BOATS script feedback

Name of script being evaluated: ENDURANCE

Name of author: ZACH

Please answer the following questions:

1. What did I like the attention to historical detail and the dialogue, plus you
you like have added some humour to the story , too.
best about
the script?

2. Was there a Yes, there was – you have told what you can through action and
good used dialogue to flavour the scenes.
balance of
action and
dialogue?

3. Was the Yes, very much so, plus it was made quite comical at times.
dialogue (if
any)
convincing?

4. Was the Yes.

story easy
to
understand
?

5. Did the script Yes, as you have based it closely on the true story, it seems fitting
have a to have on-screen text explaining the fates of all involved.
satisfying
pay-off?

6. What could Something at the start to set the time and place, whether this is
be improved through a title card, or by describing the scene for people that are
on a second unfamiliar with the story.
draft?