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    This document provides feedback on a paper, noting that a quote is attributed to a Professor Beltcher but he is not cited in references. It also points out repetitive statements between two paragraphs and an acronym used without being defined. The document recommends removing the professor's name if he is cited in footnote 5 or defining the acronym BIOC before using it.

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    This document provides feedback on a paper, noting that a quote is attributed to a Professor Beltcher but he is not cited in references. It also points out repetitive statements between two paragraphs and an acronym used without being defined. The document recommends removing the professor's name if he is cited in footnote 5 or defining the acronym BIOC before using it.

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    This document provides feedback on a paper, noting that a quote is attributed to a Professor Beltcher but he is not cited in references. It also points out repetitive statements between two paragraphs and an acronym used without being defined. The document recommends removing the professor's name if he is cited in footnote 5 or defining the acronym BIOC before using it.

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    On page 3 Professor Beltcher is quoted. Who is he? Is he your professor?

    You are quoting him but he is


    not mentioned anywhere in your footnotes or works cited page If it is coming from your #5 footnote, it
    is better to leave out the name and begin the quote with “

    Page 4, you have a repetitive statement in the first paragraph and the 2 nd paragraph..

    Bottom of page 4, you use the acronym (BIOC) but I cannot see what that acronym stands for. The
    meaning of the acronym should have been used immediately prior to parenthesis and then the acronym
    can be used from that point going forward.

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