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TASK 13
Well I’m too Young so I’d say that my biggest accomplishment for the moment is that I managed to
finished my High School with good grades, I was 17 so it gave me a different image of my life, I
wouldn’t be a kid anymore; since that moment I’ve been able to be more responsible and mature,
I’ve been going to classes by my own taking as many responsibilities as I can, with the support of
my family I’ve been able to grown. I managed to get good facts about me, I consider that I’m a
resourceful and upbeat person, someone who always take care of his mates, That’s why I’m
supportive as well, an outgoing person in order to make a better environment, a good mixer, if u
gave me a workshop probably I’ll take it in the best way, a go-getter one. 10 years from now I hope
I’ll have reached all my goals, of course by that moment maybe some many ideas would have
changed a lot, but something like accomplish a degree in my career is imperative so, I’d like to
have bought a house and be living abroad with my girlfriend, make a family together, be earning a
good salary and make my family proud of me, I hope I’ll be working as a recognized architect with
his own business, I’ll get it by some support of my family, a cousin is already living on Spain and
my father is owner of an Real State company, I hope I’ll take approach with that, of course my
career has to be finished and step by step be advancing.

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“grow” Use the participle in cases like present perfect or passive voice

“someone who takes*” third person.

“…I’ll take the right/first approach with that.” It’s not only about taking an approach but the
correct approach, or at least “that” approach.