SEMESTER 1, 2022/2023

LPE2501 ACADEMIC WRITING

WRITING PORTFOLIO – TASK 1 (10%)

SUBMISSION CHECKLIST

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BRAINSTORM FORM 
TASK 1 OUTLINE FORM (DRAFT) 
SELF-EDITING FORM 
OUTLINE FORM (FINAL) 

Name Matric No.

RANI ANAK MAT 212111

Group No. : 93

Teacher’s Name : MISS SARAH SYAZANA BINTI BAHARUDDIN

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WRITING PORTFOLIO TASK 1

OUTLINE FORM (DRAFT)
NAME: RANI ANAK MAT GROUP: 93

MATRIC NO.: 212111

1. Based on your chosen topic, construct an outline of two body paragraphs. Your thesis statement, topic sentences, supporting
sentences and concluding sentences must be written in COMPLETE SENTENCES. The supporting details may be written in POINT
FORM.
2. In your supporting details, provide the reference sources in APA style. You should have at least two references for
each paragraph.

TOPIC: The benefit of enzymes used in industry

Thesis The usage of enzymes in the industry is beneficial to help to reduce energy and industrial waste and enhance the quality of life.
Statement:

Topic Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2

Sentences: Firstly, the advantage of enzymes used in industry is it helps Next, the usage of enzymes in the industry is beneficial to
to reduce energy and industrial waste. enhance the quality of life.

Supporting
SS1: The usage of enzyme in manufacturing help to cut the
Sentences &
use of energy, water, and raw materials.
Supporting
Details 1: SD1: For example, enzymatic processes in the pulp and
paper industry help to reduce energy consumption and
improve product quality. The emerging applications of
enzymes like pulp bleaching, refining of pulp to reduce the
SS1: Quality food supply issues for consumers can be
addressed by the application of enzymes in the food industry.
SD1: These biomolecules are efficiently involved in improving
food production and components, such as flavour, aroma,
colour, texture, appearance, and nutritive value (Neidleman,
1984). The profound understanding of the role of enzymes in

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refining energy and improve the papermaking process and the food manufacturing and ingredients industry has improved
product, drainage aid to reduce energy and increase paper the basic processes to provide better markets with safer and
production capacity, enzymatic deinking, enzymatic pre- higher quality products.
treatment of other raw materials for mechanical and
chemical pulping to reduce energy and improve pulp yield
and quality, enzymatic removal of extractives to reduce pitch
problems, enzymes in removing shives and vessels, in
stickies control (Bajpai, Pramod. 2013).

References- Kumar, A., Ram, C., & Tazeb, A. (2021, February 1). Singh, R., Kumar, M., Mittal, A., & Mehta, P. K. (2016).
APA style: Enzyme-assisted pulp refining: an energy saving approach. Microbial enzymes: industrial progress in 21st century. 3
(for De Gruyter. Biotech, 6(2), 174. https://doi.org/10.1007/s13205-016-0485-
supporting https://www.degruyter.com/document/doi/10.1515/psr- 8
detail 1) 2019-0046/html?lang=en

Supporting
SS2: Enzymes are also biodegradable. SS2: The application of enzymes in the industry also helps in
Sentences
solving technical problems in daily life.
& SD2: Besides being non-hazardous for industrial waste,
Supporting enzymes are also biodegradable, which is such a blessing SD2: For example, Enzymes have effectively assisted the
Details 2: for industries that are often scrutinized for their waste development and improvement of modern household and
management (Bingly. F, 2019). industrial detergents. The major classes of detergent enzymes
are proteases, lipases, amylases, and cellulases. Each
provides specific benefits for application in laundry and
automatic dishwashing. Today proteases are joined by lipases
and amylases in improving detergent efficacy, especially for
household laundering at lower temperatures and, in industrial
cleaning operations, at lower pH levels. Cellulases contribute
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to overall fabric care by rejuvenating or maintaining the new

appearance of washed garments (Olsen, H.J., Falholt. P.,
2019)

References-
Bingly, F. (2019, November 11). Seven Advantages of Niehaus, F., Gabor, E., Wieland, S., Siegert, P., Maurer, K. H.,
APA style:
Enzymes from Industrial Enzyme Suppliers. & Eck, J. (2011). Enzymes for the laundry industries: tapping
(for
PharmiWeb.com. the vast metagenomic pool of alkaline proteases. Microbial
supporting
https://www.pharmiweb.com/article/seven-advantages-of- biotechnology, 4(6), 767–776. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1751-
detail 2)
enzymes-from-industrial-enzyme-suppliers 7915.2011.00279.x

Concluding Therefore, using enzymes in industry can save on energy Thus, the industry benefits from the use of enzymes by
Sentences: and industrial waste. enhancing people's quality of life.

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SELF-EDITING FORM
WRITING PORTFOLIO TASK 1

Review your OUTLINE FORM (DRAFT). Tick the relevant boxes.

THESIS STATEMENT YES NO

 Focuses on a specific aspect of the topic. 

 Indicates the main points that will be developed in the body 

paragraphs.

TOPIC SENTENCE PARAGRAPH PARAGRAPH

1 2
YES NO YES NO
 
 Contains a clear topic and controlling idea with
reference to the thesis statement.

 Contains an appropriate transition signal such as  

first, second.

SUPPORTING SENTENCES PARAGRAPH PARAGRAPH

1 2
YES NO YES NO
 
 Are relevant and support the main idea in the topic
sentence.

SUPPORTING DETAILS PARAGRAPH PARAGRAPH

1 2
YES NO YES NO
 
 Contain information/ summary of main ideas
relevant to the topic sentence/ supporting
sentences.

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CONCLUDING SENTENCE PARAGRAPH PARAGRAPH

1 2
YES NO YES NO
 Begins with a suitable concluding signal such as  
therefore, thus, hence.

 Restates the topic sentence or summarises the  

main ideas in the paragraph.

REFERENCES PARAGRAPH PARAGRAPH

1 2
YES NO YES NO
 
 Are provided for each supporting detail. The
reference sources are formatted according to
APA style.

If you ticked ‘NO’ in any of the boxes above, please review your outline and make
necessary amendments in the OUTLINE FORM (FINAL).

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WRITING PORTFOLIO TASK 1

OUTLINE FORM (FINAL)
NAME: RANI ANAK MAT GROUP: 93

MATRIC NO.: 212111

After reviewing the OUTLINE FORM (DRAFT), revise your outline. The outline must be typed using font Arial 11 with 1.15 spacing.

TOPIC: The benefit of enzymes used in industry

Thesis The usage of enzymes in the industry is beneficial to help to reduce energy and industrial waste and enhance the quality of life.
Statement:

Topic Paragraph 1 Paragraph 2

Sentences: Firstly, the advantage of enzymes used in industry is it helps Next, the usage of enzymes in the industry is beneficial to
to reduce energy and industrial waste. enhance the quality of life.

Supporting
SS1: The usage of enzyme in manufacturing help to cut the
Sentences &
use of energy, water, and raw materials.
Supporting
Details 1: SD1: For example, enzymatic processes in the pulp and
paper industry help to reduce energy consumption and
improve product quality. The emerging applications of
enzymes like pulp bleaching, refining of pulp to reduce the
refining energy and improve the papermaking process and
SS1: Quality food supply issues for consumers can be
addressed by the application of enzymes in the food industry.
SD1: These biomolecules are efficiently involved in improving
food production and components, such as flavour, aroma,
colour, texture, appearance, and nutritive value (Neidleman,
1984). The profound understanding of the role of enzymes in
the food manufacturing and ingredients industry has improved

1
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product, drainage aid to reduce energy and increase paper the basic processes to provide better markets with safer and
production capacity, enzymatic deinking, enzymatic pre- higher quality products.
treatment of other raw materials for mechanical and
chemical pulping to reduce energy and improve pulp yield
and quality, enzymatic removal of extractives to reduce pitch
problems, enzymes in removing shives and vessels, in
stickies control (Bajpai, Pramod. 2013).

References- Kumar, A., Ram, C., & Tazeb, A. (2021, February 1). Singh, R., Kumar, M., Mittal, A., & Mehta, P. K. (2016).
APA style: Enzyme-assisted pulp refining: an energy saving approach. Microbial enzymes: industrial progress in 21st century. 3
(for De Gruyter. Biotech, 6(2), 174. https://doi.org/10.1007/s13205-016-0485-
supporting https://www.degruyter.com/document/doi/10.1515/psr- 8
detail 1) 2019-0046/html?lang=en

Supporting
SS2: Enzymes are also biodegradable. SS2: The application of enzymes in the industry also helps in
Sentences
solving technical problems in daily life.
& SD2: Besides being non-hazardous for industrial waste,
Supporting enzymes are also biodegradable, which is such a blessing SD2: For example, Enzymes have effectively assisted the
Details 2: for industries that are often scrutinized for their waste development and improvement of modern household and
management (Bingly. F, 2019). industrial detergents. The major classes of detergent enzymes
are proteases, lipases, amylases, and cellulases. Each
provides specific benefits for application in laundry and
automatic dishwashing. Today proteases are joined by lipases
and amylases in improving detergent efficacy, especially for
household laundering at lower temperatures and, in industrial
cleaning operations, at lower pH levels. Cellulases contribute
to overall fabric care by rejuvenating or maintaining the new
2
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appearance of washed garments (Olsen, H.J., Falholt. P.,

2019)

References-
Bingly, F. (2019, November 11). Seven Advantages of Niehaus, F., Gabor, E., Wieland, S., Siegert, P., Maurer, K. H.,
APA style:
Enzymes from Industrial Enzyme Suppliers. & Eck, J. (2011). Enzymes for the laundry industries: tapping
(for
PharmiWeb.com. the vast metagenomic pool of alkaline proteases. Microbial
supporting
https://www.pharmiweb.com/article/seven-advantages-of- biotechnology, 4(6), 767–776. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1751-
detail 2)
enzymes-from-industrial-enzyme-suppliers 7915.2011.00279.x

Concluding Therefore, using enzymes in industry can save on energy Thus, the industry benefits from the use of enzymes by
Sentences: and industrial waste. enhancing people's quality of life.

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Instructor’s Comments:

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