CEL2103 WRITING ACADEMIC TEXTS

WRITING PORTFOLIO TASK 1 - 5%

NAME : MUHAMMAD FIKRI BIN MOHD NAJIB MATRIC NO : 203354 GROUP : 44

● Decide on a theme, topic and subjects for a comparison and contrast essay.
● Complete the table below by writing the points of comparison that will discuss the similarity and difference of your subjects.
● Describe how these points of comparison are similar or different.

Theme: Technology
Topic: Comparing and contrasting between Iphone mobile device and Redmi mobile device
Subjects: Iphone and Redmi

Point of Comparison Subject A: Subject B:

Iphone Redmi
Supporting points: Supporting points:
Body a. We can communicate with a. We also can communicate with
Paragraph 1- Same basic function as smartphone everyone using Facetime. everyone using Mi Community
Similarity
b. This device allowed us to use b. Redmi also allowed us to use
internet using Safari. internet using Google Chrome
aplication.

Supporting points: Supporting points:

 Body a. Mostly people said that quality a. Meanwhile, quality camera of
Paragraph 2 - Smartphone Specification of Iphone camera is quite better Redmi also great and not really far
Difference than any other smartphone. with Iphone camera but people still
choose Iphone camera because of
their originality in picture.

b. Battery capacity for Iphone is b. Meanwhile, the battery capacity

quite low around 3000 mAh of Redmi is incredible higher to
compare with Iphone around 5000
mAh.

Teacher’s feedback:
Topic – 1 mark

Body paragraph 1 – 2 marks (Award 0 if the supporting points do not reflect similarity)

Body paragraph 2 – 2 marks (Award 0 if the supporting points do not reflect similarity)

Score (n/5)

Task 1 (PO3)