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Ahmed Amr P2

Ahmed Amr P2
by amani zaher

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1,665 297 24 1 min 11 sec 2 min 17 sec
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Score Writing Issues

47 45 11 34
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Writing Issues
43 Correctness
22 Punctuation in compound/complex
sentences
4 Confused words
1 Conjunction use
1 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
4 Faulty tense sequence
2 Misuse of semicolons, quotation marks, etc.
2 Misplaced words or phrases
2 Mixed dialects of english
1 Incorrect verb forms
1 Commonly confused words
1 Closing punctuation
1 Wrong or missing prepositions
1 Improper formatting

2 Clarity
1 Word choice
1 Passive voice misuse

Unique Words 48%

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Rare Words 27%

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Word Length 4.2

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Sentence Length 12.4

Measures average sentence length words per sentence

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Ahmed Amr P2
Ahmed Amr
16/11/2022
P2

The Forest

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"Are you sure this is the right spot?", said the woman "I don't think we should
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be here." She reluctantly walked down the path, "Its fine mom", said the boy,
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soothingly. They both stroll down the forest. The mom is terrified while the boy
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is calm. They encounter a fiendish creature, "What the hell is that??", screams
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the mom, the son stares in shock.
"I… don't… know…, maybe it's an animal...?" sarcastically said the son. The
9 10
mom, traumatized "How could you joke in a time like this Mathew?", "It is not
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that bad mom , its just a- wait what IS that?" The creature quickly disappears
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before the mom and son could notice what it was.
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As they walk down the path, the mom keeps hearing unsettling whispers…
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Run…
LEAVE…
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She shrugs them off as her son told her to ignore them but still can't get them
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out of her mind, "Mat, why do I keep hearing something disturbingly signaling
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us to leave…?" "I told you ignore the voices mom , its part of the forest's
28 29 30
defense" "What about that creature Mathew, where did it go?" He doesn't
answer.
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"Someone is watching us.", she says. "That's just your gut speaking, ignore it"

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GO AWAY…

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The whispers quickly turn into loud shrieks, the forest wasn't asking them to
35 36
leave anymore, it was ordering them to. The mom was forced to ignore it
37 38
nevertheless, as Mathew told her to not give in to the voices.
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Suddenly a bright, radiant, blue light dashed in-front of them. "STOP!", yelled
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Mathew, he knew this was a sign for something as he immediately turned
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around 3 times.
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"The creature Mathew, it's back, what the hell are you doing-" Mathew
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suddenly disappears and so do the mom and the creature.

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1. ", Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

2. . "I Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

3. Its → It's Confused words Correctness

4. boy, Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

5. , while Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

6. a fiendish → Word choice Clarity

a demonic, a sinister, an inhuman

7. ", Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

8. and the Conjunction use Correctness

9. traumatized, Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

10. , Mathew Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

11. a that Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.) Correctness

12. , mom Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

13. mom, Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

14. its → it's Confused words Correctness

15. a- wait → a wait Confused words Correctness

16. , what Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

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17. could → can Faulty tense sequence Correctness

18. was → is Faulty tense sequence Correctness

19. … Misuse of semicolons, quotation Correctness

marks, etc.

20. … Misuse of semicolons, quotation Correctness

marks, etc.

21. told → tells Faulty tense sequence Correctness

22. disturbingly Misplaced words or phrases Correctness

23. signaling → signalling Mixed dialects of English Correctness

24. to ignore Incorrect verb forms Correctness

25. , mom Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

26. mom, Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

27. its → it's, it is Commonly confused words Correctness

28. defense → defence Mixed dialects of English Correctness

29. , Mathew Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

30. , where → ? Where Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

31. , ignore → ; ignore, . Ignore Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

32. it. Closing punctuation Correctness

33. turn → turned Faulty tense sequence Correctness

34. , the → ; the, . The Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

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35. , it → ; it, . It Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

36. was forced Passive voice misuse Clarity

37. , nevertheless Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

38. to not → not to Misplaced words or phrases Correctness

39. in-front → in front Confused words Correctness

40. ", Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

41. , he → ; he, . He Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

42. for → of Wrong or missing prepositions Correctness

43. 3 → three Improper formatting Correctness

44. , what → ; what, . What Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

45. , and Punctuation in compound/complex Correctness

sentences

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