General Statement: ‘A mother is she who can take the place of all others but whose place no one

else
can take’

Thesis Statement: My mother reminds me of the sun; her warmness, hotness and brightness never fails
to amaze and shock me just like the feeling of being treated by a true friend and a fake people.

Topic Sentence 1: A hero full of wounds but she never surrender her battles.

Topic Sentence 2: She means the world to me.

Summary of main Ideas: Her bright smile that can light up the darkness around me cannot be
underestimated. She will always be my flower, a flower which will going to wither in winter but will
bloom again in summer. Her love for me can surpass the highest mountain in the world and her strength
can overcome any trials that will burden our life. She is my hero who is much greater than any treasures
or gems that can found in this world because she is willing to give up every ounce of her blood and her
life just to make sure I can live a happy and a comfortable life. Nothing can beat her, nothing can replace
her and nothing can duplicate her because she is very unique and that she is very powerful in many
ways.

Resolution: Without her, I’m nothing but a rainbow with no colors. My mother is the dearest person to
me and I admire and lover her so much because of her patience, compassion and toughness.

She is like a rose, so tough and so beautiful. She teaches me all that she knows in what she thinks is the
most appropriate time and way, raising me up to be a mature, sensible and strong-minded girl. 

'Mama is the dearest person to you in the world', just as the old song goes. My mom is the dearest person to me and
I admire her because of her patience, compassion and toughness.