SE Peer Review

Writer: Travis Lorance

Reviewer: Aliya Mamedov

Introduction
They say: “I also feel that as well as a lack of professional and trained resources, there is a lack
of healthy outlets in today's virtual world.”
Three reasons: “Without resources to support student and young adults’ mental health”; “a lack
of professional and trained resources”; “a lack of healthy outlets in today's virtual world”;

Evidence
“Statistics from a survey by the World Health Organization in 2018 indicated that in a pool of
14,000 students across the globe, one in three college freshmen reported battling a mental
health disorder in the years leading up to college.”
“In a 2017 survey by the American College Health Association (ACHA), students reported that
anxiety and depression are among the biggest factors that negatively affect their academic
performance.”

Not enough evidence for all three reasons.

Counter Arguments
There is no counter argument; include a naysayer that disagrees with your beliefs.