The purpose of my Personal Research is to show light on relationships with your family,

because I feel that a lot of people don’t have the best relationships with some of their family and

it’s something that needs to be talked about, because it can affect someone mentally. I chose to

write about this, because having a good relationship with some of my family is something that I

struggle with and it is something I would like to improve. I gave not only a general perspective,

but my perspective as well because it helps when you know someone's personal experience

and you can learn from that rather than listening to a general perspective when all they do is

give advice for a situation they might have not been in.

It was hard for me to use the sources more than once because I wasn’t sure what other

information to add into my essay over the overall perspective, so that is one thing I struggled

with in this essay. Peer reviews always help me better my essay and that was what helped me

come up with my title. I titled it “Inner Thoughts” because I feel that family relationships aren't

something that is talked about, because no one wants to have problems with their family, it's

just something that is on our mind if we do have relationship problems. For me it is an inner

thought.