MODULE 1 / ELng 121

ASSESSMENT 1.1
Name: Logroño, Mutya Kismet A.
Course: BSED-ENGLISH I-A

1. Read the following passage from Encarta Dictionaries.

Question: What does the passage above imply in regard to the use of nouns? (Limit
your answer to 4-5 sentences.)

The passage above from Encarta Dictionaries, suggest that we should be careful in
choosing words to describe things or person to avoid misunderstanding and misconceptions. It
is important to learn and apply the correct usage of noun in each paraphrase, selecting words
without thinking can interrupt your main objective.

2. Rewrite the following passage using Quillbot® emphasizing the replacement

of nouns.
Question: How does Quillbot® affect the use of nouns and our understanding of
sentences?
(Write a sentence-by-sentence analysis/explanation of the Quillbot®-rewritten
passage. Limit each analysis/explanation to 2-3 sentences.)

Original Sentence Rewritten Sentence Analysis

I was… disappointed to find
the shades still drawn and
the family fast asleep when I
unlocked the door and
stepped into the apartment.
I stood in the doorway of
the kitchen… and gazed at
the sleeping figure of my
brother on the daybed in the
dining room, and beyond it
at the closed door of the
one bedroom where my
parents slept.
When I unlocked the door
and entered the apartment, I
was... disappointed to find
the shades still drawn and the
family fast asleep.
I stood in the kitchen
doorway... looking at my
sleeping brother on the
daybed in the dining room,
and beyond that, at the
closed door of the one
bedroom where my parents
slept.
The Quillbot uses a simple
noun. It rephrases the
sentence into a simplified
and organized manner.
Through this, the readers can
easily get and understand
what the sentence is
conveying.
In this sentence, Quillbot
organized the uses of
Collective and compound
nouns. So that, the readers
can understand easily on
what the message is trying to
convey.
The frayed carpet on the
floor was the carpet I had
crawled over before I could
walk.
Each flower in the badly
faded and worn design was
sharply etched in my mind.
Each piece of furniture in
the cramped dim rooms
seemed mildewed with a
thousand double-edged
memories.
The ghosts of a thousand
leaden meals hovered over
the dining-room table.
The dust of countless
black-hearted days clung to
every crevice of the
squalid ugly furniture I had
known since childhood.
Name: Logroño, Mutya Kismet A.
Course: BSED-ENGLISH I-A
I had crawled over the frayed
carpet on the floor before I
could walk.
Every flower in the badly
faded and worn design was
vividly imprinted in my
mind.
Each piece of furniture in the
cramped, dim room seemed
mildewed with a thousand
tainted memories.
The specters of a thousand
leaden meals hung over the
dining-room table.
The dust of countless dark-
hearted days clung to every
crevice of the filthy, ugly
furniture I'd known since
childhood.
The noun carpet is a singular,
common, concrete noun.
Quillbot rephrase this
sentence into direct meaning.
Both concrete and abstract
noun in this sentence is
clearly emphasize. In order to
correct the right passage of
this sentence Quillbot is
trying to replace some words.
The concrete and abstract
noun in this sentence is
almost in correct position,
some words mat change but
same meaning.
'ghost' can be a verb or a
noun and meals is
unaccountable plural noun.
Quillbot rewritten the
passage into more specific
noun so the readers can
understand.
Quillbot rewrite a passage in
a simple noun and abstract
noun in order to flow the
sentence in correct manner
and the words can be
readable and conveying.