Content D C B A

The plot is a simple narrative that may Recording of relevant but sometimes The plot incorporates some identification of The plot is entirely convincing with
consist of events that are only partially unrealistic events outweighs other features such elements of
credible or which are presented with desirable elements of narrative fiction. as character and setting. the fiction such as description,
partial clarity. reader may be aware of the creation of characterization and climax, and with
suspense and a sense of climax. sophisticated vocabulary and phrasing.

Structure D C B A
Sometimes sequences ideas in a logical order Ideas are logically sequenced with some Coherently structured with some fluent linking of Uses a variety of structural features to
and may indicate paragraphs randomly; may conscious control of paragraphing usually paragraphs. enhance the writing as appropriate e.g.
occasionally start a new paragraph marking a shift in focus; paragraphs may be Writing is orderly, and beginnings flashbacks, one-sentence paragraphs,
appropriately. tabloid or over-extended at times. and endings are satisfactorily managed. dialogue.

Style D C B A
Words may sometimes communicate Plain but mostly correct choice of words. Uses a wide range of sentence structures Clear and controlled manipulation of
meaning satisfactorily. Correct use of simple sentence structures; some effectively. sentence structures for effect.
Frequent weakness in sentence structures. errors of sentence Obvious attempt to use range of vocabulary to Consistently wide range of appropriate
separation. interest the reader. vocabulary.
Partial or inferred sense of audience. Subtle and effective use of audience.

Accuracy D C B A
Errors of spelling, punctuation and grammar Frequent errors of spelling, punctuation and Minor but frequent errors of spelling, punctuation Spelling, punctuation and grammar
impair communication. grammar. and grammar. Commas are used accurately and almost always accurate and a range of
effectively and there is increasingly competent use punctuation used effectively.
of the colon and semi-colon.

NARRATIVE WRITING CHECKLIST