Title Sequence Evaluation

How well does it fit with the context of the idea?

I feel like it fits the cosmic and magical feel of the series however I
wish I could’ve added some extra horror elements into it as well, or
maybe add some mor interesting landscapes or background items.
How does your sequence use appropriate characteristics and
conventions?
I feel like my project works fairly well as a title sequence. It shows
off the characters and plot without spoiling too much. It shows
Kumoku’s excitement about the universe, Dueblo’s laziness, Jakko’s
spotlight-hogging nature and Briney’s support for his robotic brother.
It shows the main villain, Tobias Crossbones, without spoiling his
appearance or what he’s going to do. If I were to say anything I feel
like it doesn’t show enough of the plot.
How could it be improved?
I feel like it could have been improved if I had animated the
characters in after effects (using individual parts rather than the whole
artwork) from the very beginning, then I would’ve had time to
animate Kumoku and Dueblo as well. I also don’t like the way the
hooded Kumoku is drawn in the beginning and I also dislike the way
its asset warped in animate. There’s also an outline of white dots that
stays in place during Briney’s scene which really bugs me, I would’ve
removed it if I knew sooner.
How does it compare to your original proposal?
When compared to my original proposal I feel like I may have been a
bit too overly optimistic, as I wouldn’t have been able to make it look
as extravagant as I wanted in the time limit we had. However, it still
kept the cosmic theming and the villain being animated as a
silhouette.
What have you learned and what do you need to develop?
I have learned how to properly puppeteer and asset warp a character
without overly warping it. In terms of developing, I need to work on
my ability to plan ahead, as if I thought about using individual parts to
be warped, then the final product would’ve come out less rushed.