UPM-CALC/CEL2103 WRITING ACADEMIC TEXTS/SEM 1/2022-2023

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SCL WORKSHEET WEEK 8

Reporting Verb & Paraphrasing

Complete the activities and submit by the due date.

ACTIVITY 1

Underline the answers with appropriate reporting verbs.

1. Hilton (2016) blames / believes that euthanasia should be legalised as “everyone has an

explicit right to die”.

2. As a long-time supporter of euthanasia, Amis (2018) agrees / explores that “booths should

be set up on every street corner for easy access to those who wish to terminate their life” (p.
2).

3. In his research on alcohol and its effect on liver functions, Butler (2017)
hopes / claims that females are more susceptible to the development of cirrhosis by twenty-
five percent.

4. Striker (2016) maintains / imagines that the minimum age to attain a driving licence should
be at 18 years old because international studies show that drivers younger than this are more
likely to be the cause of an accident.

5. Kim (2019) compares / acknowledges that economic reform is essential in order to

revitalise consumer confidence.

6. Barker (2020) instructs / suggests that one reason for the increase in investor visa
applications in Australia is due to Xi Jin Ping’s anti-graft campaign.

7. Marco (2016) reveals / defines technology as “the greatest invention of mankind” (p. 10).

8. In his research, Liu (2019) agrees / compares the paparazzi’s intrusion of privacy to sexual

assault.
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9. Plush (2021) emphasises / reminds the lack of provincial monetary support for the spread

of HIV in Tanzania.

10. Butters (2018) disagrees / observes with Parkers (2010) that the shift in tectonic plates
causes atmospheric instability.

11. Ruth (2016) identifies / claims the possible setbacks in the South Korea’s national stability if
the government does not join forces with the American military.

12. Quill (2015) suggests / discusses the positive effects of meditation as a treatment for
anxiety sufferers in solitary confinement.

13. Davidson (2012) defines / supports the implementation of capital punishment as a

necessity for deterring crime.

14. In his discussion on child brides in Yemen, Telling (2011) highlights / proposes the role of
government authorities and Islamic leaders on this growing problem.

ACTIVITY 2

Change the words given into the word class indicated in the bracket.

WORD NEW WORD

analyse (change to noun) Analysis

analyse (change to adjective) Analytical

evaluation (change to verb) Evaluate

theoretical (change to adverb) Theoretically

problem (change to adjective) Problematic

expect (change to noun) Exception

agree (change to noun) Agreement

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organise (change to adjective) Organsed

prove (change to noun) Proof

violent (change to adverb)

violently
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Violently

ACTIVITY 3

Find a synonym for the underlined words/phrases in the sentences below. Then rewrite
each sentence using the new words/phrases.

1. On the contrary, around 30,000 children may be helped by the proposed “free lunch”
programme if Bush is voted over Kerry.
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n the contrast ,about 30,000

children may be supported by the
advised “free lunch”
programme if Bush is agreed with
Kerry.
n the contrast ,about 30,000
children may be supported by the
advised “free lunch”
programme if Bush is agreed with
Kerry.
In the contrast ,about 30,000
children may be supported by the
advised “free lunch”
programme if Bush is agreed with
Kerry.
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In the contrast ,about 30,000

children may be supported by the
advised “free lunch”
programme if Bush is agreed with
Kerry.
In the contrast ,about 30,000
children may be supported by the
advised “free lunch”
programme if Bush is agreed with
Kerry.
In contrast, nearly 30,000 children may be supported by the advised “free lunch” programme if
Bush is elected over Kerry.

2. As opposed to using fear, all of the pupils in class studied hard when the teacher uses the
inspirational technique. The effect was a big increase in test scores.

Notwithstanding using fear, all of the students in class studied well when the teacher
performs inspirational technique. The impact was a massive growth in test scores.

3. By using cheap paper and ink, the printed documents will be of low quality. This situation
can be avoided by switching to high quality products.

By using inexpensive paper and ink, the printed documents will be of inferior quality. These
circumstances can be evaded by exchanging to high quality goods.
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4. Going for a trip to the beach may not be a good idea compared to going for a city trip. The
weather forecast said that it will be mostly windy and rainy over the next few days as a
strong typhoon is expected to hammer the coast next Wednesday.

Travelling to the beach may not be a good idea in comparison with going for a city trip. The
weather accumulation said that it will be mostly windy and rainy beyond the next rare days as
a powerful typhoon is expected to beat the coast next Wednesday.

5. Similar to schools in Singapore, schools in Malaysia are also employing strict rules when it
comes to smoking. Students can get kicked out if they were caught breaking the school’s
rule.

Same as schools in Singapore, schools in Malaysia are also implementing strict rules
when it comes to smoking. Students can get drop out if they were caught not following the
school’s rule.

ACTIVITY 4

Read the two paraphrases of the original text and highlight statements that best describe the
paraphrases.

Original excerpt:

The United States and Japan are similar when it comes to transforming industrial economies
to knowledge and information-based service economies while manufacturing their products
externally to low wage countries. In a knowledge and information-based economy, knowledge
and information are the key ingredients in creating wealth.

Adapted from: Laudon, K.C., & Laudon, J. (2002). Management information systems: Managing the digital firm.
Prentice Hall.
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Paraphrase 1:

The United States and Japan are the same when it comes to changing industrial economies
to knowledge and information-based service economies as the manufacturing of their
products shifts to low wage countries. In a knowledge and information-based economies,
knowledge and information-based service are the focus in economic growth (Laudon &
Laudon 2002).

Paraphrase 2:

Evolving economies from industrial-based to knowledge and information-based service is a

similarity that both the United States and Japan share as their manufacturing shifts to
countries where wages are low. The profit growth of knowledge and information-based
economy must focus on the knowledge and information factors (Laudon & Laudon, 2002).

a. Paraphrase 1 is unacceptable because it closely follows the sentence structure of the

original.
b. Paraphrase 1 is acceptable because some of the keywords have been changed.
c. Paraphrase 2 is acceptable because both the sentence structure and the keywords have
been changed.
d. Paraphrase 2 is unacceptable because the subject of the first sentence is different from
the original, i.e., ‘dramatic change’ rather than ‘the United States and Japan’.
e. Both paraphrases are acceptable because some of the keywords have been changed.
f. Both paraphrases are not acceptable because the sentence structure has been
changed.