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Ametros-Report ELM2
Ametros-Report ELM2
Manchanda, Anika
MASTERY
Reading Comprehension
It was a good idea to ask Isaac about algorithm bias. This explains why there
is an issue with Regency III at Eidos, even though Isaac maintains that there is
nothing wrong with the algorithm itself.
MASTERY
Gathering Information
Your request for information was incredibly thorough, including questions
regarding the situation around Eidos and Regency III, ascertaining if the
program is accurate, and inquiring into the training data used to build it.
Great work!
MASTERY
Gathering Information
Your request for information was very thorough, including questions
regarding the situation around Eidos and Regency III, ascertaining if the
program is accurate, and inquiring into the training data used to build it.
Great work!
Mechanics Practice
Redundancy
Civic Responsibility
Well done. The key issue that is repeated is "civic responsibility", which was
clearly corrected in your rewrite.
Mechanics Practice
Variation
Short sentences have a place in writing as do long, compound ones. The key is
to vary the length and makeup of your sentences to make your message
more readable.
Knowledge Check-in
Parts of Speech
Instructor Notes:
ANALYSIS
78 Weightage 50.0%
Score
Provides a good analysis but further explanation and clarification may be
needed. Includes examples but in some instances, the selection and/or
explanation of examples may need improvement. There is some analytical
critique.