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Copia de ENGL120 Writing 1-2 - Supporting & Concluding Sentences
Copia de ENGL120 Writing 1-2 - Supporting & Concluding Sentences
a. People go on diets for many different reasons. Some people will change
the way they eat for their health. For example, doctors sometimes make
people go on special diets because certain foods make them sick. People
who are overweight will go on diets because they don’t want health
problems in the future, like heart disease. Heart disease kills thousands of
people every year. Other people go on diets in order to look good. Some
people are unhappy with their size and shape, so they stop eating fatty
food in order to look and feel more attractive. These people often diet
before a special event, like a wedding, or to get ready for summertime
beach season. Women usually care more about diets than men do. Also,
many people go on a diet because the diet is popular. If people see in a
magazine or on TV that their favorite movie star is on a certain diet, many
of them will follow the diet because they want to be like famous people.
b. People say that health is the most important thing in life. However, it can
be difficult for poor people to have healthy eating habits. First of all, poor
people often need to work long days, and sometimes two jobs, just to get
enough money for their families. Because of this, they often don’t have
time to cook and end up eating frozen or processed foods, which are not
good for you. Also, poor areas in large cities might not have supermarkets
with lots of fresh fruit and vegetables. People in these poor
neighbourhoods have to buy food from convenience stores like 7-11, which
sell mainly junk food with lots of fat, sugar and salt. People who live in
wealthier areas can buy lots of fresh, organic food. Lastly, fast food and
processed foods are usually cheaper than healthy, organic food, so many
poor families eat at places like McDonald’s because they can feed five
people for very little money. Millions of people eat at McDonald’s every
year.
2. For each topic sentence, write three supporting sentences: