The main reason people go to work is to earn money.

To what extend do you

agree or disagree?
Money have been one of the important things for living in this modern epoch. It is
openly argued that the essential cause why society build their career in working to
make money. Personally, I agree that, despite some drawbacks, this issue have
some positive trends for their life now or in the future.
To begin with, why human ought to work to earn necessities is that they need to run
their life effectively. Due to the fact, everything on this earth might need money to
pay the bills. To illustrate, if they get a job, they might have salaries which could be
used to pay their primary and household needs. However, if they are not doing so,
they would be confused to fulfil their needs. Although, they might be able to fulfil their
life because they get an inheritance money, but if they could not be able to manage it
or work, the money would be run out.
Another reason why I agree with this statement is that people might need to have an
emergency savings. Some parts of the world, specifically millennials, are saving their
money either in banks or in stock market to secure their life in the future or for an
emergency use. For instance, they might get into an accident or natural disaster, as
a result, they need more money to pay all damages. In addition, saving money could
help them to acquire their goals such as buying house or even paying fees for
continue their study. Henceforth, by saved their wages, they could survive if they are
in their unfortunate time of live.
To conclude, I agree earning money by working is important for human’s life. These
include fulfilling their primary needs and surviving their life if they are in accidental
conditions.
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A