GIẢI ĐỀ IELTS WRITING NGÀY 29.10.

2022
BY NGOCBACH
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Report Plan:

• Paraphrase paragraph: maps>diagrams; show>illustrate;

layouts>plans; between 2010 and 2015>in the years 2010 and 2015.
• Overview/summary paragraph: (1) in 2015 the musuem was larger (2)
the new wing included shops and a cafe
• Paragraph 3: report on the lobby and the dinosaur hall – almost no
changes.
• Paragraph 4: report on changes to the other halls, especially the new
wing in 2015

Report:

The diagrams illustrate the plans of a nature museum in the years 2010 and 2015.

Overall, the museum was larger in 2015, incorporating a new wing with shops and
a cafe.

The lobby and entrance remain unchanged in the two diagrams, except that there is
one extra door in the lobby in 2015. This door gives access to the new exhibition
room on the right. The ticket table is in the same place in both plans. To the left
of the lobby, the exhibition space for dinosaurs is also unchanged in the plans.

In 2010, there was a hall for mammal exhibits above the dinosaur hall. In 2015,
this hall was larger and was used for Ice Age exhibits, with a small section to
display insects. To the right of this hall, the Ocean Hall was enlarged in the 2015
layout. Finally, the new wing in 2015 to the right of the lobby housed the mammal
exhibits, including a section on humans, as well as shops and a cafe.

169 words

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Task 2
As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you
agree or disagree?

Note for students: in each main paragraph, the topic sentence is followed by the
sentences which develop from plan to paragraph. The number in the plan is shown
in the paragraph. This is how your plan can develop into your paragraph.

Planning the ideas

Based on our identification of the key words, our plan will be something like this:
• Introduce ideas: People have different opinions. I think that businesses have to
make money but I agree that they should also have social responsibilities.
• Paragraph 2: [importance of making money] [1] If companies make money, they
pay more taxes. Governments can use these taxes to spend on hospitals,
schools...... [2] Businesses which make money can expand – provide more jobs.
• Paragraph 3: [importance of social responsibilities] [1] Businesses must not harm
the environment – examples: global warming from factory emissions, responsible
disposal of waste. [2] Businesses which make profits should put money back into
the community through charity and financing scholarships – examples: Unilever
and Vinamilk.
• Conclusion: repeat using some different words.

ANSWER:
The idea that, besides making money, enterprises also need to have public
responsibilities remains a source of controversy. In my opinion, while generating
profit is the top priority for each company, I agree thatthey should also conduct
their business in a socially responsible manner.
On the one hand, the efforts of companies to maximise their profits may have some
benefits for society as a whole. [1] Firstly, the higher the profits earned by
enterprises, the more taxes they pay to the government. As a result, authorities may
have more revenue to spend in key fields, including education and health care,
which leads to an improvement in the quality of life of the whole community. [2]
Secondly, by earning huge profits companies have the opportunity to grow their

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business. For example, firms could use their capital to expand their production,
creating new job opportunities within the community.

On the other hand, there are strong reasons why businesses should also accept that
they have social responsibilities. [1] The first reason is that their activities have an
effect on the environment. Without controls, production processes may result in
serious environmental degradation, such as global warming stemming from factory
emissions or the irresponsible disposal of industrial waste. For example, if factories
installed waste treatment systems instead of discharging chemical wastes into
rivers, water pollution could be controlled. [2] Another reason is that enterprises
should help those who are less fortunate, since they have the money to do so. For
example, big corporations such as Unilever and Vinamilk have enhanced their
public image through philanthropic actions such as providing scholarships and
giving charitable donations.
In conclusion, although I recognise that making profits is the fundamental principle
of business, I would argue that all businesses should profoundly reflect upon their
social responsibilities.

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