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English Essay 3 2
English Essay 3 2
Johana Colina
English 1301
9 November 2022
Rhetorical Analysis on “Understanding and supporting women with eating disorders”
Eating Disorders is a struggle known to affect many people around the world of any age
and shape. Some eating disorders people deal with are Anorexia Nervosa, Bulimia Nervosa,
Binge Eating Disorder, and other specified Feeding or Eating disorders. Although this is
common in teenagers and adults, not many talk about what pregnant women go through while
growing into their motherhood selves and the challenges they face of getting an eating disorder
after giving birth. Approximately 5% of women will experience an eating disorder during
pregnancy (Martínez-Olcina et al., 2020), and around 15% of women at some point prior to
pregnancy (Bye et al., 2020) In Abigail Easter and Amanda Bye's article “Understanding and
supporting women with eating disorders: Pregnancy, birth, and motherhood” they support the
argument of providing evidence of how each eating disorder affects women going into
motherhood and what other challenges they face after giving birth due to getting an eating
disorder. The usage of ethos, pathos and logos is important in this article because it gives us a
First of all, an example of ethos would be the author themselves–Abigail Easter and
Amanda Bye and the resources they chose. Abigail Easter is a postdoctoral researcher for the
Section of Women’s Mental Health, Health Service and Population Research Department.
Amanda Bye is a research associate in the Department of Psychological Medicine and Division
of Academic Psychiatry. They both have research from the Institute of Psychiatry, Psychology
and Neuroscience and both attended King’s College at London, UK. The authors are considered
to be ethos because without them attending school and studying every specific topic, they
wouldn’t know what to research and write about. The resources they chose should be reliable
information because they already know what to look for and what to study to be able to
accomplish this article. Amanda and Abigail greatly supported their argument by providing
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multiple examples of studies of multiple women who have personally gone through their
argument, facts about eating disorders in pregnant women, which leads to them being a
trust-worthy resource.
Second of all, there’s an example of pathos in the article– “Box 1: Case Study” (pg27).
This Case Study gives us an insight of a pregnant lady's experience with an eating disorder: “I
hoped that there would be a standard question, ‘Have you ever had problems with eating?’ and I
prepared myself to make a confession. She asked me lots of questions, but the question I
longed for never came, so my problem remained a secret” and “, then ecstatic with joy to be
pregnant again after ten months. Life seemed perfect. But that’s when the problems really
began: just when I was least expecting it, all those fears about food and body image crept up on
me again” (Box 1: Case Study). A woman giving it her all to have a safe pregnancy, yet is still
going through unseen mental and physical challenges for months. It’s a perfect use of pathos to
make the ready feel sympathetic towards her. Another example of pathos is in the beginning of
the introduction, which can connect to audiences emotions: “ The transition to parenthood can
be a challenging time for women with eating disorders, who can experience a greater risk of
adverse obstetric outcomes, higher levels of depression and anxiety, and difficulties with infant
feeding”. This appeal is another great example of pathos. They’re providing information on other
symptoms pregnant women may experience due to having an eating disorder which is the main
Third of all, there are three examples of logos in the text– implications for preconception
and perinatal period, nutrition and gestational weight gain and psychological health during
pregnancy. Implications for preconception and perinatal period states “ studies suggest that
eating disorders can have a substantial impact on several domains related to pregnancy and
motherhood, and demonstrate the need for tailored advice and support across the perinatal
period” (pg 26). Nutrition and gestational weight gain states “ studies have shown greater and
faster gestational weight gain among women with eating disorders (Watson et al., 2014).” (pg
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26) and psychological health during pregnancy states “ The MoBa study (Watson et al., 2014)
found remission rates in pregnancy of between 29-78% across the eating disorder categories”
(pg 25). These three examples of logos use facts and statistics which creates a direct message
to prove to the audience that the research they did can be trustworthy, since it was scientifically
proven with multiple women's reports and studies. Furthermore, they do support their
argument effectively, considering the examples unveil statistical data that applies to logos.
These examples support the argument of the article because they’re giving percentages of how
many women who are pregnant are affected by having an eating disorder. These three
examples are great examples of providing researched data to make logical connections with the
audience.
In summary, Abigail Easter and Amanda Bye’s article is a perfect example of following
along with its argument by providing multiple examples of ethos, pathos and logos. The authors
are perfect examples of ethos, since they wrote and researched everything to be able to write
this article. The personal article of the pregnant woman's experience of dealing with an eating
disorder to be able to reach the audience's emotions and the introduction of the article by
providing other symptoms that the women may deal with are perfect examples of logos in this
article and lastly, the multiple scientific studies done by certified researches to support the
authors argument, which are all examples of logos. The first paragraph in the article is an
appeal to pathos, logos and ethos. It gives the readers a percentage of how many pregnant
women are affected by an eating disorder which is logos, it shows pathos by showing other
symptoms an eating disorder comes with make the audience feel sympathy for the struggling
pregnant woman and ethos by providing citations used by the authors themselves to provide
Work Cited
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