UNIT 12 SPECIALIST STUDY

Peer Feedback Form

Overall rate the student’s documentary based on the following criteria
Comment on each
YOUR NAME: Jamie C

STUDENT NAME: Jamie S

DOCUMENTARY TITLE: Monetisation in gaming

WORD COUNT SHOULD TOTAL 1500 FOR BOTH DOCUMENTS

PROPOSAL WORD COUNT: 380

TREATMENT WORD COUNT: 295

SCRIPT WORD COUNT: 1023 (1698)

PASS / FAIL: PASS

DOCUMENTARY STRUCTURE PRESENT

Introduction to the topic Yes

Brief History of topic Yes

Has technology has influenced your topic yes

Key people in the industry yes

Key techniques associated with the topic yes

Interviews with people discussing the topic yes

Conclusion that evaluates your chosen topic and why it is important to the esports yes
industry
Pacing and timing: I think the pacing was a little slow and could have been sped up more
however the video was over 8 minutes so the timing is fine.

Clarity of information: I think the information is really well presented. I can tell he did his
research and planned the video out well.

THANK YOU FOR COMPLETING THIS FORM