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Ra Inquiry Rough Draft
Ra Inquiry Rough Draft
Ricardo Aranday
Professor Ortiz
ENGL-1301-66
Inquiry
Have you ever been distracted? Of course you have, everyone has been distracted at one
point. We are now distracted more than ever in this new era of distractions that surround all of us.
In society, it is almost taboo to mention how addicted we are to the distractions around us. So, have
you ever sat down and wondered, “How do distractions actually affect me?” That is why my
question is, “How do distractions and disruptions affect the writing and reading process?” My
that distractions are something that can affect me easily. I hate to oversimplify, but I would rather
not get side-tracked. In this paper, I will be using 3 academic sources to show what research on
groups of people has shown and 2 popular sources to show what individual people think. In this
paper I will be discussing how I believe that distractions are mostly negative to the reading and
writing process but some that reason may come from the source.
Before going in, I want to explain that distractions and disruptions is absolutely everything that
gets in your way from what your task is. This can include pets, hunger, your phone, noisy
environments, and mind wandering. To begin, disruptions cause us to lose our focus and make
mistakes, some of which we might not see until it’s too late. And because we are distracted, we
read and write less since we have less time to read and write. In research from SÖRQVIST et al.,
they conducted an experiment with 48 university students by having them write three stories for
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minutes each and wrote based on three images displayed on a computer screen while having three
sets of sound conditions being silence, normal speech, and rotated speech (2012). They took things
like aspects of writing, corrections and errors, and pauses into consideration, and their results
showed that a complex task like writing is indeed sensitive to noise, with normal speech showing
the worst results out of the three, but only by 80% (2012). This experiment answers the writing
part of my question by clearly showing that disruptions will have a negative impact on the writing
process but maybe not as much as I expected. So now let’s look at how it affects the reading
process. In an experimental study, eighty-nine college students were used to study how instant
messaging affects the reading process and they were randomly assigned one of three conditions
being, IM before reading, IM during reading with an IM on average every twenty seconds, or no
IMs to read a near four-thousand-word passage (Bowman, et al 2010). The results were that those
who did IM during reading performed the worst out of the group in terms of time to read and test
results by 25-59%, however, those who did IM before the reading finished the passage the quickest
and was given the explanation that they experienced a “warm up” (2010). This is the most
important piece of evidence to me because of its bigger gap from writing. Reading is a big part of
learning, and this study shows just how distractions will greatly affect your ability to grasp a
concept as shown by the results. I bring up how reading is a big part of learning because my next
source is about how we let ourselves become distracted because it a reflection of how feel
disengaged. A research study surveyed 143 people and did 10 interviews to describe how they use
their smartphones in writing classrooms (Green, 2019). In the survey he conducted, he found that
79-92% of students use their smartphones to text and use social media at frequency that isn’t zero
(2019). Many of the students he interviewed said that failure from a professor to make a make
course content relatable, understandable, or engaging, led to them turning to their phones as a
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source of distraction, and they advocate for lecturers to use change up teaching methods and
models (2019). This connects to the writing and reading process because the way a lecturer teaches
will be reflected in our reading and writing by showing disinterest in the topic. My theory was that
distractions and disturbances would be negative to the writing and reading process but some of its
issues may lie in the source. My sources currently show how distractions and disturbances will
negatively affect the writing and reading processes, but not all of it may your fault. The first source
showed how noises can negatively affect your writing but not drastically with only an 8%
difference. The second source shows how being distracted will great affect the reading process
with lower scores and reading times. And the third source shows how the source work can be the
reasoning for being distracted. My theory solved most of its main questions, but it’s not done.
A paper on this is really important because of how the modern era we live in built on being
distracted. Of course, being distracted doesn’t have to be a bad thing, it is just that nobody ever
talks about addicted we are to it, but this is something I believe will change within the next 10
years. I believe this research paper can help people find what distracts them in general and shows
them how big of an impact that distractions leave on them when it comes to the reading and
writing process.
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Currently, I only used my academic sources since I’m not too sure about popular sources yet
Bibliography:
Bowman, Laura L., et al. “Can Students Really Multitask? An Experimental Study of Instant
Messaging While Reading.” Computers and Education, vol. 54, no. 4, 2010, pp. 927–31,
https://doi.org/10.1016/j.compedu.2009.09.024.
Psychology, Received 23 May 2011, accepted 22 November 2011, vol. 53, no. 2, 2012, pp.
97–102, https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1467-9450.2011.00936.x.
[TEDx Talks]. (2019, June 24). Burnout: How Addiction to Distraction is Eroding our Capacity |
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1eOcpZXrq-E
[The Merry Writer Podcast]. (2022, March 23). How Do You Deal With Writing Distractions? |
Ep. 104 | The Merry Writer Podcast. YouTube. Retrieved October 2, 2022, from
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Btq7glYRvFY