga te, c[ esp. ra vo ur. (2 ) R ei n rorcing this, is an unmistakab le glancing at the
IlI. iii. 17- 22 . For dropping, dOWne3!oil, cf. Fergusson and Willi. su n as a royal emb lem (c f. tH.J l.ii.l gorr. ) : Hamlet hin ls tha t he
above. is 100 much i ll th e K ing's presence. c r. the simi la r word -pla y
at II . ii. 184 : 'walk i' th ' sun \ come into the prince's presence.
J.i i.65· TIlor~ than kin, and llSS lliall kind] MO!)1 commentators, not (:3) There i! ;\0 obvious pun on SOil (1. 64), supporLed, as Dov('f
unreasonably, takc these words 10 a pply, like cousin and sun. to \Vilson nOIC~, by the Q 2 spd li ng. Cf. Rj 1. i. 2 , (this ~u n or York'
Hamlet himself. But some, justly stressing the unnaturalness as (Q 1 sonne, F Son ). Ilamle t find!; this relations hip (too mu ch' ror
well as the hostility denoted by ItJS thart kiml, ap pl y them to him and Claudius is maki ng 'too much ' or il (making h im more
43 6 HAM LET LONGER NOTES 437
his 'son' than he really is). ' Hamle t bitterly refuses th e title which ness in the cont ex t and it too has th e support of Shakcspearean
th e King has e mphasized' (K ittredgeL and th e Kin g's furth er usagc: 2H4 m . i. 48, 'that one mig ht . . . sec .. . the continent,
p ersuasions (II. 107 fT. ) are r~.icctetl in advance. An ec ho of the Weary of solid firmness, mell itsdf Into the sea'; Troil. x. iii. 113.
prove rb 'Out or heaven 's blessing into th e warm sun' (cf. Lr II . S. \>Vc iss found it consistent wilh 5hakespean:a n pa tt erns of
ii . 156- 7L first heard by Johnson, is surely so mewhat faint. For associated imagery (SQ, x, 019- 07), and S. Warhart relatcd it to
the usc and interpfClaLion of the proverb see Tilley, h.i.izn Proverb the esse ntial c haracteristic of the melanc holy humou r (EU1,
Lore (no. 287); P. L. Carver, A1LR, xxv, 470- 8(. From its impli XXVIII , 2 1- 30). Bricfly, melancholy is th e cold dry humou r, and
calion of passing from good to worse a host of commentators have 'of this coldness and dryness rise th h anJn css wh e reof the fles h of
ex torted a reference to Hamlet's present degrada tion, and in pa r mela nchol y persons is' (Bright, p. 108) . In Sh,. ( Ind . ii.129)
ti cular to his having been turn ed oul from th e place Heaven gave mclam:holy is a~socia ted with th e congealing of th e blood; and
him and deprived orlh e throne. But Hamlet 's wit is less recondite 'of the congcaling of th e blood' th c flesh, according to Burton , is
lhan th eirs. The curious may co nsult. the 43 meanin gs extracted composed (l.i .O(3)t Melancholy amon.~ the humours thus cor
fro m the phrase in E. Le Comcc, POf.ts' Riddles, ch. I . res ponds to earth a mong the elements, a nd its remedy is fo r th e
excess of ea rth to mtll in to water, < w hich ill t urn may TeJo/ve into
I.ii. I 13 · Wittenberg] This Gennan university, found ed in 1502 , vapour. But see IL (29 - 30 0 . , rf.solve; and while all this may ill u
had become famo us through its associa tion with L1..Ilbcr, Mcla nch mi nate the passage, its su pport for solid would be strongcr if the
th on, and the reformed rcljgion. But to note with Dove r Wilso n word ac tually occurred in Wa. rhaft's illwtrativc quotations. The
that Hamlet's university was Pro tes tant is less important than to signifi cance he a ttaches to Jolid is a lready impl icit in jlesil. And ,
learn from Brandes that it was the favourite university of Danes just to sh ow how one ma y arg ue eit hcr way, the a lche mical trans
studyin g a broad. (Cr. l.ii. 106n.) in the decade 1586-95 it had mutation oflhe bascr eleme nt (flesh) into the purer (dew) has bcen
two stuJents named R osenkrantz and one Gyldenstjern e (Dol held to support rullied (£S. LL'<, 508- 9). Though '/00 solid fl esh'
lerup, p. 128). Its name was well known to th e Elizabe th ans and escapes tautology, sullied enlarges the mcaning u!. J(Jlid does not.
had been familiarized in th e theatrc by Dr Faustus. Sam uel With thc tbought cr. (rrom the poem in TOllo!'s MimI/any be
Lewkcnor (A Discount ~l Forf.ign Cities) desc ribcd it in 1600 as a ginning 'The life is long, th at loat hsom ely do th las t' ) 'Whcl"cf<) re
'lea rned scrnin ary of the arts' in which 'many worthy writers have wLlh Paul let all men wish , and pray To be diSJolu'd of thisJoul
.. . received thei r education'. flahy m ass' (Il. 37-8). The suggc"ian of conta m ination a nd ,elf
disgust begins an impor tan t dramatic mOlif (cf. AISH, pp. 3 13- 15).
1. ii. 129.sullied] The most debated rcading in the play in rece nt T he tcxlUal cvidence for sui/itd, moreoverJ can not be d ismissed .
years. Earlier editors, with their preference for F, naturally For salli~d is less Iikdy to he a corrup tio n of solid than the ot her
auoptcd ,oiid, though Furnivall derend ed the Q,olli<d in th e scnse way abo ut~ and though Q2 may have d erived it from QI, thi s
of ' assailed ' and Furness recorded t.he conjecture suLLied, whi ch sugges ts that solid diu not occu r in Q 2'S manusc ript authority,
also occurred to Tennyson (SQ . Xl , 490) an d which Dowde n while QI is against its hav ing been familia r in pcrfo rmance
Ihoug ht might 'be right'. Dover Wilso n's cstablishment ofQo as (though if C hapma n, Re",n,~e if Bussy d'Ambois, v. iv. 7- 9 is an
the more au thorit a tiv c text h rought sullied into favour (sec MSH, echo, it must presen tly have becomc so). Further) the fact that
pp. 3°7- 1 5; Greg, Principles of Emendation, p. 25; Bowers, SS 9, Q2 sallied here a mI saLLies at n .i.40 occur in the work ordifferent
44 8) . Seve n other Shakespearea n instances of the word inelude com positors argues for a manusc ript origin. It is some times con
two with the a spelling: Ham . 1l.i. 40, sallies (Qo ) ; 1.1.1. v.ii.35 0 , tended that Shakcspeart would Hot usc too 100 with a p articiple;
' pure as the unsallied lily' (Q ,F I ), Cf. abo Dckkcr, CIC. , Patitml but OED shows it often uscd with ve rbs, an d Qr, 'too mu ch
Grissill, r.i. 12, 'sally not th e morning with foul looks'. 50 whereas gri cu'd a nd saUicd ', shows that a participit! was in th e reporter' s
Dover Wilson rook sallied as a misreading of 'sullied', it is reason recollcetion, The possibility of an intended pla y on bOl h words
ably rcgarded, Koke ritz notwithstanding (Studia .Neophilologica J cannot be ruled out j but what happcns per haps is that by a
xxx, 3- 1O), as an alterna tive form (Crow, Essays and Studies, n ,s. natura l menta l process the word (sullied ) whidl gives al once th c
VIII, 8-9; Bowers, Joe. CiL). Solid has obvious (too obvious?) apt- clue to the emotion which the soliloquy wiU ex prcss, brings to
4-3 8 HAMLET LOKGE R N OTE S 4-39
mind its near--homonym (solid ). wh ich helps to promote the Officiis, l. iv. I I. This lends further signifi ca nce to the H ypcrion
imagery of md t, thaw, r t's%l, dew. Those who a cce pt so me F vflri sat yr compa riso n .. bove (I. 140). I t wa.s through his rcason tbat
ants as a uthentic Shakes pearean alte rn a tives (cf~ H onigmann, 711e Inan could pcrcei ve th e rela tion of cause a nd cfk ct ancl thus con
Stability of Shakespeare's T f.xl, pp. 70, 134-6) arc likely to find an nect past wi lh future, '..\ihercas the b east, preti~e1y uecause it
example here. (But see Intro., p . 43 n .) lacks reason, must li ve large ly in tht-: prese nt m oment. H enee th e
axiom th a t its mourning wo uld he brie f. Cr. I V . iv. 33-9; a nd (or
r.ii. '40. Hyperion fo a saO'f] The contrast betwee n the two Gertrude's failure to be guided by reaso n, 111. iv. 38.
brothers is repeat edly stressed by Bcllcforest along with the fac t Discourse of rea.wn wa s a regular ierm , occ urring a lso in. Trail.
that the Queen has alli ed hersclfwith th e worse who has killed the II.ii. I 16, as well as in, e.g., Bright's Treatise oJA1elancho/y (dedica
better. St C Intro., pp. 9 1- 2. This becomes immensely m ore sig ni tion), H olla nd 's Plutarch (A40raL Vi rlue ), Florio' s Monraigne, th e
ficant in Shtlkcspca re: the antithesis he re between the sun-god, tran sla tion of La Primaudaye 's T he Frmch Academy (rp· 269,27 8 ) .
with his maj estic uea ut y, and a c rea lUre half ma n half beast For othe r insta nces, sec Boswc:ll, and OED disco urse sb. :2 b.
epitomi zes in the two b ro thers the co mplex nat.u re of man - like 'NhiJc sometimes appa rentl y Ilscd as a cliche fo r ' reason', it
a god a nd li_kc a beast. - which witI be a theme of Hamlet's later prope rly d eno tes t he ElcuiL y or process of re(lsoning from premises
refle cti ons (ct: II. ii. 303- 1); Iv.iv.33- 9; and I. 150 L~ below). The to conclusions. Discourse a lone is also used in th e sa m e sense
imagery enables th e basic situation of lh ~ pla y to a p pear as one (sc_c IV. iv. 36). The 'di seursive reason ' \"\' bieh was a prupnty
in whi ch th e beast in ma n has des troyed the god a nd now reig ns o f man \·\"a5 distingllisht.-cJ from th e higher ' intui tive reason ' of
in h is kingdo m. Sec lntro ., pp. [29-32. Even in this fir::; t soliloqu y a ngelic beings. In Par. Lost (v . 469 If.) Raphael tells Adam that
the co ntrast between th e two brother-kings (cf. 1. Jj 2) is not less 'Reason is [the Soul \] bein g, Discursive or intuitive : di scourse
important, though less often emphasized , than th e re.vclation of Is oftcst you rs , the latter Inost is onrs' . BuL the difI'e rencc, as
Hamle t's sta te of mind and his attitu de to hi.'\ mo ther. Structurally lvfilton says, is of degree ra th(T than kind.
the soliloqu y effects a link between the presentation of one kin g
in the preceding part of the scene a nd the description o f the other I.ii_187. aU in aU] OfLen ta ke n to mea n; as in mode rn usc, 'all
in th e d ia logue whi e h follows. The godlike attributes whi eh things consicle red ' , 'on the wh ole' . But whcn Shakespeare uses aU
Hamlet sees in his fath er arc elabora ted at IlLiv.S5--62) when th e in. all advcrbi a lly, it implics not qualifi cation but int ensification
contrast is resumed . The idea of m a n as partaking of bo th god and (= 'c.nti.rcl y')' as in 1-1] Li.42; Olh. Iv . i. U8> 262. The sense here is
beast whi eh thus und erlies the pla y is very mu ch th e Re naissance not that of wcighing one thi ng aga inst ;\Ilo ther but o f accumu
conce pt. No single illustra tion can suffice, but e f. Pico della la ting them a ll. In lII. iv.S;,- 62 it is th·e accuTli.ulatjon of perfec
Mirandola , Dt hnminis digllilale, and especiall y [he o pening pages : ti ons lhat assures 'a man' . H a mlet 's f1tt her, then , may be ta ken as
'i\"cithcl' hea ve nly nor ea rthly . . . th ou cans!: grow dmvnward a man complete in every particular, a.nd so as the sum a nd pattern
into th e lower natures whi ch arc brutcs. Thou ca nst again grow of excellence . Cf. NlaLlbc, Celestina (perha ps an echo), wh ere a list.
up\vard from thy soul 's rcason in to th e higher na tures which a re of perfect ions is brought to a climax in 'T a ke him all toget her, and
divin e.' 'If you see a nyone . .. delive red over to the se nses, il is a for all in a ll , you shall no t find such a nother' . This se nse o f com
brute not a man that yo u sec. If yo u co me upon a p hilosopher pleteness or perfect ion is bome out b y o lhc l- Eliza be lha n in
winnowing out all things by ri ght reaso n , h~ is a heavenl y not an sta nces : e.g . Stu bbes, Analonry of Abuses (New Shaks pcrc Soc. , i.
earthly a nimaL' 'We a re made simila r to brutes a nd mindl ess 29) 'IH~ is a ll in all; yea, so perfect .. ,' ; R . C arew, T he Excellency
beasts of burden. But .. . as Asaph th e prophet sa ys, " Ye are all of the EngLish T ongue. (Sm ith , Eli:::n Critical Essa).'s, ii. 293), 'vVili
gods, a nd sons of th e mOs t high '" ( tra ns. C. G. ''''a ilis, 1940, you ha ve a U in a ll for prose and verse? ta ke the miracle of our age
pp. 5- 7)· Sir Philip Sidney'. See, for a n ill u m inati ng di scussion , D. Barrett
in }.'euphilologischt A.fillrilllllgell , LXII , 164--8. cr. Tilley 1\ 133, ' All
1.ii. I :;0 . wants discourse of reaso1l1 The f~lClllty of reason was in all a nd a ll in every pa r t') a prover b wh ich T. \V. Baldwin
traditi onally rt cognize:d as the cru cial di"fferen cc be tween m a n (/.iterary Gen~tics of SlwksjJerc's Poems, pp. 157fT.) shows to derive
and th e beas ts, for th e c lassical slatem ent of whi ch sec C icero, De from. th e nco-Platonic d oclri ne of the so ul.